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CHAPTER FIVE: ALANNA'S LOVE AT FRIST SIGHT.
Delia fell off her chair when Alanna came down the stairs. She was an amazing young girl. She wore a long flowing red gown trimmed in gold around the neck. Her skirt hem had a pattern of Dragons climbing up her skirts to her bodice. Around her neck was a ruby on a gold chain, and she wore an Elvin style tiara that had gold and rubies that matched her gown. Her long curly hair was pinned up and fell like water. But around her waist was a golden sword with a ruby hilt.
Thom was a stunning sight to many ladies. He wasn't as handsome as their prince but in that half year he had grown two heads and look very fine if you asked many of them. He wore a red tunic that was trimmed in gold. His breeches were red and like his sister's gown he had an immortal climbing up his clothing too. But his was a Phoenix instead of a dragon. He wore a sun shaped amulet in ruby and on a golden chain. He also wore an Elvin crown on his head made of rubies and gold. His boots were black and his under tunic white. But what made him most attractive was his hair. It was medium/short and curly hair; it was also a more darker hair colour than his sister's fire red colour.
He also wore a gold and ruby sword around his waist. Jon sighed a sigh of relief that his Squire's secret was revealed along with his sisters. To him she was the most beautiful woman in the world right now. "Your Majesties, we bring gifts from our Grandfather, The Emperor James of Bystine, in hopes that you would honor our family here and in Bystine." With that the twins bowed again and Alanna give the Queen her box and Thom the King's and Prince's.
The Queen opened her box to show a Diamond pendant. Which had rubies, sapphires and emeralds surrounding the diamond. All of this was on a solid sliver chain. The Queen was shocked. All she could say was, "many thanks" and that she would say a blessing for her family. Then she put the beautiful gift on her neck.
The King and Prince opened their gifts. They were beautiful swords; Jon's was sliver and sapphires. The hilt wound and twisted like fire and Jon was in shock. He replaced his sword with this new one in its sheath. The King's was exactly the same but gold and Diamonds. "Thank you Highnesses and Lord Alan. Your noble court humbles us greatly."
The music began to play and the Prince rose to meet in front of Alanna. He was an amazing sight. his hair was the same as Thom's and his clothing was the same style as Thom's. But the Prince's were velvet and trimmed in sliver. The material was royal blue and his crown was silver and sapphires. He also wore his new sword in his holder. (A/N: Jon and Thom's hair is like Orlando Bloom's in Pirates in the Caribbean.)
"My I have this dance, Princess? He asked Alanna. "Yes," she answered
With that they began to dance and at that moment Alanna knew that she and the Prince were made for each other.
CHAPTER FIVE: ALANNA'S LOVE AT FRIST SIGHT.
Delia fell off her chair when Alanna came down the stairs. She was an amazing young girl. She wore a long flowing red gown trimmed in gold around the neck. Her skirt hem had a pattern of Dragons climbing up her skirts to her bodice. Around her neck was a ruby on a gold chain, and she wore an Elvin style tiara that had gold and rubies that matched her gown. Her long curly hair was pinned up and fell like water. But around her waist was a golden sword with a ruby hilt.
Thom was a stunning sight to many ladies. He wasn't as handsome as their prince but in that half year he had grown two heads and look very fine if you asked many of them. He wore a red tunic that was trimmed in gold. His breeches were red and like his sister's gown he had an immortal climbing up his clothing too. But his was a Phoenix instead of a dragon. He wore a sun shaped amulet in ruby and on a golden chain. He also wore an Elvin crown on his head made of rubies and gold. His boots were black and his under tunic white. But what made him most attractive was his hair. It was medium/short and curly hair; it was also a more darker hair colour than his sister's fire red colour.
He also wore a gold and ruby sword around his waist. Jon sighed a sigh of relief that his Squire's secret was revealed along with his sisters. To him she was the most beautiful woman in the world right now. "Your Majesties, we bring gifts from our Grandfather, The Emperor James of Bystine, in hopes that you would honor our family here and in Bystine." With that the twins bowed again and Alanna give the Queen her box and Thom the King's and Prince's.
The Queen opened her box to show a Diamond pendant. Which had rubies, sapphires and emeralds surrounding the diamond. All of this was on a solid sliver chain. The Queen was shocked. All she could say was, "many thanks" and that she would say a blessing for her family. Then she put the beautiful gift on her neck.
The King and Prince opened their gifts. They were beautiful swords; Jon's was sliver and sapphires. The hilt wound and twisted like fire and Jon was in shock. He replaced his sword with this new one in its sheath. The King's was exactly the same but gold and Diamonds. "Thank you Highnesses and Lord Alan. Your noble court humbles us greatly."
The music began to play and the Prince rose to meet in front of Alanna. He was an amazing sight. his hair was the same as Thom's and his clothing was the same style as Thom's. But the Prince's were velvet and trimmed in sliver. The material was royal blue and his crown was silver and sapphires. He also wore his new sword in his holder. (A/N: Jon and Thom's hair is like Orlando Bloom's in Pirates in the Caribbean.)
"My I have this dance, Princess? He asked Alanna. "Yes," she answered
With that they began to dance and at that moment Alanna knew that she and the Prince were made for each other.
