okie sorry for the late update..i couldn't find where the slip of paper where i wrote this flew to..ehehe..anyhows when i reread this i thought it might suit as hiei's response..so read n enjoy..if u don't enjoy it..do tell me how improve itk?
Sunlight
You held out your hand
To me
The Forbidden child
I pushed you away
For fear of being hurt all over again
Like all those times
When others spun webs
Of lies and deceit
Around my heart
Why should you be any different?
For the youko is the master of all deceits
Yet your human half threatened to melt
The ice fortress in my heart
Red silky tresses, serene emerald orbs
Brought out peace in me
That I never knew existed
Even though I pushed you away time and again
You still offer to pull me up
Whenever I stumble and fall
Eternal rain that roared on in my heart
Suppresses me
As I sank to the ground, shivering
Darkness and cold so overwhelming
Overpowering my scarred heart
Yet the fog dissipated slightly
When your clear voice called out my name
Those compassionate eyes
That mirrors your soul
Looked on in silent sympathy
As if wishing to take the burden
Of my weary shoulders
Yet again you held out your hand to me
And at last my stubbornness admitted defeat
As your perseverance destroyed
The last of my crumbling barriers
With my calloused hand hands in your slender ones
You pulled me up
With surprising strength and grace
It was then I realized
The rain has stopped pouring
As the heavy dark clouds parted way
To the brightest ray of sunlight
by
YM Lee
23/08/04
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