This is my first fic er...poem... so please review for me!

The Battle

In the night

With a dark black sky,

You travel along

The cracked roadside.

All is quiet,

All is calm,

But then you hear

An off-tune song.

A little man

Sings music near,

Then says to you,

"Do not fear.

The bandit killer's

Getting close,

She shows no mercy

To man of ghost.

But do not panic,

Do not run,

She will be a

Lot of fun!"

You do not understand.

What's fun about a killer?

You realize when she gets here

It will be a real thriller.

There's rustling in the bushes,

You turn around to see.

But no one is there,

Except a little bee.

"Looking for me?"

Asks a girl nearby.

"Why are you searching there?

I'm not low, I'm high!"

You look up in the tree

And sure enough, you find

The bandit killer staring at you

As if you were crazy in the mind.

There's a burst of light

As she sends a spell your way.

You nimbly dodge the blow

And try to repay.

The darkness of the night

Retreats to the shadows

As you and her

Have spell-throwing battles.

She's really good.

You're going to lose!

But then you decide

To try to confuse

This strange young girl

Who thinks you're new.

It doesn't work,

She tricks you back,

She blasts right at you;

The defense you lack.

Then there's a flash of red.

There's nothing else to come.

It's over now, the dark returns.

Lina Inverse has won.