In Ze Mall
Ren: sorry i havent updated in so long, my internet died on me, again, 5th time in the past 3 months. Could this be an omen...?
Kai: Hn. probibly
Bob and Frank (mb): Take it as an omen and go burn things....oh crap Franks asleep again he crushin my foot....
Ren: Hey guys unless you lot havent noticed the chapters already updated and your talking to yourself. People are getting bored and it would be a nice treat if something went right today...
Kai: you cant blame us for what happened, its your fault for standing up for yourself...and the havoc with the music concert was all your doing to.
Ren: hey its her fault she is such a control freak. I put my...abilities to create mayhem to better use. I think she would be a perfect match fot Voltaire (im talking about my music teacher here people).Anyway...ahem...back to the fic....
Disclaimer: As much as id like to i own nothing, nowt, well i do but nothing to do with beyblade....except Serenity and Sakura are mine, ALL my own characters and the weird old lady, and the cat, thats about it. Anything else is just a coincidence. Do not sue, there is no point, seriously no point.
"speech"
/thought, mind, subconscious, mouthing, lil mind bunnies or whatever anyone calls the little voice in your head/
Normal POV
Kai was resting his sore arm and leg on top of the bus. His leg was throbbing and it had been giving him painful twinges ever since his ungraceful landing on top of the bus. He was really starting to get ticked off; his day was not going according to plan. Life was so unfair. To make matters worse Kai was almost positive that something was at least fractured, though the pain was slowly going away. He carefully shifted along the cold metal until he hovered above the darkened skylight, wincing slightly at the receding pain Kai peered through the window and saw Serenity and Sakura talking on the back seat. Suddenly there was a crash of thunder, and a huge bolt of lightening came soaring down to the ground in the distance. Serenity jumped out of her seat while Sakura trembled clinging tightly to the seat. Cats don't like the rain. The clouds darkened but no rain fell, Kai was cursing God under his breath, he better not let it rain, he was really not in the mood to get wet. Kai didn't believe in God but it was always nice to have someone to blame when things went wrong, just like now. He looked back through the window and watched her again for the second time that day. Sakura had handed Serenity an earphone and they were swaying along to the music. The bus then sharply turned a corner and Ren and Kura slammed against the window. Serenity's face was pushed into the window and her body was pinned there by Sakura. The bus righted itself and they sat there laughing their heads off. Kai watched amused as he gazed at his kitten, a strange feeling was growing in his stomach it felt like a million butterflies were trying to escape and he was all tingly. He wasn't quite sure what that sensation was but it felt oddly nice, in a weird way of course, because Kai wasn't into the emotional side of things. He just didn't do emotion.
At last the bus came to a stop outside a big shopping complex. Kai quickly leaped off the top of the bus making sure he wasn't spotted. As soon as he landed safely on the ground he sped off into the crowd, blending in immediately just as the rain started to fall. Sakura grabbed their bags and jumped out of the bus. Serenity grabbed her jacket and rushed after her.
"Hey Kura wait up" Serenity yelled as she chased after her.
"Awww, poor ickle Ren cant keep up," mocked Sakura in a sickly sweet voice as she ran off.
"I can keep up you evil baka," retorted Serenity as she slowly caught up with her mate easily loosing the distance between them. "I said wait up!" She grabbed Sakura's long red hair and yanked it playfully.
"Ow…let go, let go you mean little…" She stopped when Ren let go of her hair and gave her a cute puppy dog look. "Im sorry, please don't hurt me," Serenity pleaded. Sakura folded her arms and scowled.
"One of these days Ren, very soon, I'll kill you, I mean it and no-one will find your body, I'll hide it so well." She gave a sideward glance at Serenity and noted the apparent guilty, sad, overly large eyes and trembling lower lip (faked obviously), and her hands clasped tightly together. Sakura then added, "But not today, I promised Chelsea that I wouldn't kill you until after her birthday, plus we have shopping to do and I need you credit card," Serenity rolled her eyes at this, "And then we have the sleep over, so I guess maybe I'll have to just fit it in after Christmas. And for Kami's sake stop giving me that look, your starting to make me feel guilty not to mention sappy. Im sorry ok?" Serenity's eyes lit up and she jumped into the air.
"Oh yeah, Ren 1, Kura nil," laughed Ren.
"Oh god not that again" she muttered as she watched her mate do a little victory dance in the rain. "And you really should stop taking that drama course, it's making you more unbearable than you already are." Kura added as an afterthought.
They stepped into the mall, glancing briefly at all the different shops. Serenity then pulled Sakura to a stop in front of a huge sitemap, which had a red arrow pointing to a dot that said
'You are here'.
"We are here," declared Renity as she traced the arrow with a slender finger.
"Never" mumbled Sakura sarcastically while rolling her eyes.
"What?"
"Oh nothing I was just thinking that we could start near the other side of the mall and work our way back"
"Good idea, but that's not what you said" Sakura glared at her friend, /curse her and her cattish hearing, its so unfair/. They both started walking towards the escalator past the fake palm trees in pots. /I don't even know why they bother with the trees they look so tacky/ thought Sakura as she glared at a particularly shabby tree.
"I guess you still don't like the trees then Kura?" asked Serenity a slight grin tugging at her lips, while Sakura continued to glare at each tree while they slowly moved up the escalator.
"Hn." Was the pleasant response she got. Serenity grabbed the sleeves of Sakura's black shirt and dragged her into a near by shop.
"Hmmm, Kura wanna help me look for some scented candles?" asked Serenity
"K, what sort d'ya want?" her attention snapped back to Serenity.
"Dunno," they walked carefully past the isles of candles and decorative ornaments, and headed towards the back of the shop. There was a large wall with shelves attached, slightly hidden away from the rest of the shop. "Oh pretty," mumbled Serenity as she took a few more steps towards the row of shelves, the odd thing was it only really had one ornament, and she felt strangely drawn to it, like it held great power or something like that. It was a beautifully carved phoenix clutching a yin and yang symbol in its talons. The stone was a deep black colour with splashes of other colours illuminating its surface. Whatever angle you looked at it a different colour twinkled back at you, green, blue, red, gold. Underneath the phoenix was a pattern of clouds holding special gems like diamonds, rubies and sapphires that gleamed up at you out of the darkness. Above the phoenix was a strange dragon-like creature with white-feathered wings arching over the creatures, its mouth was open and an egg shaped ball was in its mouth, it looked like an odd version of the globe, with green parts surrounded by blue.
"It's so beautiful," murmured Serenity, her eyes transfixed on the phoenix. She reached out her hand to touch it. She was inches away when someone put their hand on her shoulder. Serenity jumped at the touch.
"I wouldn't do that if I were you". An old Chinese woman with tightly bound white hair placed neatly in a bun on her head appeared behind her. Serenity's fingers stopped mere millimetres away and turned around shaking her head gently. She looked up slightly confused. Sakura was nowhere to be seen.
"W…w who are you and w…what do you mean?" stuttered Serenity, she wasn't sure why but she had a strange feeling in the pit of her stomach, and she couldn't quite place the feeling. Sakura appeared suddenly by her side out of nowhere and looked pale and slightly dazed.
"Its sacred." Stated the old woman. A shocked look appeared on Serenity's face, but the woman just glanced at her and continued unperturbed, "It fell from the heavens, and was foretold that only the phoenix may take it. For he is the one who is bound by the ethereal light, he is the one who has learned trust, love and to experience emotion. He will be the one to posses it, and it is said that he shall offer it as a token of eternal love to his light, the one who will save him from the dark that may consume his heart." She fell silent, and stared intently at Serenity. When she received no look of understanding she started to talk once again. "You must be tired. You and your friend shall sit down and have some nice green tea." Before Serenity could offer some sort of protest the woman pulled them into a room that they hadn't noticed before and sat them down on some carved wooden stools. She set out busying herself with making the tea, Serenity and Sakura offered to help her, but the woman shushed them, and told them that she could manage. So they sat there in silence, Sakura still looked a bit dazed, but the colour had returned to her cheeks, and Serenity felt completely out of it, she hadn't got a clue what was going on. The old woman returned clasping a tray containing a pot if green tea and 3 small china cups. She handed each one a cup and then gave them a fortune cookie.
"Oh I like fortune cookies!" said Sakura simply, "I remember my mum giving me one before…before she went away." She looked down at her shoes. The Chinese woman looked sympathetically at Sakura for a moment, but then looked back at Serenity, who was staring fixedly at her cup. The woman waited for a response, but she realized after five minutes of pointed staring that she wouldn't look at her, so she gave a distinct cough. Serenity looked up at her. Then put the fortune cookies into her pocket.
"Maybe I should explain?" the girls gave a slight nod, "Yes, well I suppose I should start at the beginning. It all began a very long time ago when a prophetess foretold of an event in the distant future, her name was Serentime Aneka. She had the ability to see events that have been, will be and are. She could have what we might call visions, but the rules to seeing these visions were vague and often occur when you least expected it. They can come in the form of dreams, or when the body is in its conscious state, it is the feeling of being consumed. Either way the visions are mainly very painful. There is a special stone to numb the pain when visions occur, but the said stone hasn't been seen for the last millennia. Anyway, she was under orders to protect the city of Molosis, for as well as being a prophetess she was the guardian of Time and Death, therefore the protector of Life. In that time there had been many chosen people to be in the Guard but over time the Guard had fallen and she was the last one. She had all the responsibility that many people had held before her. But the problem arose when she saw the uprising of evil in a dream. The leader of this evil organisation was called Voltarian; he swore that he would rule the world, and that he would take over it with the aid of perfection. It was said that he had been trying to create perfection, in the form of the ultimate human. He almost succeeded but Serentime set out to destroy his plans. When the final confrontation happened his biggest mistake was trying to change the correct course of Time, he tried to alter the future. When he was in the battle he found that the balance of good outweighed the balance of evil. He ordered the battle to halt and demanded that the prophetess should fight him and him alone, one-on-one. She accepted and fought him. Only he had set at trap and tricked her. When she fell he bound her and left her to die in a cell near modern day Russia. But by some twist of fate she escaped. Sadly the weakened prophetess was no match for Voltarian, since in her absence he had gained much power and control. Before she condemned him with the last of her power she had a vision, she knew she would die, but the order of balance would be restored. In this vision she saw the future, and an event that couldn't be changed she saw you and Sakura." The old woman took a deep breath and stared at Sakura and Serenity, her wise eyes scrutinizing the reaction of the girls. The tea had long ago been forgotten. "She knew that history would try and repeat itself, for she had also seen four boys, two good and two with evil in their hearts. They were destined to be together, but the boys trying to gain the girls trust would end up in a struggle that only the girls could resolve, in that struggle the girls must save the good in them. Your hearts must guide you to the goodness in their hearts, but you must only trust the good, for your final decision, will be very important, the two boys names are…" A loud knock was heard on the door to the room. "Excuse me" She picked herself up and squinted through the hole in the door. "Oh no, girls you must hide, here climb into this box." She ushered them into a large box in the corner while Sakura shoved herself into a closet. "Be still and keep quiet, I'll get you out soon." She walked over to the door and quickly opened it. Standing there was a clocked figure, though you couldn't see his face, he gave the aura of someone very powerful. He towered over the old woman and turned to look around the room. She stared defiantly up at him, while he just smirked; it sent chills down your spine. The woman gave an involuntary shiver and looked worriedly around the room. The man stepped into the room making the old woman back into a corner. She cowered in fear while he paced agitatedly around the small room. He stopped when he came to the cups of tea.
"I see you've had visitors," stated the old man calmly. "Maybe they are of great interest to me, these visitors? What did you tell them? Tell me who came." He strode towards her, and lifted his staff as if he was going to strike her. "Answer. Now"
"No, no one of interest to you sir, only my nieces from China, they came to see how I was doing, and I told them nothing. They left hours ago. Just please don't hurt me, I have done what you asked of me" He gave a cold evil laugh, and knocked the tray of cups and tea to the floor with a loud crash.
"The cups were still warm you fool, you even lied to me, when the evidence is right in front of me. I believe you have betrayed me, after I ordered you specifically not to help the girls. I cannot have them ruining my plans. This time I will succeed; I will finish my ancestors' plans, you shall not alter the course of time again. And since you have such a desire to revolt against my plans you will be punished, and if I even catch you thinking of disobeying me again, you will die." He walked around the room again taking in the room's appearance; he strode right past Sakura's hiding place more than once, but he never stopped by it for long. He walked to the door. "I will expect you in my office at 7, and I will receive a full explanation to your disobedience and act of defiance. You better not be late."
"Yes Voltaire," she bowed her head and he left the room, his long cloak billowing behind him. She let out a relieved sigh and went to let out Sakura from her closet. Sakura tumbled out of the closet grabbing her bag and jacket. Then they hurried over to Serenity, she pulled herself out of the box and picked up her things.
"What was that all about?" asked Sakura slightly confused with the news just given to her.
"I was trying to help you, with the turn of events that the world is experiencing, you need all the help you can get. You must leave this shop now, it is not safe here any longer, im sorry I could not have been more help, and I will try and speak to you again soon. Remember I am your friend, but watch out, there are traitors from the past that are trying to get you, and they are not your friends. Voltaire must not find you; you are the ones who can stop his plans once and for all, believe in what your hearts are telling you, that is your greatest power. When your next change occurs I will be there and I will try and help you then. Hurry you must go now." The woman pushed the girls through the maze of shelves that filled the shop. When they reached the door Sakura turned around to look at the woman.
"Who are you by the way? You never told us your name,"
"My name is of no concern to you at this point in time, though you will find out soon enough, you must go now. But I can offer you this bit of advice, when you see and pain fills your heart embrace it and let it run its course. Do not struggle against it, the truth will be revealed before death claims you." she tried to push them further away from the shop.
"Im sorry we got you into trouble we didn't mean it, but I still don't understand, tell us more," persisted Serenity, they both wanted more answers; things were getting more and more complicated.
"It doesn't matter, now you must go, if Voltaire catches you, it will be worse for all of us especially you, don't let what I've said trouble you minds, you will forget it all soon enough, but it will always be in the back of your mind guiding you, now I must leave, Sakura you dropped something," she picked up two rings and handed them to Serenity and Sakura.
"But these aren't ours," she turned to look back at the old woman but she had already disappeared, she was nowhere in sight.
"Where did she go? It's like she just vanished," Serenity said sounding surprised. "This is too weird, lets go get a drink." They set of walking to a nearby café; it was small but really popular, really useful for meeting people. They entered the café, and the smell of freshly ground coffee filled your senses making you feel slightly lightheaded. The café was busy but there was a small table tucked away in the corner that no one seemed to have noticed.
"Wow that was lucky, there's a table over there." Sakura pointed to the table and they headed straight towards it. They sat down dumping their bags onto a free chair and settling into the comforting atmosphere. They ordered their drinks and started talking.
"This day has gone from weird to plain unbelievable, I just can't get my head around it," Serenity said while taking a long drink from her mug.
"Yeah, but there's something really important I need to talk to you about first, I don't know what you'll say, I know it's a bit strange but still, I need someone to talk to about it."
"Me to, but I'll let you go first."
"Ok. It all started bout two days ago when I was in my room, I thought I'd call you but I had some work to do first. I did the work, but by the time I'd finished, it wasn't a good time to call you, cause you said that you were going out later with some friends, out to visit someone or something, so I decided to go for a walk. I was walking by the park past those shops, when I thought I heard someone following me, it was late and no one else was out so I turned to look, but there was no one there. I carried on walking and I decided to go through the park past the lake, so I cut through. Then I definitely heard someone following me, so I turned but there wasn't anybody there again. I walked for another 5 minutes and I was a bit tired so I sat down on a bench, and someone started to talk to me. Then this guy cam out of the trees, he was seriously cute, he had blood red hair and ice blue eyes. He sat down next to me and carried on talking to me, then he said he new who I was and stuff like that I was seriously freaked. So I got up and tried to walk away, but he kept following me, so I ran off and he chased after me so I kicked him in the stomach, I guess that training came in useful
after all, even though the conditions for learning all that stuff wasn't that nice. But anyway, he fell over and I ran off, I knew I shouldn't since he was hurt, but he really shook me. I sat down another bench and I fell asleep by accident. The thing was I woke up in my apartment in bed, and there was a cup of water by my bed with my shoes on the floor. I think this guy…Tala…that's what he said his name was. I think he took me home and that's how I ended up there, I don't think he's bad. But I had this weird feeling that I've met him before. Anyway he said that he would watch over me, and I've seen him around, always keeping himself hidden, but I still know he's there. So what do you think? I bet you think Im crazy now," Sakura looked at Serenity. Serenity just sat there, thinking over what her friend had just said, uncertainty creasing her young face.
"What are you thinking Ren?" asked Sakura slightly worried, her mate had been acting weird ever since she had seen her that morning, and then the shock of seeing her in that state, and what had taken her so long to open the door, she new she was coming over to her flat so what was up. It was like she was in another world. "Hey, earth to Ren, Kura speaking. Helloooo…"she poked Ren in shoulder.
"Huh…what, oh sorry, it's just something like that happened to me,"
"Want to talk about it?" suggested Sakura
"No, it's just my whole world seems to be changing, and I can't keep hold of it. My life seems to be falling apart right in front of me, and there is nothing I can do about it, I can't handle it. I mean I've been having those dreams, my schoolwork is going down hill, and then there are all these revelations about our past and future. I mean, I haven't done anything to deserve this, I can't handle this emotional stress, but I guess we're gonna have to stick together for a bit, until all this goes away or something happens."
"I think that's a good idea, maybe I'll get some clothes and stuff and I can have your spare bedroom, I don't think we should be so far apart when something bad could go wrong in this state." They both nodded their heads in agreement. They finished their drink and practically forget about previous troubles. The room became very hot and the smell of coffee intoxicated the room.
"My heads starting to spin bit, I have like a huge headache, must be all the coffee in the air." Serenity mumbled while clasping at her pounding head.
"Are you sure your ok?" asked Sakura concerned,
"Yeah I'll be fine, im just going to the toilets to clear my head, I'll be out soon, don't worry" Serenity stood up feeling a bit wobbly on her feet like she'd had to much alcohol. She stumbled towards the toilets grabbing the door handle to steady herself. /What's happening to me? /. She struggled to open the door, after a huge push using most of her energy to open the door she managed it. Serenity fell into the small room keeping hold of the sink to stop herself from falling over, she looked into the mirror /what's going on, why am I feeling like this? /. The room started spinning, colours flashing in front of her eyes. She held onto the sink with the last bits of strength, but she couldn't feel anything so she gripped harder. The room was going black around her; she slipped and fell to the floor banging her head on he rim of the sink. As she fell into unconsciousness the last thing she could remember thinking was /what's happening? /.
"Ren wake up,"
She was in total darkness /where am I? /. There was no light, just complete blackness all around her, she moved her head to look at her hand but there was nothing there. It was like she didn't exist. There was someone calling her name, she didn't know who it was either friend or enemy, she hadn't a clue and she didn't care, the words sounded familiar but the actual voice sounded blurred and distorted, maybe it wasn't really a voice, the possibility was that it could be some new sound, one that didn't register in her mind. The only bit of reason in her mind told her that she was somewhere in darkness, possibly in her imagination, all sense of time was lost, the only thing that she was certain of was that she just knew that she needed to get out of the darkness that was consuming her clouding her already dampened senses. Serenity struggled forward reaching out in front of her grasping at thin air trying to stop her hitting anything that could be hiding in the dark around her. It was like trying to walk on foam she felt unbalanced, and the part of her that she thought was her legs felt numb like someone had given her morphine or some-sort of anaesthetic. It was like moving through water, there was something but it wasn't solid, it was like she had no body, completely weightless. Only her mind and conscious thought was working, everything else seemed more like a dream than anything else. As she tried to move forward she picked out a difference in the darkness. It was like being in a pitch black room, no light, nothing, and then somehow being able to see something different a bit a darkness that didn't fit, a wall of a different colour. She stepped towards the wall; it was tall and straight reaching up into the abyss around her. When she reached it the wall she found a door, it was then same height as her but instead of being black it was a darkened grey, it was open, so abandoning all sense of caution she went through. Colours rushed past her eyes, the light momentarily blinding her, feeling flooded through her limbs, another flash of colour ad her head hit something solid and cold. Her eyes flickered open adjusting quickly to the bright halogen lights above her. Serenity lifted up her hand to shield her eyes, groaning slightly as the pain shot through the back of her head. Her hand was covered in blood; most had dried onto her hand and lower arm but was soon being replaced with more blood.
"Ah shit, ow my head. Hurts. Pain. Stop talking, maybe you'll just die and this will all seem like a dream" Serenity closed her eyes and tried to get her thoughts in order. Motion, feeling and senses had returned and now she intended to workout what the fuck was going on.
"Oh my god your alive!" pain lit up around her chest as someone tried to hug her tightly.
"What the…oh crap, I knew it was going to be a bad day, and to top it off im now being attacked," mumbled Serenity as she tried to role over and curl up into a ball, the thought of opening her eyes to the scene around her was too difficult to contemplate, never mind actually doing the opening of her eyes. All this thinking was making her brain hurt, this was all too much.
"What are you doing, you can't go to sleep here, your stuck in the middle of the girls' toilets for Christ's sake, what the hell were you doing in here anyway, you made a right mess,"
"Wha…toilets…were am I?" Serenity decided that this was too difficult to think about with her eyes closed. She let out a small groan of annoyance and opened her eyes, only to be greeted with the face of Sakura peering over her; she promptly shut her eyes again.
"Come on Ren, open up your eyes, we need to get you out of here before that old lady comes back, So come on open your eyes pleeeeease," Sakura started to poke Ren, pleading wasn't her thing, poking on the other had was her speciality and she did it very well, she knew exactly what to do, and always got what she wanted. Serenity's eyes flashed open.
"Urgh, I fell terrible your gonna have to tell me what's going on and help me out, and Jesus, stop poking me!"
"Im not Jesus," puzzlement briefly filled Sakura's face.
"I didn't mean it like… oh never mind, just help me up,"
Sakura managed to pull Serenity up and to get her sitting on the top of a loo seat in one of the toilets. Sakura scrutinized Serenity for a minute, now Serenity was looking worse than before.
"You're going to have to tell me were it hurts, you know like what's wrong with you so we can sort it out. In know your hands are cut so we're gonna need bandages for that what else?"
"Well, my head feels like someone's hit me over the head with a sledge hammer, and my eyes hurt, there's a numb pain all over my body, and I feel like im gonna be sick." Sakura edged out of the cubicle so she was a safe distance away from Serenity in case she did 'have to be sick'.
"Right, so that's bandages for your hands, nurofen for the pain or paracetamol im not sure, damn what the hell happened anyway, this is another thing your gonna have to explain." Sakura crossed her arms and sighed.
"No they both do the same, anyway what am I gonna do when your getting all this? Wouldn't it be easier just to use the first aid kit in my bag?"
"What, how come you have a first aid kit in your bag, you make me do all that when you could just go in your bag, God your such a pain in the ass,"
"That I maybe, but just get over it, now come on and help me out, im sorry okay?"
"Fine but just don't expect any…" Sakura cut off her sentence and faced the door. Loud voices were coming from the other side and getting louder, as the voices came closer it sounded more like one voice but you couldn't be sure. Sakura quick in here, Serenity held the door open and Sakura rushed inside locking the door behind her.
"Why are we even hiding? And with a locked door!" Serenity exclaimed while putting her hand over her mouth to stop herself sneezing.
"I just have a bad feeling, anyway we need to get you to be cleaned up and sorted out put before anyone sees you like that," Sakura stated while trying to peer around the door without opening it.
"Hey what's wrong with me? I look fine," Serenity looked at her reflection in a mirror on the back of the door. Sakura had a smug look on her face, "Oh fine, so I do need to get cleaned up, happy now?" Sakura nodded her head. Just then the door opened, and the voice stopped talking, Sakura and Serenity looked underneath the door to see who had entered the toilets. Sakura managed to stop herself from letting out a gasp of surprise, as she recognized the shoes and trousers, belonging to the stranger.
/Who is it? /mouthed Serenity,
/Tala, I think, but im not sure/
/What's he doing here? /
/I don't know, should I ask him? /
/No, lets wait and see what happens, but we should go as soon as possible/
They carried on watching the movements of the stranger; he seemed very agitated pacing quickly from one end of the girls' toilets to the other.
"Damn, that old woman said that she saw a girl injured in the toilets, so where is she now, and there's no god damned sign of anyone being in here. Oh well this is a nice predicament, I should go back outside and see if Hiwatari is out there he'll now what to do, those evil traitors better not have found her or that other girl, and great to top it off im stuck in the girls' loos, better go find him," Tala stalked out of the loos, heading towards the opening of the café. Serenity and Sakura peered around the door and rushed to the exit, not wanting to get involved with the day's complexities. Serenity pulled Sakura into a nearby shop; the quietness and stillness encased them as they decided what to do next. The next state of play has begun and the wheel of life is turning…
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Ren: sorry i could resist putting that really random sentence in at the end. I hope you very nice people out there will reveiw and i would like to than everyonw who has reveiwed: Pishcules- im sorry Bob and Frank came back said summit about you wanting to kill them....you have my permission to kill them.
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