So 4 reviews? Not 5? But oh well here's chapter 2
Chapter 2: Conan's murder mesteryAt Teitan Elementary School; Conan's school
The next day Conan goes to school thinking about nothing, but the case he has stumble into. Conan sits in class thinking; "Something wrong about this case, I know it was no ordinary murder or even a sauced, what is it, god damn it, WHAT IS IT?!" Conan contains to think why'll the class go though their math lessons.
"Mr. Edogawa!" the teacher shouts at Conan.
Conan looks around thinking 'I didn't do anything'; "Me? Ms. Takahashi?" Conan goes red as the class laughs. "Now, now class clam down." Ms. Takara says, "is something wrong Conan dear?"
"What? Wrong, of course... not... of course... not Ms. Takahashi." Conan stammers out.
"Do you need to see the noise, Conan?" Ms. Takahashi asks.
"N-no ma'am." Conan replies.
"Of course, but please do pay attention." Ms. Takahashi says to Conan.
"Damn woman I have more important stuff to worry over then this damn math, beside I could do it in my sleep." Conan thinks.
(So I'm not done I know; I'm sorry I can't think of anything, with this note the chapter well on... go but for now it to be contained. To all who are going to say something about my spelling; I know I need to fix it 'all' with your help maybe I can have better stories)
-Kouji Ginsenshi 9/22/04
