okie sorry for the late update..i couldn't find where the slip of paper where i wrote this flew to..ehehe..anyhows when i reread this i thought it might suit as hiei's response..so read n enjoy..if u don't enjoy it..do tell me how improve itk?

Sunlight

You held out your hand

To me

The Forbidden child

I pushed you away

For fear of being hurt all over again

Like all those times

When others spun webs

Of lies and deceit

Around my heart

Why should you be any different?

For the youko is the master of all deceits

Yet your human half threatened to melt

The ice fortress in my heart

Red silky tresses, serene emerald orbs

Brought out peace in me

That I never knew existed

Even though I pushed you away time and again

You still offer to pull me up

Whenever I stumble and fall

Eternal rain that roared on in my heart

Suppresses me

As I sank to the ground, shivering

Darkness and cold so overwhelming

Overpowering my scarred heart

Yet the fog dissipated slightly

When your clear voice called out my name

Those compassionate eyes

That mirrors your soul

Looked on in silent sympathy

As if wishing to take the burden

Of my weary shoulders

Yet again you held out your hand to me

And at last my stubbornness admitted defeat

As your perseverance destroyed

The last of my crumbling barriers

With my calloused hand hands in your slender ones

You pulled me up

With surprising strength and grace

It was then I realized

The rain has stopped pouring

As the heavy dark clouds parted way

To the brightest ray of sunlight

by

YM Lee

23/08/04

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