It was a cool night in the Gerudo Fortress,so quite and peaceful...to peaceful for one gerudo.
"im so board!"Kineka said aloud."I hope my times almost up to watch this stupid gate!"She said.
She had been watching the gate to the Haunted Wastelands for a couple of hours.She had took this job when she was 15.Now 16 she usually just sat there hoping someone would try to sneak in the Haunted Wastelands without a pass.At least it would give her somthing to do besides just sitting there.Just then she heard what she had been waiting for.
"Kineka your shifts over!"someone yelled.
'Thank the goddesses...I can finally go home!'she said to herself.Dashing off towards her home.When she got there she noticed there was smoke in the distance.'why would there be smoke coming from Bloodmoons house?'she thought "id better check it out"as she said this she started running towards Bloodmoon's house.Unfortunatley it wasen't Bloodmoons house that was on fire."OH NO!"Kineka said for it was Nabooru's housethrone roomthat was on fire.Kineka ran up to Bloodmoon.
"Whose all inside!"Kineka asked.
"Were not sure whose all inside but we know Nabooru's trapt in there!"Bloodmoon replied.Kineka gasped.
"Im going to go in there and see if i can get her out" "you go find some people to go get water and put out what little fire you all can!"Kineka said.
"We have a problem though"Bloodmoon said quickly "the door in front of the entrance it won't open!"she said"well I guess ill just have to ram it then!"as Kineka said this she started backing up.
"MOVE BACK!"Bloodmoon yelled out.
'I can do this'Kineka said to herself 'one...two'she started running faster 'THREE!'she hit the door hard causing it to fall to the ground.She coverd up her mouth to keep from getting the smoke into her lungs.'now i have to fing her..but how?'she asked herself.Then it hit her like a brick..'ill call her name and if she answers ill follow her voice!'she said to herself.
"NABOORU!"she yelled out hoping she'd answer.
"IM UP HERE!"Nabooru yelled back.
Kineka could have sworn she heard fear in her voice.'Great theres more smoke, im going to have to crawl if i want to find the staircase'she bent down and started to crawl luckly she spotted the staircase not to far off from were she was at.
She crawled to the steps,she then got up and walked up the steps.Unfortunatley she didnt noticed that one of the steps was loose..she steped on it and her leg went through cutting it and brusing it.
"Damn!"she said pulling her leg out. "Im gonna pay for that mistake"she said to herself limping the rest of the way.
Finally she came to a hall.Usually the hall was decorated with beautiful flowers and jewels but this time the hall looked nothing like it there were flames everywere and you could hardly see anything.
"NABOORU"she yelled hoping Nabooru was alright..no answer "NABOORU"she yelled again..all she heard was a soft grown that only a gerudo could hear.
Kineka without thinking kicked the nearest door down.There Nabooru was laying unconsious.Kineka quicky ran over to her, noticing she was unconsious she picked her up and started heading downstairs.She barley missed the step that she almost fell through earlier'im glad i missed that step'Kineka said to herself.Then she heard the building collaspe a little bit.
"Id better hurray up if i want us to make it out alive!"she said outloud.She started running as fast as she can making sure she didnt hurt Nabooru.She seen the exit 'FINALLY'she said as she started running faster.Unfortunatley Kineka tripped over a board and was sent flying Nabooru somehow managed to make it out the entrance.As soon a Kineka hit the ground the building finally collapsed...
how did you like it? the first one i wrote was HORRIABLE so i deciced to rewrite it.PLZ read and review!I would like to thank:
XxzeldaforeverxX-thank you SO much for the review! i hope this had a little more description than the last one!
MistressMoonDemon-well i was suprised you reviewed my story..thank you for the review!
Irken Gir-thank you for telling me what was wrong with my story and taking your time to tell me how to fix it.I hope this was good enough for you!
yarbo-im glad you reviewed and gave me a tip on how to fix my writing. i hope you update your stories soon!
