ViperVegeta: Ok, this thing is confusing the hell out of me. The best I can do is promise that I'm going to make sure this doesn't happen with the sequel to this. (is that ok?)
ChibiVegeta: Should bloody well be ok. I think too bad for the readers if they don't like it, because knowing you, you're going to post the story anyway.
VV: Too right, but oh well! Seriously, here's the reply's to the authors note, and if I missed your review then please tell me, and I will send you cookies!
len: I will keep writing! I will keep writing! I will keep writing!
saiyan fireice: I kind of don't like the way some stories rush into the G/V thing. It gets annoying after a while, and I thought of this story while I was reading one of those ones. Don't get me wrong, I like it sometimes when they just go kiss and they get them together, but sometimes the realtionship should be built up, not just made.
Ardy-Bo-Bardy: I like that you like this!
Ash Doku: I can't make any promises, but you should enjoy what I do to her anyway. (I hope.)
x The Chichi Slaughter House x: Thank you for being such a loyal reviewer! I think you should have special mention for your loyalty! Everyone! This is a really cool person over here! She absolutely rocks!
Moonlight-6056: Aw, thak you for your patience!
Azure Ocelot: (Holds CV by the scruff of his neck and shakes him until he apologises) CV:I'm sorry I bit you!
LuvBlonde Bunny: Don't worry, Bulma will get hers. it isn't a let down, what I doto her, but she's vital to the sequel (YES THERE IS A SEQUEL!) Sorry if it is a bit of a let down. She does get hers though.
LinZ Umbra: I can tell you why Vegeta is so sexy when he's the submissor. He's giving someone else the control over him. That just doesn't happen with Vegeta, he's got to be in control all of the time. Making him the submissor is so much fun! Wouldn't you agree?
This is the second last chapter I wrote for Shocker. Please note that there is a sequel in the works, but it is harder to write when I know that I'm posting the second last part of Shocker today! Don't be mad with me for making you wait this long, faithful readers, I want to make sure that the last part is just right. PLEASE DON"T HURT ME!
Goku landed next to the lake and looked out over the water, then searched for Vegeta's ki. It was nearby, so he walked over to where it seemed to be, and was met with a short volley of ki balls. He dodged, throwing himself sideways, then he stood and phased out to reappear right in front of Vegeta. Vegeta went to hit him, but Goku caught his hand with a frown, and blocked the hit from the other hand too.
"Vegeta, you said you would tell me what was going on. You haven't yet, and I'm getting a little bit annoyed. Tell me."
"No Kakarrot!" Vegeta went to break out of Goku's grip, but Goku held on, then spun him so he was facing away from Goku, his back hard against Goku's chest and his arms crossed over his own chest. He couldn't move now. "Let me go!"
"You promised that you would tell me. Vegeta, a promise is a promise. Now tell me. I'm going to hold you here until you do, even if those sparks hit you again." Goku said firmly. He felt Vegeta gasp, then Vegeta lowered his head in defeat, and when he spoke it was in a dejected voice.
"Kakarrot, I don't know why, but Bulma has suddenly started shocking me with this little remote control. It turns my own ki against me, so there's no way to disable it, and she's got more than one controller. If I get hold of one then she uses the other one to get me back." Vegeta's body started to shake, he was trying not to cry, so Goku let him go and turned him around, and held him closely, letting him sob gently into his chest. "Kakarrot, she's programmed the stupid thing to shock me if I'm away from the grounds, if I don't do as she tells me then she does it, and if I'm late getting back there she does it again. Last night she kept the thing on me for nearly a minute. It's horrible, it feels like you're body is rebelling against you, turning you inside out without actually doing anything." Vegeta shuddered, and Goku sighed.
"Vegeta, I don't know how to help you right this minute, but I'm going to think of something." He tipped Vegeta's face up and kissed him softly, then Vegeta looked at him. "This can't go on any more. And you know what I'm like. I find out about something bad that's going on and I'm going to do everything I can think of to amend it." Goku smirked, and Vegeta smiled slightly.
"That would be you Kakarrot." He said.
"Now, will you stop crying?" Goku asked, and wiped Vegeta's face carefully with his hand. "You don't look so good with tears all down your face."
Vegeta pouted and smirked, then grabbed Goku by the back of the head and made him lean close enough for him to kiss him.
"Kakarrot, if you've got your eyes closed does it matter what I look like?" He asked, whispering to him, and Goku kissed him again.
"It matters if I'm trying to hit you. I can't spar with you if you're this close." He said, then Vegeta phased out and hit him from behind with a volley of ki balls, sending Goku flying into the dirt. Goku turned and looked at Vegeta, who was smirking.
"Better?"
Please remember, there is a last part to come yet. This is nearly finished, and I want to express my gratitude to all of you who read and reviewed this story! Please, regardless of whether you like the story or not, after the last chapter I want you to review, because I will reply to the reviews in the start of the sequel. I've already decided what to call it, but I'm not going to tell you yet!
