Hello again, everyone! Me here. I just read the latest review yesterday, and I agree with what the review said. This story is almost completed-I am just now able to upload it onto this site. This story isn't saved onto my computer, and I didn't place it on a disk, so that's why it'll take some time for this to be completed. I love reading reviews, because I can know how others feel about my story!
I don't really want to update without feedback, but I know that reviews don't come flying in at the drop of a hat. There is no sense in completing a story if no one wants to read it, but since I'm really proud of this story, I'll try my hardest to finish!
As for the review, I agree with you about X's personality. It was fine with me back when I was first writing this story, but now I look back at it and go "ugh". I know a lot more about the Mega Man X world now, and I have heard the voice actor for X in Command Mission and X8. So you know what? I think I'll give this story a bit of a makeover. Have fun, enjoy!!
--The Maverick Hunter base was filled with the extraordinary beauty of starlight-it looked as if there were a million stars, lingering in the cold, calm air....and it was as if they knew about the emotions inside of the young Axl's heart. The young reploid felt as if they were listening to him somehow.....and he knew that he certainly wasn't listening to what X was saying. The legendary Maverick Hunter was taking him on a tour of the Maverick Hunter base, but Axl's mind was on the conversation that had just taken place about Zero.
What was wrong with Zero?
Not being able to figure something out bothered him.
X was carefully showing him every inch of the base, but the words of the great Hunter were falling on deaf ears. The look Zero had on his face was glued in Axl's mind.....and so he could think of nothing else at the moment.....
"All employees have their very own dormitory here. The dormitories are located in the West Wing, which isn't too far from here. We'll have to get you one, so you can have a place to sleep. You may use your dormitory in anyway you wish to use it. The observatory is quite close to the dormitory area. The monitors inside of the dormitory display the activity of outer space, so whenever you would like to take a look at what's going on outside of the Earth's atmosphere, head for the observatory. It's a very nice place to be if you want to take a break."
Axl looked distracted, but the Blue Bomber either didn't notice the look on his face, or he just wanted to keep himself distracted.....
"This is the Maverick Hunter laboratory, where our friend Gate conducts many experiments along with his crew. Projects concerning the Earth and its activity are done inside of here. They also assist Douglas and his crew when it comes to making up new equipment."
The level of anxiety was rising higher and higher. It was almost at vehement, fiery level.
