Do you really think I would be sitting at home writing this if I owned PotC? I don't think so. In fact, I'd be sitting in front of my high-tech P.C in Hollywood writing this as a movie if I owned PotC. (Looks back at this… O.K., No more milkshakes for me whilst I write disclaimers.)
A last shot of adrenaline was all that allowed Nakada to pound up the driveway of the Turners home, ignoring the new pains shooting up her injured leg. She pounded furiously on the front door and darted in past the butler as soon as he pulled it open. Darting through the first door she came to, which happened to be the study, shed found herself face to face with a very shocked Elizabeth.
"What gives you the right to…" Elizabeth began furiously whilst Nakada pushed her hair away from her flushed face "Nakada? I didn't recognise you. How are..." she rattled off as Nakada held up a hand.
"No…time…" she wheezed, hands on her knees as she fought to catch her breath "Where's… W…Will. Need his help… Jack…" Elizabeth led her to a chair as she said
"Will's upstairs changing. He'll be down now." She passed Nakada a glass of cold water, which she downed in one as her breath finally returned. Will came into the room as she finished. His smiling face quickly turning anxious
"Nakada," he said in disbelief "Where's Jack?"
"I don't know" she replied "That man… Norrington… grabbed him; he thought Jack was kidnapping me. They're gonna hang him!!!" Will walked over to the couch she was seated on and said gently
"Don't worry, I'll get your supplies and take them to the Pearl. You stay here and we'll save Jack at nightfall. They won't have hung him by then." He finished firmly and left before she could protest. Nakada and Elizabeth sat in silence for a couple of minutes
"Come on Nakada" Elizabeth said, "Lets get something to eat." Nakada nodded and began to follow Elizabeth out of the room. Yet she had barely gone two steps before pain surged from her leg and around her body, she screamed slightly and dropped to the floor, Elizabeth sped over to her, calling for help as she dropped next to her distressed friend.
"Nakada!" she cried out "What's wrong?!?!?!" she touched her friends arm gently and Nakada screamed softly as pain surged through her body once again. Three maids scurried in, shocked to find their mistress sitting on the floor next to a distresses female pirate.
"Carry her up to the spare room." She told two before turning to the third "Go and get a doctor." She instructed "But if any of you so much as mummer 'pirate' in your sleep, I'll get her to run you all through." She followed the two maids up to the spare room as the other ran out of the house, knowing none of them would say word to anyone.
Nakada's eyes snapped open. She was lying in an unfamiliar room, definitely not aboard the Pearl. Two people were conversing quietly out of her vision and she eventually heard a door close-by click shut and footsteps approached where she lay. Elizabeth's face appeared in her vision, looking concerned.
"Nakada!" she cried happily "Are you okay?"
"Aye," Nakada replied, "What happened?" Elizabeth sat down on the edge of her friend's bed
"You collapsed" Liz mumbled, "You were fine one second and the next…" she broke off hesitantly "I'm glad to see you're okay now though." Nakada nodded and a sudden thought made her sit up quickly
"Jack!" she yelled and Elizabeth looked startled for a second before breaking into a smile
"Don't worry," she said soothingly "We've still got a while before dusk, calm down." A door slammed loudly downstairs and footsteps hurried up the stairs towards them.
"That'll be Will," Elizabeth said and stood up "Eat, I need to go talk to him." She pointed to a tray of food and a glass of water that lay next to Nakada's bed, alongside her sword, and left. Nakada ate her meal slowly; listening idly to the muffled conversation outside of the room, her thoughts were on Jack. Where was he? What was he doing? She had just finished hr meal when the door opened and Will and Elizabeth walked in.
Elizabeth sat on the edge of Nakada's bed and fussed with the covers (A.N: I hate when people do that) and Will dropped down so their faces were level. He had a worried expression on his face, which was changed to a grin when Nakada pulled a cross-eyed face at him.
Glad to see you're O.K Nakada" he looked up at Elizabeth before continuing, "Liz said you've got to stay there until we're ready to save Jack." Nakada pulled a face, disgusted at having to lie about idly.
"How long?" she asked
"An hour and a half" Liz replied, "I'll come and help you get sorted in an hour." She and Will left, leaving Nakada on her own.
The stars were just starting to shine when Elizabeth woke Nakada. They crept down the stairs in silence, so not to wake any of the servants and met Will in the main hall. He greeted them silently and led the way into the cool, silent night. They had to walk for half an hour before they stopped outside of the jail.
"Wait here," Will whispered "I'll check to see if the guard is asleep." He snuck inside and came back outfive minutes later, nursing the knuckles of his right hand.
"Out like a light." He whispered and led them inside. Nakada grinned as they walked past the unconscious guard (who already had a large bruise forming on his eye) and walked don the corridor until they came to a large door. Will pushed it open and they ran down the stairs that lay beyond it.
The cells were barely visible, yet they were able to find Jack's cell fairly quickly.
"Jack!" Nakada whispered and put her head to the cell bars, she could just make out his figure in the gloom, sitting against the wall.
"Aye?" he replied, not looking up
"We've come to get you out." Jack looked up, saw his daughter and swaggered over to the bars.
"Took your time lass," he said smiling "Been relaxing at the Turner's no doubt." He nodded at the outlines of Will and Elizabeth.
"Do you want out or not?" Will said, striding over with the keys in his hands.
The door was quickly opened and the four ran out into the night. They dodged into an alley and Jack turned to Will and Elizabeth.
"Will," Jack said, shaking his head in shame "And 'Lizabeth. I'm surprised at you. Springing a pirate from jail."
"I can put you back in there if you like." Will joked
"I'll pass." Jack replied "And now Will, Elizabeth, we must be off. Next time we sail this way, I'll stop by your house instead of the prison."
"Right Jack." Elizabeth replied, "You two look after yourselves. Come on Will, let's go before any of us get caught." They exchanged goodbyes and went their separate ways. Jack turned to Nakada, grinning wildly
"Well," he remarked, "That was a very uneventful day, let's go back to the Pearl and get some sleep." Nakada raised an eyebrow at him and he began to walk off, laughing.
You'll all be glad to know that I stop dragging the leg injury thing out now, it was just that for this chapter I needed something to fill in the empty space of a wait and having Nakada collapsing was pretty dramatic. I'm so glad Jack escaped!!
To My Reviewers:
O.K. Very happy, 30 reviews! It's the impossible for me!!! Thank you my lovely reviewers you all rock!!!!!!!!
Jinxeh: Glad you like that change purse bit, it came to me at one point, I'd totally forgotten it was in your story… Sorry if you think I nicked it from you!!! So sorry you didn't want Jack to be captured, (Hear what now about the name?!?!?!) I take it from the capitals telling me off about my second doubts on my story that I should carry on regardless of what everyone else says super happy you think it's aweshome!! I'm continuing mainly for you, seeing as you appear to be my most loyal reviewer (I swear this chapter had been up for no more than 45 minutes before I found your review, how do you do that?!?!?) You do not need a new weapon… unless it's a new poker… Pokers are the best!!!! Jack's saved YAY!!
Tinkthefairy: O.K, MSN must be messed up or something coz I only found these messages when looking at my stats to check what chapter is going up next (stupid P.C.) I never noticed the Tarrow, Sparrow thing, that's quite scary! Glad you think it's different to other Jack daughter stories, it's hard to make it so it is. Nakada is a wicked name, it's spooky when people name Jack's daughter Jacqueline, but it's kinda easy to guess who they are the daughter of! Did anything happen when you said Nakada 3 times (tries it for myself) Is it that easy to work out that Nathan (growls evilly) will get off the island?? (I know if he does or not, I've got the 15 chapter waiting already) Nice poem, very nice. Yay! I have good writing (laughs in the face of evil teacher who disagrees) Yay! Jack saved (victory dance)
I should stop drinking coffeee and listening to music by The Buggles and The Bloodhound Gangbefore I reply to reviews!!!!!
I am very angry with the rest of you!! Where are you??!!?? I have had no reviews off noone except Jinxeh &Tink for ages. Do you not like me??? (Gets very upset and cries in the corner)
Review please!!!
