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Annmarie Aspasia: Thats very kind of you but i don't want to be a big bother to you...thx for the review.
Anonymous : Sorry i took so long...
lionessoftortall: The reason i made Alanna a lil goofy is because if she wasn't it wouldn't fit to the plot but dun worry about George i have plans for him Thx for the review!
Skysong : I have some spelling mistakes? Next time i'll be a little more careful... Thx for the review!
Sea Avadelle Sisters: I really happy that you liked it! I can't belive i made stupid lil mistakes like that i'll be more creful next time. Thx for the review!
BlueSword16 : Um no eng wasn't my first language lolz Thx for the review!
Queen Alanna: Thx for the positive review!
chicken puffs: Keeping Jon and Alanna in character like in the books is hard because it's a modern day fic and Jon and Alanna real chracter won't fit into the plot properly But i'll try anyways, thx for the review.
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Alanna stifled a yawn as she rose from her bed. She had gotten use to living alone in her own apartment. Her father usually sent her money every month to pay off her bills and gave her an allowance but she didn't want that. Being sixteen, she needed more than food and shelter. She groaned as she remembered having detention this afternoon. She opened her draw and quickly pulled on her school uniform, brushed her hair and swung her bag over her shoulders, then opened the door. Just as she stepped outside her apartment about five water balloons flew in her direction. It hit her directly on the head and the last pink one sent a killing blow on her forehead. Then she felt her pants slip from her waist as she glared at the hands that pulled them down, but to her great horror, it had revealed her pink flowery under wear. She was trembling with anger when she heard the insane laughter from her worst enemy.
"JONATHANNNNNNNNNNN!" she shrieked as she stomped her foot in frustration as she pulled her pants up. Her amethyst eyes glared dangerously at Jonathan. Jonathan howled in laughter as he took some photos with his camera phone. Jonathan was only three metres away from her when she lunged at him and her fist contacted with his right eye. Her face was beetroot red as she gave him another hard punch on his left cheek. To her surprised, Jonathan was howling in laughter. She would've killed him right there if it wasn't for the person that pulled her away from him.
"Let me go!" Alanna bellowed as she turned to face the person. Her amethyst eyes met his beautiful hazel eyes.
"Killing him won't do anything Alanna," he whispered, then he turned to Jonathan, "I think you should put some ice on that".
Jonathan winced as he looked at George Cooper in distain. George was obviously more popular than girls than he was because of his wealth and the women's desire to marry in the Cooper's family, but he was clearly better looking and he was fairly wealthy. George made it clear that they were rivals from the moment Jonathan Conte entered his school ground.
"C'mon" George said pulling Alanna with him. Jonathan grinned as he watched them and then laughed as an evil idea pooped into his head.
"You're messing with the wrong person," Jonathan whispered as he got to his feet.
It wasn't till the second period when Alanna started to get rather annoyed. She didn't know why people were pointing and laughing at her in her class. She was sited alone in the front row in science class, scribing away on her note pad. She giggled silently to herself as she looked at her masterpiece on the notepad that said " Killing Jonathan Conte". Alanna glanced behind her to where Jonathan sat, he was smiling broadly, but his right eye was slightly swollen. The bell rang which indicated that it was lunchtime. Everyone rushed out of the classroom; well that's what she thought, as Alanna smiled to herself.
"Meet me at the library if you dare" somebody whispered in her ears. Alanna jumped as she glared at Jonathan, he smiled at her as she shook her fist at him.
"I'll give you another black eye in the library" Alanna muttered as she packed her belongings.
Alanna took a deep breath as she now stood in front of the library door, What ever Jonathan had in mind; she would wipe that smile off his pretty face. She walked in as her heart dropped. Jonathan held a poster of her in her pink flowery underpants with the heading, "Latest discovery! World's geek wears pink flowery underwear!"
Her face was a flamed red and everyone around her howled in laughter. She could feel tears swelling in her eyes as she ran and retreated to the only place where she could be alone…the toilet. She slammed the door shut as she cursed herself for not seeing that coming. She bit hard on her trembling lips as she took out her lunch and began to eat as tears fell from her eyes.
"Why is my life so hard?" Alanna asked herself as tears flowed continuously down her eyes, "Mum…. I wish you were still here…w-why do you have to leave me?"
There was a beeping sound as Alanna pulled put her half broken phone. It was a message saying "I want to see you…meet me at the front gate..."
Her heart skipped a beat, could it be? Could it be her best friend and her secret lover?
Jonathan glanced around him.
Where is she? Jonathan thought, maybe I did go too far…
It was the fourth period and being a geek like her…a geek never miss any classes and she had already missed 2 of her classes. Jonathan couldn't help but feel a little guilty of what he had done.
But she started it, Jonathan thought as he glanced out of the window of his English classroom. To his surprise there was a girl with the same flamed red hair and the same bag as Alanna. Then it hit him she was Alanna. Jonathan watched her as a rather large man with spike hair put a motorcycle helmet on her head. The motorcycle looked rather familiar and so do the man, be he shrugged it off.
Who is that guy? A Killer? Brother? Boyfriend? Oh shit…it could be a Rapist! His mind raced. (A/n Rapist? Where did that come from?)
"Jonathan?" the teacher bellowed.
"What?" Jonathan snapped as he got to her feet and swung his bag over his shoulders.
"Where do you think you're going?" The short and a rather ugly female teacher shriek.
"I got to go..." Jonathan said as he ran out of the room with the teacher screaming at him to get back. If anything bad happens to her, it would be his fault and he would never forgive himself. He stopped in his track.
Why should I care? He questioned himself, then shrugged the thought away and ran towards his motorcycle
"You're here," She murmured as she help tightly onto his waist.
"I'm here," he whispered back.
"Am I dreaming?" she asked as she rested her head on his back, "If I am I want to keep on dreaming".
"No…I'm really here…why are you crying my love?" he asked
"Because…"
"I've missed you," he murmured as he sped them down the quiet street with his motorcycle.
"Why did you have to take so long? Is Thom back here as well…? He said it would take two more month," Alanna questioned.
"I came here earlier because…" he voice trailed off.
"Because?" Alanna asked.
"Because I wanted to see you…"
End of chappie! Mystery man aahha so evil I know. I know you probably think that this chapter sucked like chap one…and I probably get flamed again but oh well… Thx anyways
Flamers:
dragon lady : Well if thats what you think then you can at least tell me what made it "the worst Alanna in present" fic. I'm not trying to be mean but your words nearly made me quit writting. And i'll tell you what? I'm not quitting just because of what you said.
Lady Knight Maud: You may be a better writer than me and i respect your opinion but Jon is kinda of an idiot in the book and Alanna does have a temper.
Sorry if i do make some tiny mistakes...i rushed it.
