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Why Me? Chapter 4
Don't Leave Me, My Love
When Marco awoke, he was in the hospital. He surveyed his surroundings for a few seconds, then sat bolt upright.
"Where's Dylan!" he exclaimed, "Is he ok?"
His
ma looked sadly at him, then turned to his pa.
"Should we tell
him?" Marco heard his ma whisper.
"It's for the best," his pa said sadly.
"He's not..d…d…dead, is he, Ma?" Marco questioned.
"No, sweetie, but he's dying. Unless he can get more blood soon, he'll die."
"But….can I help?"
"No, sweetie. You've already been tested. But Dylan has a very rare blood type, and they're trying to find a match."
Marco sat back, trying to comprehend what he was just told. His baby was dying, and he couldn't do anything about it. What if Dylan dies? How would I go on? Who would comfort me? He practically depended on Dylan to breathe.
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A few hours later, Marco's ma came back in.
"Marco! Good news! They've found a match for Dylan, and he's going to live!"
Marco had been sleeping, but at the thought that his baby, his Dylan, was going to be alright, he woke up right away. If he had been strong enough to walk, he would have jumped up and danced. He was so happy.
"Ma, can we go see him? Please?"
"Marco, you're not strong enough yet. And neither is Dylan. But in a few days, maybe you can see him. Just relax for now, sweetie."
Relax, Marco, just relax. Dylan'll be fine, so now you can relax.
Marco thought this to himself as he settled in to a deep slumber.
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Ok, I hope you like it. Keep reading and reviewing, it's not over yet, big surprise in the next chapter…
