Sir-dik-dik will rock you, somewhat.
Cooper Russell is my new favorite artist.
You should check out his story, Fable Prophecy but you probably already have.
Yes I'm back with the next chapter of MCABADSS story which could be MCBADASS, sounds like a cheeseburger from McDonalds, if the a and the D were switched around but that's beside the point. I started up a c2 called know your roots and all the original four stories have been included so all new comers will see the standards in action and character writing. Look out for my comedy, how not to get a date, that will be up shortly and is about what not to do on getting a date staring David Alister, my Fable character. I also asked Peter Moulynx to read these stories and give us an idea of what we are doing right and wrong so look out for a review from Peter M. that is signed. Disclaimer, I don't own Fable so don't sue me.
Chapter4, Stranger.
Two young men walked into a bar and asked for a drink. The two boys had short hair and were slightly muscular. One boy carried a pointed short blade that was richly carved, made for royalty. His hair was red and he wore armor that was covered in jewels and silver. The other was a boy that had short blue hair and was slightly taller and not as well dressed as the other boy but his blade was only a long broadsword.
"That will be one hundred gold." The man at the bar handed them the two beers.
"That's quite a hefty price for beer." The boy in royal armor sounded alarmed.
"Ever sense the new Lady Grey took over, prices have skyrocketed." The bar owner wiped the table and caught a glimpse of their weapons. "Sir, I don't believe you should have that thing here." The bar owner reinforced the Bowerstone's no weapon policy.
"I'll carry my weapon if I feel like it." The boy in red pulled out his blade and placed the tip of it on the table. The wooden table caught fire and people tried to escape but the door seemed to have a barrier around it. The two boys were the only people that opened the door and left. The screams of innocent people that were trapped inside was music to the two boys ears.
"Ren, you really need to learn to control your temper." Ren's older brother told him.
"I'm aware, but I don't feel like it." They both laughed as they tried to outdo each other. "Top this little brother!" Ren's older brother Alex pointed his blade at a house and a twister threw it across the town of Bowerstone South. "That was cool Alex, but this is cooler." Ren pointed his blade at a cop and set him on fire, the cop slowly roasted and fell over dead. "Good one, but beat this," Alex swept his blade against the ground and after a few seconds what looked like a flash of lighting took a chunk of anything it made contact with. It killed an officer and two chickens and the local law enforcement tried to stop them without another option.
"Brother, I do believe that these fools wish to hurt us." Ren pointed out.
"I think we should cut them down to size." Alex took out his broadsword and smiled at his brother as they went on.
"I'll take the three on the left,"
"I guess I got the right then."
"That's right."
"Shall we start?"
"We shall."
Ren took out his royal blade and put two fingers out in front of him. Fire gathered as he charged up his attack. He chanted a few words that translate to, "May your soul burn in the Hellfire." A stream of fire wiped across the cops and their corpses burned in the inferno. To his back his brother, Alex, took on eight archer guards with ease. They all shot their bows at him on the same mark so Alex redirected these bows piercing their hearts.
"Let's get what we came for here now." Alex walked toward the entrance to Bowerstone north.
"What was that again, Alex." Ren asked walking with him.
"A proper place for Dakar." Alex replied to his little brother. They both entered the northern pert of the town and another attack force waited for them.
"May I?" Alex took out his blade.
"All yours," Ren bowed. Alex took out his blade and made one strong slash in the wind, not hitting anything. One second later a slight breeze swept threw the area, slowly getting stronger. After three seconds quick white flashes would appear, finally when they would connect severing limbs once it made contact. They walked into the mayor's room dropping their capes at the door.
"What is it that you dirty fiends want?" Amber Grey the new mayor of Bowerstone asked in an angry panic.
"Hear that, Ren, we're dirty fiends." Alex said in a sarcastic voice.
"I guess that she doesn't value her life." Ren smirked as he pulled out his blood stained blade.
"No, what is that you want: money, gold, diamonds, I've got it just don't kill me please!" the mayor begged on her knees.
"The axe you have is a proper place for Dakar." Alex asked in a serious voice. She brought it to him and he examined it; after a few seconds he pulled a blue essence out of his blade and put it in the axe. It was an old time axe called Despair, its short handle made it a home for the blue essence. He was about to kill the mayor when his brother stopped him.
"I've got a much better idea, Alex." Ren went over to the mayor put his palm on her head and squeezed. They both left the palace in peace walking on the corpses of the dead men they killed.
"Come forth Dakar!" Alex summoned and a bird came and allowed them to mount its back and they flew off into the sunset. As they flew over the ground an odd warm breeze swept over them and they looked at each other.
"He couldn't of, could he?"
"No."
"Then why can I feel the power emitting from the dagger?"
"Maybe we should check it out?"
"No, we will send someone else, don't want him to find out to soon."
"Right." They laughed as they flew back to Headman's Hill and landed.
"I've come for the boy." He pointed his cat claws. Raven took one step back and tried to reason with him. "Look, I don't want to fight right now so could you come tomorrow and I promise I will kick your ass."
"Very funny, but I wasn't trained to joke around, so come quietly or I will kill you and take your father's dagger." The assassin put a hand on his shoulder, "I'm sure you would rather come alive then dead. There's nothing here to fight about especially because with the Headmaster dead, the tournament is canceled." He pulled out his claws expecting to fight.
"Okay, I will follow you to here ever that you want me to go; you guys seem to be strong enough seeming as your entrance was stealthy." Raven could see the look of hatred in the assassin's face even under the mask. The ran all the way to Gibbet woods and came to a Demon Door in the ground that was asked what was for dinner and the answer was "Mole's ass." The door opened and in went he two people as they walked the corridors Raven would stop to marvel the artwork here. It was pictures of brutal slaughtering by his father and other people like David Alister and none other than Jack of blades. When they reached the central hall they were greeted by the leader of the underground palace they were at.
"We are what's left of the Raiders." The old man stretched his old wrinkled hands to greet Raven but Raven just looked at him. "I see." He said as he sat down in his royal chair covered by a purple velvet material. "See we've found David Alister's tomb and seven elements stop the door from opening," He pointed at seven elements on a wall, "This is where you come in." He motioned to his dagger.
"Let me guess, this will some how make it open," Raven looked at the old man with a grim look on his face.
"You catch on quick like your father." The leader of the Raiders smiled as he took the dagger from Raven. "This dagger is the only way to break the seal but it can only be opened when all seven elements have been implemented into the dagger." He looked closer at it taking in ever detail of it.
"Why would I even want to help you guys, what's in it for me?" Raven asked.
"Of course we figured that you wouldn't do this for free so we will give you your reward when the time is right." The leader of the group persuaded Raven.
"If I refuse?" Raven asked.
"Then you will be killed on the spot," The leader said plainly.
"Fair enough." Raven looked around and sighed, again he was under the control of someone else.
The end of Chapter4 Stranger.
Now it's time for the quote list the sounds of eighty people clapping with one arm.
Scull Boy, You most likely like my story the most so you now have your own quote.
"Buckle your seatbelts cause this is going to suck." Xplay.
Sandtrout, The first story and now you are losing the popularity war which by my calculations, I'm winning!
"Hot damn." David Chapele.
Masterbeef, need I say more? Oh, I do.
"Sometimes I even quote myself." Masterbeef.
Jacob, Why didn't you review c3?
No quote for you. HAHAHAHAHAhAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA
Redeyesdemon, the second story isn't too shabby, so anyone else should check it out. Picks out a large neon sign that says READ HIS STORY.
"I found it, I found it!" Family Guy He totally ripped off the line they just said.
Cooper Russell, man if your action is good, I might as well give up, but I still have a shot, right?
"If life is a circle and we can draw circles, can I see your butt?" My friend hitting on a chick.
Tayter, Sorry I couldn't resist.
"Hey, look who's on trial." Inter Pool.
Sir-dik-dik, I finally got a quote that I like enough to make it my calling card. "I knew you would be okay if you landed on your butt." Leon in Resident Evil4.
If you guys haven't seen Robot Chicken, it is sooooooooooooooooooo funny, like Leon in Resident Evil4.
So until later, if your going to fall, fall flat on your ass.
