Hey everyone, This is the re-modeling of chap. 14. I have edited versions of chapters 8-13 are posted. Hope this makes it a little more clear when U guys read it. Also it's a little longer. I'm making a new story called " The star of Alfea." Which is a fan fiction story about the Winx Club T.V show. Since there is no Winx Club category it will be under Crossovers. Go read it when I have it up in a couple weeks. I promise to update all stories soon.
Love U all Lots
LOUISE
Chapter Fourteen: Dealings of a Thief.
Year Later........
Alanna the lioness lifted her heavy feet up the massive stair case and with each step it got worse. Once she reach the top of the marble case. She began to march down the hall to Duke Roger's Chambers. She found inside a fountain with a doll in the Queen's favorite dress withering away and dummies of her-self, the King and the Prince.
This affirmed all of her accusation about her soon to be cousin-in-law. As she closed the heavy door to the room. She made her way though the silent halls of Corus Palace and making her way too the Dancing Dove too meet Ambika and George.
For the last year Roger had tried to kill her with poison, snakes to spoke her horse, icy water dunking and messing with her family. Also trying to kill with her almost new family as well. Alanna had always known that he was trying to kill people she loved and now she had the proof to prove it.
"Alanna lass, aren't ye going to eat that." George called thought her day dream. She looked up to see the thief with his arm around is now Girl friend Ambika. He was not exactly handsome as her lover. But he could pass on her standards for her cousin. But to Ambika he was the sun and the moon and he was more handsome the Jon any day. One problem he was the king of thieves and a commoner.
"Oh thinking to hard, what did you say George?"
"Are you going to eat that?"
"No"
"Can I have it then."
"Ya you may."
"Alanna, you have your proof so why not crush him now?" Asked Ambika.
"Cus that would be un-wise."
"Why, what's wrong."
"Timing that's what's off."
Now George was good at picking out the route of un-known conversations but right now he was getting nothing. And not liking it at all. "Come now girls, what are ye lasses taken about?"
"Duke roger" they both said in to hush whispers
"Why, Ye two are saying that you actually believe that he is responsible for all the misshapes. I wouldn't doubt it. Many believe that he's out for the crown and you, Princess."
"Hearing you say that sends shivers down my spin George."
"Mine too." Added Ambika
"Well I believe both of you. Alanna you are write timing is every thing."
"Thanks George." They coursed
"We got to go but come to the ball as a Knight Scribe. Thom said he would play along telling people he was teaching you Spanish. If you want."
"Thanks Lanny. I will"
"Here's your invite."
"Thanks"
Ambika kiss him good bye and Alanna said good bye. They crossed they dove to the door. Pushing their way thought and saying good Bye as they went. Alanna push the Inn door open and walk into the fresh air. Toke a deep breath and clamed down every nerve in her body and began to walk to the palace. A walk was long and Silent. Neither girl said anything to each other. Alanna decided tomorrow she would make her move.
As the sun shown thought the heavy drapes and into the already warm room. Making it even more un-comfortable. Alanna the lioness rustled under her blanks dreaming of Duke Roger laughing at her while she laid helpless to stop him. She rose from her be with a scream and flung the covers off her sweat strewn body. "Today is the day, this night I will duel or maybe die by the hands off Duke Roger." Thought Alanna as the door to her room was flung open.
GOOD? BAD? UGLY? TELL ME. LOUISE
