Hey Everybody! It's Electric Ammo, the Author of Olimar's Vacation. Sorry I hadn't update this fanfic very often, but I had to pay Olimar and the gang tons of money to start in my other fanfic, Teeny Titans, which starts the Teen Titans and The Pikmin gang in their own adventure. Anyway, I like to thank Lemurian for sending my only nice review. I also had to play some levels on Pikmin 2 to decide what to put next. Anyway, back to the story...


Starting with the rebels...

As the sun slowly rose from the east of the Awakening Woods, Olimar landed the ship and began the vacation. The Pikmin were just lying around, doing nothing since they weren't being commanded. Olimar and Louie just stood their, wondering what to do next. Suddenly, a group of twenty Pikmin walked to our heroes. They told the two, "We have come to kill you two!" Olimar and Louie were confused. Pikmin couldn't talk, right?

"We're the Pikmin you left behind that survived the night! Since we came back for revenge, we shall call upon our old brothers!" the evil Pikmin replied. They then took their leaves and started to blow, making a whistling sound. Suddenly, a large angry mob of Pikmin with cut up leaves started to attack. The good Pikmin then came out of the Onion and defended their leaders. There was blood and guts flying everywhere, since the Pikmin were killing each other. They even used the dead corpse of their enemies to attack. Some enemy Pikmin were even riding Bulmin, small Bulborbs that have been infected with the Pikmin seeds on their heads and work just like Pikmin, assisted the rebellion. Tons of Pikmin died in this tragic battle. Louie even helped the battle. The Pikmin threw rocks at him, just like bullets. Louie bends backward and dodged the rocks, kind of like what Neo did in the Matrix. Olimar thought this was going on way too long. He blew his whistle, commanding the hundreds of Pikmin in one blow. He then said, "All right, now who're the Pikmin who rebelled me?" Half of the Pikmin raised their hands and separated themselves from the loyal ones. They were mind controlled by Olimar's whistle. He then blew his whistle and sent the loyal Pikmin back into the ship and onions. Then, he walked near a pack of Bulborbs and feed the rebel Pikmin into their mouths. He also sent the Bulmin back into the caves, where larger Bulmin captured them. Olimar then told Louie the vacation could begin and they set up the campsite.


Interesting, huh? I bet you folks didn't see that one coming did you? Anyway, if you want to once again send ideas, questions, and etc. to me, then send them via the reviews.