FD: I have a few rules when you are reviewing my work. I will listen to you if you have complaints, but don't go overboard, like keep saying the exact same thing in the review. Like, if you have a problem with me using song lyrics in my stories, just say it clearly and once. If your reviewing and want me to change some things or explain some things, I will listen, and I will obey, just make it something that's related to my story and how I wrote it. Nothing crazy. Okay, as long as that is clear to you, anything else, sure, just e-mail me.
Yuji gasped at all this. Where was she? She remembered Oliver had taken her to a place in France, but then she fainted. Now where was she?
Yuji stood up and looked around. It was an enormous room. So fancy, so beautiful. Like as if a princess lived here. As Yuji approached the window, the door to the room opened and in walked Oliver.
"I'm sorry if you're uncomfortable, but I had to bring you to my home. Later we are meeting with some of my friends. I want you to come with me," Oliver said. "That is, if you want to come with me."
"Sure. I mean, I have nothing else to do," Yuji said. Oliver smiled, and his cheeks grew a little red. He did like her.
Yuji got dressed in different clothes, and walked out of the room. Like Robert's castle, Oliver's mansion had long, hallways, huge rooms, and enormous staircases. Yuji slid down the railing into the main hall where Oliver was waiting for her, and together they walked out the front doors into the enormous courtyard. Suddenly, the wind blew violently around them. Yuji looked up and saw a helicopter land only a few feet from them. A limo drove up next to the house. Getting off the helicopter was a dude with a weird purple hairstyle. Getting off next to him, and this caused Yuji to gasp, was Sarah. Getting out of the limo was a boy with spiked up red hair, and getting out behind him was Ines. Then two people came walking up to the mansion, a blonde boy, and Tiffany!
"What the hell?!" all four girls screamed in amazement.
"You girls know each other?" Robert asked.
"Know each other? Those three are my teammates and band mates! Along with being my best friends ever!" Sarah yelled.
"What?!" Enrique asked, turning to Tiffany.
"Well, yeah, we all grew up in the same city, on the same street, same school, same everything," Tiffany said.
"You're kidding!" Johnny said.
"No, we're not," Ines said.
Soon the girls and boys had to introduce themselves to the strangers, and soon everyone knew everyone. Then the girls had to explain a lot. Where they came from, how they got here, how they ended up with the boys, and each story was the same. All but Yuji's, that is.
"Wow, a regular Cinderella story," Enrique said. Tiffany punched him in the arm hard. "OW!"
They all cracked up. Then Sarah turned to Yuji. "So, Yuji, anything goin' on between you two?" she asked.
Yuji turned bright red, so did Oliver. "Why, is something going on between you and Robert?"
Sarah was turning red, and Robert, too. Then everyone could tell everyone was in love with someone. Robert smiled at Sarah who returned it, and then Johnny spoke up.
"Robert, you owe me a game of chess!" he yelled.
"When will you give it up, Johnny? I've beaten you like seven times in a row already," Robert said. Sarah covered her mouth to hide the smile.
"I am not going to stop until I beat you," Johnny said.
"I have an idea. I just wrote a couple of new songs, so while Robert and Johnny are playing chess, me and the girls can look them over," Sarah said. Yuji approached her and hit her softly in the arm. She clenched her teeth. Normally when Yuji did that, something was wrong. Sarah cleared her throat, like as if she was coughing, giving a sign to the other girls. They all exchanged looks and the four girls walked away toward the side of the mansion.
"Guys, something weird is going on here," Sarah said.
"Tell me about it. I actually think I'm...I'm in love," Yuji said. They all thought that. Each one of them had fallen in love with a boy they had only just met. Yet, Sarah was staying inside Robert's castle, not going to a hotel. Ines was holding Johnny's hand, which was weird. Tiffany, who would normally not fall with flirty boys, was actually laughing at Enrique's non-humorous jokes. And Yuji, who had swore never to fall in love again, not to like anyone like a soul mate, thought of Oliver as that very thing. And they all know the boys felt the same way.
"Well, maybe it's a sign. Maybe it's fate telling us it's time to love someone now," Sarah said. She smiled shyly as she watched Robert talk with the boys. He was definetly into her, she could tell.
"Well, let's have it a try. If we don't like it, we won't stay with them long," Yuji said.
"I have a feeling we're going to like it," Tiffany said. Sarah knew she was right. Sarah walked away from them and approached Robert. She grabbed his arm and rested her head on his shoulder. His face went red. The others exchanged looks.
"Robert, don't you think we should get going? It is getting pretty late," Sarah spoke softly. Robert nodded. He said goodbye to the others, and got into the helicopter.
As the two of them landed back in Germany, Sarah got off the helicopter and noticed they were no where near the castle, but in a beautiful park, the moonlight shining down on them. Robert got off after her and the helicopter flew away.
"Why are we here?" Sarah asked. Robert smiled and took her hand.
"I thought you might enjoy a small walk in the park on such a lovely night," Robert said, as they began walking on the sidewalk.
"Oh, Robert, that is so romantic," Sarah said. He had already stolen her heart. Must he still try to impress her?
Robert smiled. They walked together around the park for two hours at least, hand in hand. The stars sparkled above them, the moon smiled brightly and brilliantly on them. The trees that hovered over them all watched. It was such a lovely, romantic night.
Suddenly, Robert came to a stop in front of a huge, marble fountain, the stars reflecting off it and the water. The fountain was of a man and a woman, starring up at the sky, in the woman's hands was a beautiful swan taking flight, her hair billowing behind her. From the swan's mouth and over the man, who was taller, water sprayed majestically from it to the circular fountain below them.
"Oh, Robert, this is beautiful!" Sarah cried. Robert stepped back from her. "Everything okay?"
"Yeah, it's just..." Robert sighed. "Sarah, do you know I...I love you?"
Sarah smiled. "Yes, Robert, I do. It's easy to tell," Sarah said.
"Sarah, I don't mean to sound blunt or out of line, but, when I first laid eyes on you, it was... it was love at first sight," Robert said. "I hope you can understand that."
"I do understand, Robert," Sarah said. "And... to tell you the truth, I'm starting to fall for you myself."
"Really?" Robert asked.
"Yeah. I mean, love isn't something you lie about. It's either the truth, or you don't say it at all," Sarah said. She smiled at Robert, and he smiled back. She starred into his eyes, and his face lowered to hers. This time she did not move away, but lifted her face to his. Her lips barely brushed against his when he crushed his against hers. She savored the kiss, and so did he. It was so sweet, so gentle, that she returned it, only this time he placed his arms around her and deepened it. She moaned with anticipation, and the rest of the night just drifted from her mind, from her memory.
"Tiffany?"
"Yeah?" Tiffany turned to Enrique with a smile that quickly disappeared when she saw the look on his face. "Everything okay?"
"Well, no. Tiffany, do you like me?" Enrique asked. Tiffany's head tilted to the side in adoration. "Because...I mean, it's okay if you don't, but I just... I just..."
Tiffany placed a finger over his mouth to silence him. "Enrique, don't worry. I do like you, more than you think," she said. She leaned her face forward, and so did Enrique. Soon, their lips connected in a passionate kiss, Tiffany's hand lingering on the side of his face.
Yes, Sarah was right. They weren't going to leave these boys. They cared about them too much.
Ines starred out the window of the limo, sighing softly. It sure did get dark pretty quick. The moon was full and hung high in the sky, watching them as they drove deeper into Scottland.
"Hey, Ines?" Johnny spoke up after two hours of complete silence, which Ines still wasn't used to because her friends were always talking or arguing.
"Yes, Johnny?" Ines asked.
"I know... I know we don't have much in common. I mean, I always get angry or frustrated, and you're always so calm and peaceful. I always like to argue, or be heard, and you're always silent. We have so many differences. Do you think we have a chance together?" Johnny asked.
"Yes, Johnny, I think we do," Ines said. She scooted over closer to him. She didn't know what came over her, but as she starred into Johnny's eyes, she felt everything grow pleasantly numb. She grabbed Johnny's shoulders and brought him forward and placed her lips gently and softly on his. Waiting only for a second for him to respond, Johnny grabbed her arms gently and returned the kiss, but only harder. She closed her eyes and felt him bite down on her bottomlip. She moaned slightly and touched his face as he kissed her again.
"Well, good night, Yuji," Oliver said to Yuji as he walked away from her to the other side of the hall where a door was and disappeared behind it.
God! Yuji, you idiot! Are you going to let him think you don't care about him!
Yuji followed Oliver's footsteps into his bedroom, but to only find him on his bed, sighing sadly, muttering. Yuji approached him and touched his shoulder. He looked up at her and she smiled.
"In America, me and my friends would normally do something to our boyfriends when we had them before we would go to bed. Do you know what that was?" Yuji asked.
Oliver shook his head. Yuji smiled. "I'll show you the first bit, but you must make the rest," she warned. She brought her face to his and kissed him softly, yet deeply. He returned the kiss, and she clenched his shoulders with her hands, gently massaging them. He moaned slightly as she kissed him again, then his mouth moved down slightly to her neck where he nibbled gently.
"Oliver!" she moaned loudly as his hands moved to her chest. Then her hands moved from his shoulders to his waist. She and him fell to the bed. Oliver moaned as she kissed his neck deeply.
"Yuji, please, don't, if you don't need to," Oliver said as she unzipped his pants, moaning sexily. Oliver kissed her neck once again.
"No, Oliver, I need to. I love you, Oliver," Yuji said. She wrapped her arms around her waist and pulled him on top of her. He kissed her neck deeply and passionatly. He moved his body in motion with hers, causing her to moan loudly. "Oliver!" she moaned as his hands slipped under her shirt and his legs pushed into hers.
"I don't want to hurt you, Yuji. Please, let me stop," Oliver said. But no, she wouldn't. Her hands crawled up to his spine, massaging him. She whispered into his ear how she loved it this way, and if he would make it harder, she would love it even more. Oliver didn't want to. He had never done this before. But apparently she had. Her hands moved to her own waistband and undid her shorts. Then she pulled him back down, harder, pushing him into her.
"Oliver!" she yelled again as his body instinctively moved on hers. There was not one inch of their bodies that wasn't being touched by the other. Oliver's hand moved against her arm soflty as he lost controll of his body as it moved rythmically on her. She moaned again. It did hurt, but the pain was worth it. She loved him. If only he did it even harder. "Oliver!" she screamed. He had read her mind, and answered it.
"Oliver! Oliver! Oh, my God! Oliver!" Yuji screamed again. Oliver moved again rythmically on her, her head aching from hitting the headboard so many times. "Oliver! Oh, Oliver!" Soon Yuji forced all the clothing on the both of them off and as he banged her so rythmically, hard, and passionately, she moaned again. It was so hard, and yet she wanted it even harder. "Harder, please, Oliver. Harder." She cooned. Her hand gripped his green hair while his lips were busy on her chest, his hand on her legs and arms, and his legs were busy pushing and moving on hers. "OLIVER!" she screamed once more as it became harder. She wondered if it would get any harder, and it did. Soon she was screaming with every move he made. Her hand reached over him to the lamp from which she shut off the light, drowning them in darkness and passionate, rythmic grunting and moaning.
FD: A little too passionate, I think. If you like, review please. Anyways, next chapter will be up soon. Don't worry.
