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A. NuEvil: Yeah I am so glad you liked it! Here's your update…though it didn't come too soon grimaces hehe... Thanks for the review! By the way cool screen name!


LloydIrvingisMine:Grins a Han Solo hundred watt smile then sniffles and frowns I'm sorry it wasn't that quick…. I hope my future updates will be soon!
Nignt (is it supposed to be Night?) of the Land: It is a pleasure to review your story because it really is a very good story. Sorry I didn't make it too snappy...hopefully since I am updating my story you will update yours:)
MarshaMarshaMarsha: thank you very much for your review it is much appreciated. Yes I know I had some mistakes in the first chapter but I did try to make it a little better. Here is a list answering any questions or remarks:

Leetle is a stress. It is a cute way (or so I think) to say little. :)

The reason why I didn't explain about Hallows Eve being in 'The Galaxy Far Far Away' is because it would take entirely too long plus I don't have that good of an explanation as to why it exists in Star Wars land. (bad excuse...i know:)

Smiles sheepishly yes it was an attempt at humor (evidently humor you didn't find, sorry). But if u look on the first chapter I made him a little more sympathetic. :)

I'm sorry about the SithSpit thing. I had no Earthly Idea that it came into place after Palpy's death. Hmmmm maybe I should make up my own Star Wars cuss word:D! Anyway thanks for the heads up :)

The thing about mood swing Obi made me laugh…that was hilarious

Annie is only nine and I just really don't like him so I made him be bad:D (I am not very good at making excuses am i:)

Okay there was a time shift (I put that in the new and improved chapter one) so Obi-Wan and Bant are still quite young and not entirely in control of their emotions :)

Hmmm very good question 'bout how something evil could penetrate the Temple walls but have you any idea that the evil wasn't there before the Temple was built hmmmmm? grins

I will not change my betas. And I am very sorry you feel that I should.

Wasn't taken as such. I actually take it as a compliment. You care so much about my story being good and enjoyable for others, that you took the time to write me a note, trying to help me with my spelling and grammar and I appreciate it fully.

Oh and by the way you spelled S-T-I-F-L-E wrong in your review. :D Just jok'n!

Thanks much for your constructive criticism! Peace out-jkk


Sacall Mohnaay: blushes thank you for your review and I really like your story.


The dancing Cavalier: grins so kind you are. For your review, thank you. Fun talking like Yoda it is: D!


Master of the Jedi: Nope I can't tell u who it is but I will give you a hint. H-I-M-A-S-S-T-E-T rearrange the letters and you will find out what title 'it' has. :) Hehehehe Anakin might have to go change his Padawan undies once or twice:D:D:D!


Master of the Sith: Woah i have a Master of the Sith and the Jedi:D! Thanks for the reveiw...i really appreciate it! Please stay tuned:):)


A/N: Okay I have perfectly good reasons for not updating sooner! #1- terrible writers block #2- really busy #3-working on another story. So here's an update hope you enjoy!


Obi-Wan wandered the temple halls for what felt like hours, looking at holos and statues of the great Jedi Masters before his time. He was looking at a painting of a Lightsaber battle between two Jedi when an old stone bust caught his eye. It sat across the room in a corner hidden away in the shadows.

The Padawan walked over to it and stared at the strong masculine face lined with cracks and chipped by its age. Obi-Wan sat down and shrunk deep in the darkness, his back resting on the statue's stand. He pulled up his knees so his chin could rest on them and sighed.

His master, Qui-Gon jinn had been gone when Obi-Wan needed him most; he was still recovering from the incident at Melida/Daan. Obi-Wan wondered if Qui-Gon would ever forgive him for leaving the Jedi Order, leaving Qui-Gon. Bant's words had hurt Obi-Wan but they were true and he felt guilty for storming off like he did.

A feeling overcame Obi-Wan, a feeling of being watched and the hairs along the back of his neck bristled as the force rang out an alarm throughout his mind. A voicecalled for himthrough the deserted hallway and Obi-Wan shrunk further back into the shadows. He felt like being alone and did not want unwelcome company.


"Kenobi?" Siri Tachi whispered. There came no answer but she felt Obi-Wan near so she rang out again. "Kenobi I know you're somewhere in here so come out. Bant really didn't mean what she said, it just kind of blurted out. Obi-wan where are you!" the latter was said in quiet frustration.

Something stirred behind her and Siri looked across the room to see one of the Jedi Temple's busts glowing! It shone a soft florescent green and beside it lay obi-wan who sat back in shock. The bust started shaking so he quickly ran over to stand beside Siri and the two Padawans looked at each other with wide eyes.

The bust stopped moving violently but the stand tilted from the movement and the statue fell to the ground with an ear shattering thud.

After a moment of gathering herself and emotions up, Siri spoke."What just happened obi-wan? What did you do to the immanent object to make it come alive?" Obi-Wan looked at her with confusion.

"I was just…just sitting agai…against it and it…it came alive! I swear on Ulic Qel-Droma's pyre I didn't do anything with it!" Siri looked at him in surprise at his choice of words. A wind brushed upon Siri's face and she felt another presence enter the room.

"Obi-Wan do you feel that?" Siri looked around but nobody was in sight. Obi-Wan nodded his head 'yes'. Suddenly the carpet under them shot up sending the two flying through the air and landing far apart from each other.

While they struggled to rise chunks of duracrete flew at them from the walls but sapphire and lavender Lightsabers flashed and cut the hard substances in pieces with the exception of one which hit Siri on the head causing her to crumple up on the floor unconscious.

A figure rose from theground behind her and kicked her hard in the stomach but her mind was in a black abyss where nothing could be felt. The 'thing' was dark and shadowy but pearly white teeth showed out from under the hood it wore and jet black hair that was worn in dreadlocks fell upon its shoulders.

The person walked slowly from where it stood towards obi-wan its black leather cape swaying behind him. It didn't stop until it was a few feet away from the Padawan and only then did it pull out a Lightsaber hilt from under its robes. The Lightsaber activated and a deep crimson blade 'zwigged' out.

Obi-Wan finally came to his senses and his sapphire blade swung out in a defensive posture a foot away from his foes. The opposing personage pulled back its hood revealing silver fluorescent male glowing in a ghostly manner.

The Lightsaber of Obi-Wan's opponent swung to the right and Obi-Wan moved to block the blow but the red Lightsaber went straight through his blue one and struck his arm sending waves of pain through it. His 'saber dropped to ground with a clank and his enemy pushed it aside with a booted foot.

"Foolish Padawan did you really think you could beat me? A Sith master?" the raspy almost mechanical voice spoke. (A/N: think Grievous or Darth Malak only a little bit lower in tone) his hands raised up and a whirlwind of carpet and duracrete carried the two Padawans up in the air.

Obi-wan screamed as a piece of duracrete went into hisleg but Siri remained motionless while her body was tossed around and her limbs being broken with the unmerciful wind.

The blowing stopped as quickly as it had begun and all matter fell down to the hard ground below.On all fours and panting heavily, obi-wan crawled over to Siri not noticing the Sith wasrunning towards him at a fast rate.

The world slammed into obi-wan as an overwhelming power began to drain him of his life-force making him gasp in agony but darkness cast its spell and all went quiet…


A/N: This chapter was horrible! I had writers block and i tried my best so don't be too harsh pleasewhines! Okay please let me know if this story is worth continuing! I will probably update soon (if you guys want me to continue that is) but like I said I am writing another story which I hope will be a big hit so…be patient…please?

Peace to all

JKK