After Ray finds Neela this is what happens..
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Ray looked Neela over and noticed that she had bruises all over her, and scratched and gashes. He put his coat around her and carried her to his car... then he sped the whole way to the ER, checking every two minutes to see if she had waken up.

They finally arrived at the hospital and Ray took her out of the car and started running through the ambulance bay to the door when he heard her whisper something that made him stop flat in his footsteps. She had whispered, "tell Ray... next time it'll be worse!" and she kept repeating that... and Ray just stared at her while tears started to well up in his eyes. He finally got the strength to walk into the hospital.. When they walked in all eyes were on them.

Ray screamed, "Someone Help!", then he fell to his knees. Carter came running over and asked what had happened, and he saw that Ray had been crying... "I'm sorry!" he sad looking at Neela, "I'm sorry..." Carter took Neela from Ray and put her on a gurney and Susan and Abby rushed her to an empty room.

Carter just stood there staring at Ray, he had never seen this man show any emotion. Carter pulled Ray up by the arm and took him to an empty room.

"Ray... what the hell happened?" Carter asked sounding kinda mad.

"I walked in.. And she was sitting on the floor... with a towel wrapped around her.. She was crying, she was scared of me..." Ray said after he controlled his crying. "I didn't mean for her... I didn't want this to happen.. I'm so sorry!"

"Ray... what are you talking about.. You didn't do this." Carter said looking at him.

"It's my fault, if I would have left work early... if I wouldn't have run from New York when he needed me the most... if I would've told him where I was going...She wouldn't be..." Ray couldn't finish the sentence.

"Ray... do you know who did this?" Carter asked sincerely

Ray just stared at him for a few minutes... then he said, "My brother!"


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