To reviewer missradcliffe: What spelling must I check? I understand that you are saying that whatever mistakes I made are minor, but after going over the first chapter again, I can not find any of those minor mistakes that you may have noticed. All the spelling has been checked by not only me but also a recent updated version of spell check in Microsoft Word. Though spell check in Microsoft Word is not always reliable, which I am familiar with; my writing has also been edited by many others. If it isn't any consolation to you or anyone else, please point out these mistakes in order for me to learn from them and no longer make them again. Thank you greatly for reading my fic.
To reviewer Maria: "not much dialogue". Hmmm… I hope you were able to see that my style of writing is not written to be a screen play of some sort. Maybe it is not evident from what you read that this fic will be very internal rather then external to get you into the characters mind, train of thought, and the internal conflict within. I am not J.K. Rowling and I do not intend to be. I'm not attempting to write like her, though I admire her work very much. It is still very early in this fic and so I can not promise this but possibly there may be more dialogue in further chapters. Thank you so much for reading my first fic and your much appreciated review.
