This is my first fanfiction.. so be nice...lol!


(Neela and Ray have just started dating .. but Ray has enemies from the past.. just how far will they go to hurt him

Neela had just gotten off work and she was in the lounge when she felt someone breathing on her neck... then someones arms went around her waste. Neela screamed and turned around to find that it was only Ray... then she gave him a little punch in the stomache, "Never do that to me again!" she said still sounding a little scared.. But releaved at the same time

"Sorry, I didn't mean to scare you." Ray said then gave her a kiss. "So... dinner tonight? I'll pick you up at the apartment? Great!" He gave her a kiss then headed out.

Neela said to thin air, "Yea, sure..." and went home to get ready for her date.

Neela was in the shower when she heard a knock at the door. She thought Ray didn't get off til 7, but he must've got off early. She ran too the door with only a towel on, "Just a second sweetie!"... she opened the door without looking out the peep hole.

She quickly tried to shut the door when she realized the man was Ray (it was a tall white male with brown hair and brown eyes) but he was too strong. Neela kept backing up... until she couldn't back up anymore she ran into the wall... the guy kept coming towards her.. Slowly grinning, and somehow Neela new what he was planning.

"Please!" she pleaded with him as he pushed her against the wall, "Please, No!" she said... but it was too late... the man had her on the floor, he ripped the towel off of her and Neela tried to block out the pain... but she couldn't, it was unbarable, then before leaving he whispered in her ear.. "tell Ray... next time it'll be worse!" then he was gone... and Neela just sat there sobbing... she grabbed her towel and wrapped it around her... she felt dirty.. She felt ashamed.. She felt used! She sat there and sobbed until she heard the doorknob turn... then she screamed.

Ray came running in and he saw her there sobbing on the floor, he ran over too her... knelt down.. And reached for her but she flinched, and that was when he realized that there was blood on the floor.

"Neela, are you okay, what happened?" he reached for her again. Neela screamed and sobbed, and yelled, "Get away, leave me alone... Please..."then everything went black.


So ... tell me what you think!.. there will be a new chapter soon if you like it!