I know that the last chapter was kind of short and went by fast but I promise that this chapter and the rest to come will be much better and more detailed.

Chapter2: Being Lost Isn't As Fun As It Sounds

Jenna woke up under the shade of a big tree. She looked around and saw the beach and the sand. The plane was still on fire and people were walking around the beach searching for anything that wasn't burned. "Shit, it wasn't just a dream" she said to herself. She struggled to stand herself up and was moaning from being sore from the crash. "Why did this happen to me" she asked herself. "It happened to all of us not just you" a man said pretty angry. Jenna recognized him as the one who had helped her up after the crash. "Oh, I'm sorry. I didn't mean it that way. I'm Jenna by the way. Thanks for yesterday. You know, helping me get up." " I'm Sean. You shouldn't be thanking me. I should be thanking you. You saved so many peoples lives yesterday. You are a hero."

Jenna didn't think of herself as a hero. The more she thought of it she felt like a useless bum. After thinking about it for a few minuets she realized she had to go to the bathroom. But where? She didn't want to use a tree so she decided that she could use the planes bathroom. She walked over to the bathroom and grabbed the handle. She jumped back in pain. The handle for bathroom was really hot. She reached for the handle one more time and got through the pain and got the door unlocked. She pushed the door open and… "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh". Jenna was now facing the man that had ran into the bathroom before the plane crashed. He was sitting on the toilet with his pants at his knees. He was burnt to a crisp and obviously dead. "I am just going to have to hold it as long as I can.". Sean started walking toward her "Jenna, Jenna" he yelled. Sean was holding the little girl that Jenna had saved yesterday. "Jenna would you watch her for me? I'm going to explore to see if I can find the other part of the plane" he said. "Um… where's her mother" Jenna asked. "She left last night. She said something about finding her son" he replied. "Oh, poor woman. Alright I will watch her." Sean handed Jenna the little girl and walked into the forest.

"So what's your name little girl?" "My name is Amanda. I'm 4 years old and I want my mommy to bring Andrew back." "Andrew?" Jenna asked. "Andrew is my brother. He flew out of the airplane. I'm scared." A tear rolls down Amanda's cheek and Jenna held her close to her. "Amanda, do you want to go to meet my friend John? He is really nice." "Ok. Do you like him?" Amanda said giving a little giggle. "I like him as a friend. Come on lets go." Jenna and Amanda walked over to John who sitting in the shade of a tree with 3 other people. One was an old woman in her 60's. Then there was an old man sitting next to the lady holding her hand. Jenna assumed they were husband and wife. The other person sitting next to John was a woman in her 40's. She was wearing a brown uniform with a name tag that said Suzy L. Jenna and Amanda sat down next to the old couple.

"Well I work in a zoo and I was picking up 2 polar bears to transfer from Australia to Los Angeles. When the plane went down all I could think about was my bears. Well as you have noticed there are no bears here. Even if they had survived the crash they would never survive the hot climate of this island." Sara L. said. "Poley Bears?" said Amanda with an excited look on her face "I wuv poley bears. Me, mommy, and Andrew saw them at the zoo before we got on the airplane". Jenna just stared at Amanda thinking how it must be for this little girl to be stuck on this island. She must be very confused. "Mommy says when we get home we can go and visit the poley bears in the zoo. I cant wait" said Amanda. Every one just stared at Amanda with the look someone gives you when you feel bad.

Across the other side of the island a man in his 30's was walking along the shore picking up crabs, dead fish and anything he could find. He's odd looking. Jenna noticed him and didn't recognize him from being on the plane. This freaked Jenna because who else would be on a deserted island? It seemed like most of the people on the island were starring at this one man. Before she knew it the older woman was helping the man find food. Soon after, most of the people on the island were helping out. They had made a plan that for about 30 minuets they would find food and tomorrow morning they would look for more water from a stream or anything in the forest. As they searched for food Jenna realized that it had gotten dark, really dark. The large group of people headed to the fire to tell campfire stories. John sat next to Jenna as they listened to the old woman (Jenna found out her name was Annie). "One night, on a deserted island just like this, a young girl around 12 years old was sitting in a tent reading a book on scary stories" the old woman said. "This young girl heard a rustling in a bush and became very nervous. Then she herd a (a noise from the forest like a shriek). What was that? I wasn't the only one who herd that was I?" she said looking nervous. The bushes started moving and shaking

"Mommy, Andrew" Amanda shrieked'


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