Disclaimer: Again- I dont own any of the characters

OK- yea- this chapter is gonna be longer than my previous two and a lot is gonna happen in it. It's starting off when Hermione and Ron are already inside Harry's brain...

"Wow Ron, I never thought that somebody's subconscious could be so dark. I can hardly see where I'm going." Hermione whispered.

"Hermy, be quiet." Ron said softly. "Wait...who is that figure up ahead?"

Standing about 10 feet in front of them was a figure that looked like Harry. Only, it couldn't have been because it was dressed in Slytherin robes and an evil vibe was radiating from it. Also, it's eyes were deep, blood red and the famous scar was torn open into what looked like a black hole. It must have been a portal of some sort because they could hear evil words, but it's lips weren't moving. Then it dawned on them...

"Ron, Ron I figured it out!" screamed Hermione.

This was a bad idea because now, a shadow started to crawl out of the scar. Slowly, almost snake-like, it came crawling, sliding slowly down the Slytherin Harry's body. Slytherin Harry did not even flinch, and they saw that he was being controlled by Voldermort. When the shadow finally came fully through and stepped out of the dark, misty form, they knew that for sure it was He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named.

"Hermione, we have got to get out of here." said Ron as he was slowly backing away. Suddenly, a flash of light, and then Hermione saw Ron lying on the ground. She went over to him and saw that he was still breathing, but he was unconscious. When she looked up, she saw it was the Slytherin Harry with his hand up and a wand in it. Voldermort was behind him, controlling his every move.

"Harry, this is your best friend. We are your best friends. Do you really want to hurt us like this, do you want to kill us or torture us? We stuck by you through everything. Harry, dont you remember me? Don't you remember him? Remember us? Hermione and Ron? Do you remember?" Hermione cried out through her tears.

She looked up at Harry and saw a flash of his normal green eyes, stricken with regret, but then they turned back to red.

"Harry, fight this please! I know you can! You have defeated him before." Hermione sobbed.

Hermione saw Harry return to normal just long enough to drop his wand. Then, back to Voldermort's mind-control.

Just then, Ron screamed out from his unconscious state. Hermione could tell that he was dreaming all the horrible things that had happened to him before. She could tell that Voldermort was boring the images into his mind, almost like a dementor. She knew he would be scarred if they didn't get out of here soon. But Hermione had no idea how to escape, she had only known how to get into Harry's mind. Just then, Ron starting shivering like crazy. 'He's gonna die soon if I dont get him out of here' she thought, 'And it's gonna be all my fault.' She wished that they had never gone on this adventure...

:Flashback:

After a moment Hermione said grimly, "and Ron, this is really dangerous..."

"Umm... how dangerous Hermione?" Ron asked reluctantly.

"We could kill ourselves and make Harry remain in a stupor for the rest of his life if we do something wrong in there."

"I don't think that this is a good idea then..." Ron said with a knot in his stomach.

"We will be fine." Hermione said. "I have faith in you, we will be just fine."

:End Flashback:

Ron now started kicking and she could feel him getting drenched. 'I can't believe I put him through this.' She thought. 'I wish we had told somebody that we were doing this. They could have saved us'

Just then, she heard Harry start to scream. She could see him on the ground trying to fight Voldermort's control.

"Her-her-hermi-hermioneee, g-get out a-of hEEEAHHHHH!" Harry said ending in a scream.

"I can't Harry! I'm not leaving Ron or you alone with HIM!" Hermione said pointing to Voldermort. Just then she saw a flash of light and braced herself for the hit, but nothing happened. She looked up and saw the most horrible sight. Harry was lying face down on the ground in a pool of what looked like black and green blood. 'But where is Voldermort?' Hermione thought.

"I'm riiight here." hissed a cool, bone-chilling voice.

"What have you done to my friends?" Hermione asked defiantly. 'And how can he read my thoughts?' she wondered with a shiver.

"I can read your thoughtssss becausssse you are in my mind." Voldermort hissed.

"I'm not in your mind, I'm in Harry's." Hermione said forcefully.

"Mudbloodssss, they know not a thing. Mine and Harry's minds are connected, so I can control hisssss thoughtssss and feelingssss." Voldermort stated. "And since you are in his mind, I can read your thoughtssss and he can too."

"O, and your friendssss will die here with me!" Voldermort laughed. He then grew, and grew, and grew, to about 5 times the size he was. "And I, the mossssst powerful wizard ever will kill them mysssself, and trap you here to watch their bodiessss rot."

:In the meanwhile, outside Harry's body:

"Dumbledore, quick, something is wrong with Harry!"

Ahh... cliffhanger endings- aren't they great?

More to come soon… sorry for the long wait.