Well here is chapter 6..Enjoy and REVIEW!
Ohh..and I'd like to thank all of you who have kept on Reviewing my stories..it really means alot and when I say " all of you " I mean all of you!
And just to make this clear because I've received comments like this..Yes the characters are a bit OC..
Sakura is OCbecause she is the bitch in my story..and no one knows for sure what Tenten is really like because she practically isn't even in the show..Neji needs to be a bit OC because if he stayed cold and emotionless..you can't get anywhere really with a character like that in a love story..I mean come on (my thought)
The characters in this chapter are going to be more OC than usual..be warned
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Chapter 6
The warm sun shined through the window in Tenten's room. It was about 1:00 pm when she woke up to the alarm clock that was set for about 6:30 am and was still playing. Tenten looked at her clock then back at her pillow.
She couldn't decide whether she should get up and make use of this beautiful, warm sunny day or waste the day sleeping because there was absolutly no way in hell that she could face Neji..ever again. Tenten turned off her alarm clock, pulled up her covers and layed her head back down onto her pillow. She was almost asleep again when someone came banging on her door..
"Tenten..Tenten..come quick there was an accident..hurry!"
( Lee's voice..he sounds distressed..something horriable must have happend! )
"I'm coming Lee hold on I'll be right there!" yelled Tenten.
Tenten dove into her super messy closet trying to find her good sneakers underneath all her old sneakers. She was pretty much swimming in shoes. Her shoes where flying in all directions..left, right, up and down hitting her bed and walls, making holes until she finally found them (just picture this scene..hehe 00)
Tenten jumped on her bed, put on her shoes and bolted to her front door. She was running so fast that she forgot to stop and..CRASH, BOOM, BANG..Tenten ran straight through her wooden door and out her apartment.
"Tenten..you can't believe what happend..it's soo bad..it's horriable..it's Sakura-chan..!" Lee said sobbing and trying to breathe.
"What about Sakura..did she get a brush stuck in her hair?" asked Tenten.
"Noo..worse (Lee says in a whisper) shes dead Tenten..."
Tenten looked at Lee who had his head down and had turned away from her..
( Sakura's dead...but I just saw her yesterday and she was fine...if what you call "fine", a prissy loser who has no life other than trying to impress Sasuke..then yeah she was "fine"..but in a day she dies..Oh no was it brain damage did I do it..Oh no I'm a murder! )
"Lee, how did she die..was it brain damage or chuncks of vase stuck in her brain..how did she die..tell me now!" Tenten yells at Lee while shaking him back and fourth.
Lee grabbed Tenten's wrists and told her of how Sakura's death came to be...
( 5 minutes later you see a very shocked Tenten..)
"Thats how she died...you mean to tell me that she died from nail polish..what did she do lock herself in an room with no windows or fresh air and breath in the fumes causing her to posion her brain and damage her brain cells..and what..then are you going to tell me that she didn't die exactly from the fumes but instead she passed out then hit her hand against her hair straightener causing it to fall to her flammable puffy pink fake rug setting it on fire burning her house down and her along with it..hmmm! replied Tenten putting her hands on her hips.
Just then a fire truck full of "Fire Ninjas" drove by..
"Yes..!" yelled Lee with tears flying out of his eyes like two little waterfalls.
Tenten dropped her hands from her hips and put them on Lee's shoulders..Tenten was very sorry not for Sakura but for Lee he really liked her and so did Naruto, even Sasuke seemed to have some feelings for her. Even though she was a bitch she still would have became a great Ninja..oh well too bad thats what happends when you try to look good...Beauty is painful. Just then Neji walked up to them.
"I'm guessing you guys heard the news..everyone is so upset though I can't see why?" Neji said to his team in his emotionless voice like usual.
"I'm going to go help the Fire Ninjas find her ashes.. I'll be back later." and with that Lee left Neji and Tenten.
Tenten looked at Neji then down at her shoes. She felt very uncomfortable around him even though he was like her best friend she still couldn't hold back the true feelings she had for him.
Just then Temari came up to them. Temari and Tenten over the years became great friends they were both evenly matched in stamina and jutsus..but Tenten over powered her in strength and weapon throwing. They let the battle of the Chunnin exams stay in the past so it wouldn't affect their friendship. Maybe Temari could help her open up to Neji...( I mean her and Shikamaru have been dating for a while so she knows the right things to say to a man..Yeah she could help me for sure! ) thought Tenten.
"Well see ya around.." Neji said to Tenten walking away and not looking back. Neji liked Tenten just like Tenten liked him, but he wasn't sure how he should tell her..its not really like him to go and tell people how he feels even if it is Tenten.."maybe she will tell me first" is all Neji could hope for.
As Neji walked away into the horizen Tenten turned to Temari..
"Temari..I need your help.."
Heheh..your all going tobeat me bacause its too short right.. well heyy I don't have all day to write a story!
Anyway next chapter Temari is going to help Tenten..even Shikamaru is going to be brought into this...and yes I like Temari + Shika!
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