I'm baaaaack!!! Well, now I have up to 11 reviews and I feel happy!! The
third chapter really helped me set the base for this story, as you will see
in later chapters. Which, is really quite amazing since the third chapter I
did without thinking... (.) I think I'm going to have to keep this story.
You see, whenever I start a story, I do about three chapters then see what people think. This story, however, is still grabbing at me! I don't think I'm going to have a lot of writers block with this!
And now, without anymore rambling, I present the third chapter of Neighborly Love!
Title: Neighborly Love
Author: Zigi
Chapter: Three
That day was twice as hectic as yesterday. Some of it was due to the fact that some women thought it ok to come two weeks before their due date and the other half was Kagome's mind, still buzzing with all of the information she had gotten earlier that morning.
Apparently, Miroku had secretly moved away from his hometown, he and Sango had been a couple once, and Inuyasha, who was now her next-door neighbor, was a total sneak.
Twice she had walked into him this morning. He had somehow found a nurse outfit that fit him and had taken to exploring the hospital. The first time Kagome saw him, he was talking to one of the nurses, charm practically rolling off his body in waves.
Kagome had dragged him away while trying not to be sick and threatened to tie him to a chair. The second time was in the nursery where he was currently checking a baby's temperature. Kagome had waited until he was done, escorted him out of the room and had then threatened to deck him.
Kagome walked away wondering how he had even been able to get into the nursery. Kagome, who had been working there for almost an entire year, still had to show her I.D. to get in.
The end of the day came with relief as she thought of the nice bathtub that waited for her at home. Oh, and we mustn't forget the Aspirin! When Kagome entered the staff room, Sango, Miroku, and Inuyasha were all there. Sango and Miroku looked like they were ready to kill.
Both were totally worn out from Inuyasha constant badgering and smirking.
"Leave me alone Inuyasha!" said Miroku for the fifth time, rubbing his temple in circles with his hands. "This is absolute torture!"
Inuyasha grinned. "I know, why do you think I'm doing it? This is payback for you leaving me without even a simple unsigned letter."
"Oh give it a rest Inuwasha," moaned Kagome, shaking her head. "They've had enough, leave them alone now."
"It's Inuyasha, first of all, and second of all how would you like it if they just left right now and never came back?" grumbled Inuyasha, throwing an annoyed look towards Kagome.
"I would be angry indeed but I know the only place they are going to today is to their homes." Said Kagome, yawning. "Which, in fact, is where I am going right now. Good bye." Kagome lifted her bag and slowly slouched her way to the door. About half – way down the hall Kagome bumped into the solid form of Koga.
"Hey Kagome," said Koga, giving a quick friendly salute. "How's it goin'?"
"Fine," Kagome mumbled. She was really not in the mood for this. Everyday Koga would ask her the same question:
"Would you be my woman?" She sighed. There it was again. Kagome knew he wasn't serious but she just wanted to go home and rest.
"Not today Koga. I just got off from a few long and difficult pregnancies and plus, I have a new neighbor that I'm just giddy about." Said Kagome, sarcastically. "He's rude, arrogant and selfish... Just the absolute perfect guy."
Koga laughed, his hands folding against his chest. "Sounds like this guy I knew in high school. Annoying he was, with his damn hair always in my face for soccer. I always thought it was a wig because of its color."
'Come on...' thought Kagome. 'Let me leave... please!'
"Damn silver hair..." muttered Koga quietly. Suddenly Kagome was no longer tired.
"Silver?" she asked again, her face trying not to gasp out laughing.
"Yea... I think his name was Inutrasha... hated him, he always beat me in soccer and would gloat about ii all the time."
"You mean Inuyasha right?" corrected Kagome. After that several effects were put into motion. Inuyasha stepped out of the staff room asking if someone called him just as Koga snapped his fingers saying yea! After that, the two of them stared at each other for a moment, both stopping in their tracts.
Kagome stepped back, not wanting to get in the way of their 'lovely reunion'.
Ok, yes I know... very short but I wanted to save the 'reunion' for next chapter, which will come out much quicker than this one did. And Now, on to reviews!!
Zeddy222 – thanks, I'm trying to make this a comedy but I'm not that great with funny stuff... sigh
Inuyasha292 – I know the chapters are short but I'll make sure I make A LOT of chapters to make up for their length. On occasion, I might make one longer but my minimum number of pages is at least three pages
Kagomegirl1 – I don't wanna e-mail it to anyone 'cause then that wouldn't be fair! But Inuyasha and Kagome won't be falling for each other for a long time but there will be fluff here and there
IYWriterGirl - I'd love to but which one!! Lol!
And last but not least:
TheForgottenChild – I won't forget you! Lol! You are the first reviewer to actually review more than once! Congrats! I'm glad it sounds interesting and I hope to see your name in every chapter review!!
HazelEyedFreak – I'm Jewish so I love your little comment! It's funny! I shall follow it with honor!! Lol!
Ahh... I love responding to those... Oh, Btw, there is another story with the same name that is really good! You should read it! If you do, could you just kind of mention whom you heard it from? Eh heh.... Ok! Until next time! Kagome needs me!
Zaa – zoom!!
Zigi
P.S. – I'm going to keep the note up so you guys know a new chapter is up. When you all review I'll take it down.
You see, whenever I start a story, I do about three chapters then see what people think. This story, however, is still grabbing at me! I don't think I'm going to have a lot of writers block with this!
And now, without anymore rambling, I present the third chapter of Neighborly Love!
Title: Neighborly Love
Author: Zigi
Chapter: Three
That day was twice as hectic as yesterday. Some of it was due to the fact that some women thought it ok to come two weeks before their due date and the other half was Kagome's mind, still buzzing with all of the information she had gotten earlier that morning.
Apparently, Miroku had secretly moved away from his hometown, he and Sango had been a couple once, and Inuyasha, who was now her next-door neighbor, was a total sneak.
Twice she had walked into him this morning. He had somehow found a nurse outfit that fit him and had taken to exploring the hospital. The first time Kagome saw him, he was talking to one of the nurses, charm practically rolling off his body in waves.
Kagome had dragged him away while trying not to be sick and threatened to tie him to a chair. The second time was in the nursery where he was currently checking a baby's temperature. Kagome had waited until he was done, escorted him out of the room and had then threatened to deck him.
Kagome walked away wondering how he had even been able to get into the nursery. Kagome, who had been working there for almost an entire year, still had to show her I.D. to get in.
The end of the day came with relief as she thought of the nice bathtub that waited for her at home. Oh, and we mustn't forget the Aspirin! When Kagome entered the staff room, Sango, Miroku, and Inuyasha were all there. Sango and Miroku looked like they were ready to kill.
Both were totally worn out from Inuyasha constant badgering and smirking.
"Leave me alone Inuyasha!" said Miroku for the fifth time, rubbing his temple in circles with his hands. "This is absolute torture!"
Inuyasha grinned. "I know, why do you think I'm doing it? This is payback for you leaving me without even a simple unsigned letter."
"Oh give it a rest Inuwasha," moaned Kagome, shaking her head. "They've had enough, leave them alone now."
"It's Inuyasha, first of all, and second of all how would you like it if they just left right now and never came back?" grumbled Inuyasha, throwing an annoyed look towards Kagome.
"I would be angry indeed but I know the only place they are going to today is to their homes." Said Kagome, yawning. "Which, in fact, is where I am going right now. Good bye." Kagome lifted her bag and slowly slouched her way to the door. About half – way down the hall Kagome bumped into the solid form of Koga.
"Hey Kagome," said Koga, giving a quick friendly salute. "How's it goin'?"
"Fine," Kagome mumbled. She was really not in the mood for this. Everyday Koga would ask her the same question:
"Would you be my woman?" She sighed. There it was again. Kagome knew he wasn't serious but she just wanted to go home and rest.
"Not today Koga. I just got off from a few long and difficult pregnancies and plus, I have a new neighbor that I'm just giddy about." Said Kagome, sarcastically. "He's rude, arrogant and selfish... Just the absolute perfect guy."
Koga laughed, his hands folding against his chest. "Sounds like this guy I knew in high school. Annoying he was, with his damn hair always in my face for soccer. I always thought it was a wig because of its color."
'Come on...' thought Kagome. 'Let me leave... please!'
"Damn silver hair..." muttered Koga quietly. Suddenly Kagome was no longer tired.
"Silver?" she asked again, her face trying not to gasp out laughing.
"Yea... I think his name was Inutrasha... hated him, he always beat me in soccer and would gloat about ii all the time."
"You mean Inuyasha right?" corrected Kagome. After that several effects were put into motion. Inuyasha stepped out of the staff room asking if someone called him just as Koga snapped his fingers saying yea! After that, the two of them stared at each other for a moment, both stopping in their tracts.
Kagome stepped back, not wanting to get in the way of their 'lovely reunion'.
Ok, yes I know... very short but I wanted to save the 'reunion' for next chapter, which will come out much quicker than this one did. And Now, on to reviews!!
Zeddy222 – thanks, I'm trying to make this a comedy but I'm not that great with funny stuff... sigh
Inuyasha292 – I know the chapters are short but I'll make sure I make A LOT of chapters to make up for their length. On occasion, I might make one longer but my minimum number of pages is at least three pages
Kagomegirl1 – I don't wanna e-mail it to anyone 'cause then that wouldn't be fair! But Inuyasha and Kagome won't be falling for each other for a long time but there will be fluff here and there
IYWriterGirl - I'd love to but which one!! Lol!
And last but not least:
TheForgottenChild – I won't forget you! Lol! You are the first reviewer to actually review more than once! Congrats! I'm glad it sounds interesting and I hope to see your name in every chapter review!!
HazelEyedFreak – I'm Jewish so I love your little comment! It's funny! I shall follow it with honor!! Lol!
Ahh... I love responding to those... Oh, Btw, there is another story with the same name that is really good! You should read it! If you do, could you just kind of mention whom you heard it from? Eh heh.... Ok! Until next time! Kagome needs me!
Zaa – zoom!!
Zigi
P.S. – I'm going to keep the note up so you guys know a new chapter is up. When you all review I'll take it down.
