A/n hi im new here I hope you like my story the new CSI I thought of this story from the top of my head I work good that way. I put the diclamer on this stoy I own nothing of CSI miami so dont sue me. here is The New CSI. the story is under csi miami because it easier to out it under csi m then mics.
Hi my name is Casey Johnson I'm a CSI in the Miami area I'm a new comer to this job but im learning a lot while I'm here. I'm about to go onto my first crime scene today and im scared, a lot of people say it's kind of scary and the crimes get to u a lot, but im not scared I don't think I am. When I pull up to a wooded area (the crime scene) im greeted by officer Mc. Grady he shacks my hand and asks me.
"Are you the new CSI"?
"Yup I am what's it to yah"
"Nothing really I'm just warning you now just because your new , No one's cutting you any slack At all ok".
"K, what the profile on the victim and how old is the person."
"Well if you would just follow me I'll show you."
As we got closer I could smell the decomposing body it smelled so bad I had to cover my nose with my jacket. When we reached the body I looked down and I gasp it was my mom I tried to hold back my tears, and not burst out screaming I held my sorrow.
"As you can see she is in bad condition she has probably been out here for 3 to 4 days".
Interrupting him I asked.
"How did she die and is there any evidence of a struggle or defensive wounds on the victim."
"We don't know we have to take her to the medical adziminer to figure out all of that."
"Don't you want to go down there and get some clues like fiber from the victim and blood stains or something.
Not caring what he was saying I was thinking who could of done this? Why her, was it dad? it couldn't be but they were planning on getting a divorce. But why? They seemed in love. Know wonder why she haven't returned my phone call yet dad told me that she left a couple of days ago crying maybe he did do it. No he couldn't have, he would never do something like that I know him.
But maybe I don't.?.
Interrupted from my thoughts from officer Mc.Grady
"Hello Casey anyone there"
"Huh oh yeah im here sorry about that I was just thinking that's all."
"If you cant take this we can get another CSI on this case"
"No I want this case ok I'm fine jus let it go k."
"Fine just asking now go and analyze the scene."
"Im going God.
Thinking to myself I cant Tell anybody about this till I solve this case.
It's my secret for no one else to know.
While I was adzaming the scene I saw officer Mc. Grady go talk to the chief..
(It's now officer Mc.Grady and the chief Grady starting off conversation)
"I don't know about the new CSI she seems like she knows something or the victim"
"You think?"
"Yeah"
"I mean you should of seen her face when she saw the body, she looked like she was going to cry".
"Really"
"Yeah I have this gut feeling you know"
"No I don't know, explain"
"It's just a gut feeling ok""But I'm going to keep my eye on her that forshore".
"Fine but don't stop her from doing her job You got that"
Waving his finger into Mc.Grady .
"We don't want her to think that we don't trust her and, that there's been homicide's happening around here from the same perp."
"We don't want her to get scared, this may be from the same cereal killer",
"You think"
"I know so"
That's the end of chapter 1 when you are reviewing it please tell me what you think and if I should keep on going I would really appreciate that thanks.oh and no flammers plesase oh and please do a R&R. Tell me if I should do a second chapter. what is a Mary sue? who do u think the suspect is?
What should I make the second chapter about? well thats all.:D. wait thats no all sorry if there is miss spelling.;
