Hey! How are you? I know I've been kinda long...but I'm still on the first page! Oo So I have one review to anwser and another to correct.
To SpiritPheonix: Sorry...I meant NOT really good to write in english. But each time I improve myself.
To ChibiTetra: Hehe (cough) Actualy, somtimes I don't know who's talking myself.(cough) I'll work on that. Anyway, thank you!
Mattias thought about something. He quickly ripped Solaca's shirt left shoulder so he can feel more her hearth, he put his ear against it. Nothing. The Clavat opened her mouth and placed his lips on hers to bring air to her lungs before he made pultions on the place of Solaca's hearth. Mattias relistened to the beat. Nothing again. He tried again, and again, and again, in fact, he tried five time. Mattias gave up, he lead beside his friend and talked
Life is so unfair, Solaca. We just started our adventure and you're already leaving me. I swear your village will receive myrrh and lot of it. There's just something and wanted you to know...
Mattias let his head down agaisnt her breast, he heard something. A beat, a really weak one, but a beat. He smiled, Solaca was alive; he slapped her gently on the cheek. Solaca gasped at the oxygen burning her lungs before leaping for the pain. Mattias didn't wait for the Selky to start the conversation, he hugged her.
You're alive! You're alive! YOU'RE ALIVE!
Mattias, what happened? I don't remember a thing.
After the terodactyle dropped you, you wasn't breathing, I tried to reanimate you but failed. I thought you were...gone.
You really tried to bring me back? That's really kind. Solaca said as she blushed; Mattias! You're hurt.
It's nothing just some scratches
Wich wasn't true. Bruishes were burning his cheeks and a sharp red line was running across his shirt
We can't continue, you're too wounded. Solaca declared as she made a pression on the hot spot located on his chest
We're too far, we continue.
But you won't make it.
Talk about yourself! I'll carry you to the caravan and go shearch some myrrh.
If you're going, I'm following.
Okay! Okay! Don't argu, I got it! You go wherever I go.
Mattias freed her, she got up but collasped. She had fallen from like three floors, her ribs didn't make it. The boy passed Solaca's arm around his shoulders but he noticed something, he was growing weaker too. The poison. The poison made them more vulnerable to everything; wounds, ennemies, emotions. Whatever they had, they were tirying. They made it to the myrrh tree in lot of troubles. They were walking side by side when Mattias stepped against something and end up on the ground. It was a small green thing with big theet and planty of eyes. Mattias kicked it in frustration, big mistake. The malboro lended on a mushroom and sucked his energy. It grew enormous all of sudden. Solaca turned her head and freezed while Mattias was making his way to the tree
Are you coming? he asked in a cough
M-m-matt...
What is it?
Solaca just poited the thing.
Oh my gosh!
The malboro smiled, showing all his cutting theet. Mattias and Solaca firstly didn't have a reaction but then screamed and ran to the tree. They litterly pitched the chalices on the stadium. Luckly, the monster was too disturbed at crushing Mattias to bother about it. After the really long three minutes, they were making a run-for-it with the chalices filled at the half.
At the second they climbed in the caravan, both fallen of tiredness, wounds and sickness. The thing who was pulling the caravan started to walked slowy like he didn't want to wake his masters. The poison had a terrible effect on the teens, they didn't have the strengh to get up and heal themselves and the poison was making every single scratch hurted in four time worst. The animal was automaticly leading to Solaca's village but two presons stopped it at the half.
You think they'll be alright? asked a girl
If we stay with them, yes. They really had been beaten hard. responded an older boy
I couldn't kill Solaca...She's my main caracther with Mattias
So, I'll send the fourth Chapter as soon aas I can
Review please!
