Rea: I'm terribly sorry it's so short…
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Disclaimer: I don't own Coca-Cola, Sprite, the voices in my head, or YuYu Hakusho for that matter…
Chapter 10
"Keep your friends close and your enemies closer."
"Are you girls ready to order?"
Minna looked up at the waitress. Minna hadn't realized that the waitress had approached, meaning that Minna was very, very preoccupied. Icama looked at her oddly for a second before turning back to the waitress.
"Yeah. I'd like the chicken fingers with a side of fries instead of…salad…" Icama glared into space as she whispered the last word. Minna smirked and looked through the menu.
"I'd like the mozzarella sticks. And a Coke."
"Okay they should be ready in around ten minutes. In the meantime, would you like to order an appetizer?" the waitress grinned.
"No," Minna said before Icama could answer.
The waitress left and Minna turned back to Icama. "No drink?"
Icama shook her head. "No. They don't have good water here. It tastes like Sprite." Minna nodded and traced a figure on the table in silence.
"Minna?" Icama said slowly. "Minna? Minna! LOOK BEHIND YOU, VEGITARIAN!"
Minna spun around and barely missed being sliced in half by a very sharp sword. Minna jumped away nimbly and landed on all fours. She glared at the blur that was circling her. She was desperately trying to find an area of weakness but it was impossible. The blur was too fast.
Icama screamed. Minna spun to face her but was blocked by another attack of the sword. Minna blocked it by grabbing the wrist as it came down and flipping the owner over her back. Minna ran to Icama and found her fighting a similar battle against a slightly larger blur. Minna growled and closed her eyes for a second before opening them again, a bright blue filling her entire eye.
Her hair began to flow as if a wind had picked up within the diner and a bright white light shone around her before blinding the entire building temporarily. Minna ran over to Icama and slung her around her shoulder as she made for a window to escape from.
A sudden pain shot up her side as she reached the window. Icama slipped from Minna's grasp as Minna slipped to the floor, pain engulfing her. Her sight began to blur as she stared up at the blade-wielder's face. It seemed oddly familiar and yet very different. A voice floated into Minna's ears as blackness took over her mind:
"I thought that I taught you better…"
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Rea: ooooo! suspense! lol. I bet you can probably guess who it is though…or can you? hmm! more suspense! lol…I'm being stupid right now because I just got home from orchestra after-school rehearsal (okay, maybe it ended at 5:30 and it's about 7:00 right now, but we had to meet my bro's new teach and I had to go to Taco Bell—YUM!—for dinner and this took me about fifteen minutes to write so…yeah…) and I'm a bit tired and weirder than usual…so yeah. tell me if you like it or not, if I could make some improvements in my writing, any suggestions for the story, blah. blah. blah.
