Rhyth hadn't gotten very far when she was caught and her arms held by two
Poison Jam members , who skated her back to Cube's personal territory and
home.Cube lived in one of the old abandoned houses at the top of Rokkaku-
Dai heights , and she sat on a chair with her rollerblades to the side and
she wore black worn sneakers. The two gang members skated in , and held her
still as she struggled.
"Leave me alone with her," Cube commanded. The two oafs dropped her in a chair across from Cube , then skated out. They silently jumped up and grinded * down the wire that went up to Cube's home. (a/n: * yes , 'grinded'. 'Ground' is a different ise of this verb and the game must use slang therefore that is my interpretation of their grammar) Rhyth stared at her rollerblades , examining the two spike like things that protruded from the back of her skates.
"Rhyth..." Cube began , then paused and pursed her lips. Rhyth wouldn't look at her. "It's been a long time Rhyth. I have an idea why you've returned , but we can't shelter you on these grounds. This is Poison Jam exclusive grounds , and the others will not stand to protect a GG," .
"But- I could join again , couldn't I?" Rhyth said daringly.
"Rhyth , you know I wouldn't allow it. You have the markings of a leader as I do.You know that the order of Poison Jam life," Cube said monotone. She stroked the tattoo on her shoulder , thinking about it.
"Why won't you just let me be like one of the other girls?!" Rhyth argued , frustration from her past returning. Cube frowned at her.
"You will be escourted back to the GGs immediately. You are being sent to your leader , Corn," Cube said , then snapped her fingers. Two Poison Jam members stepped into the house , hauling Rhyth out of her seat by her arms , then taking her down the wire.
When they reached the tunnel , the two stopped. Rhyth knew what was happening and she had no right to fight back because she knew the rules. One pulled out a blade and silently made a small cut on Rhyth's right cheek*.(a/n: under the tattoo) A thin stream of blood ran down as the guy cleaned the blade with an aqua rag and put it away once more. Then they skated into the dark tunnel towards the GG's hangout , where they would see her safely from harm until she was delivered to Corn...
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Tallulah:
To say the least , I'm glad that your review wasn't the worst. I do have a tendency to speed things up in the beginning , but I have to get the storyline down. Anyway , I hope I wiped out any concerns about grammar with 'grind'.
Me:
And to you , I have nothing to say that isn't censored. Do you know what I find pathetic? Reviewers who don't know how to offer constructive critisizm. Seriously , you need to take a lesson from Tallulah about this writing that you don't seem to be an expert in. ((:p no one asked for dirty play , and I AM not five years old))
"Leave me alone with her," Cube commanded. The two oafs dropped her in a chair across from Cube , then skated out. They silently jumped up and grinded * down the wire that went up to Cube's home. (a/n: * yes , 'grinded'. 'Ground' is a different ise of this verb and the game must use slang therefore that is my interpretation of their grammar) Rhyth stared at her rollerblades , examining the two spike like things that protruded from the back of her skates.
"Rhyth..." Cube began , then paused and pursed her lips. Rhyth wouldn't look at her. "It's been a long time Rhyth. I have an idea why you've returned , but we can't shelter you on these grounds. This is Poison Jam exclusive grounds , and the others will not stand to protect a GG," .
"But- I could join again , couldn't I?" Rhyth said daringly.
"Rhyth , you know I wouldn't allow it. You have the markings of a leader as I do.You know that the order of Poison Jam life," Cube said monotone. She stroked the tattoo on her shoulder , thinking about it.
"Why won't you just let me be like one of the other girls?!" Rhyth argued , frustration from her past returning. Cube frowned at her.
"You will be escourted back to the GGs immediately. You are being sent to your leader , Corn," Cube said , then snapped her fingers. Two Poison Jam members stepped into the house , hauling Rhyth out of her seat by her arms , then taking her down the wire.
When they reached the tunnel , the two stopped. Rhyth knew what was happening and she had no right to fight back because she knew the rules. One pulled out a blade and silently made a small cut on Rhyth's right cheek*.(a/n: under the tattoo) A thin stream of blood ran down as the guy cleaned the blade with an aqua rag and put it away once more. Then they skated into the dark tunnel towards the GG's hangout , where they would see her safely from harm until she was delivered to Corn...
(a/n)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Tallulah:
To say the least , I'm glad that your review wasn't the worst. I do have a tendency to speed things up in the beginning , but I have to get the storyline down. Anyway , I hope I wiped out any concerns about grammar with 'grind'.
Me:
And to you , I have nothing to say that isn't censored. Do you know what I find pathetic? Reviewers who don't know how to offer constructive critisizm. Seriously , you need to take a lesson from Tallulah about this writing that you don't seem to be an expert in. ((:p no one asked for dirty play , and I AM not five years old))
