Note: yah this is my first fic and i suck horribly but im trying very hard, meh meh .;

Diclamier: i own not Naruto...sigh pooh...

Naruto shuddered as he opened his eyes, letting out a smalll moan. The sound of soft laughter startled him, causing him to sit up. He glanced around to only find that he was in complete darkness...so dark he felt as if it was smuthering. He found his voice weak, much like he felt. "S-sasuke?" he whispered into the direct darkness before him.

"Silly Naruto." came the chilling voice "Who eles would it be?"

Naruto felt a growl push it's way up through his cheast and out his slightly parted lips. "What the hell do you think your doing, first you jump me, then you drag me off to some kinda pit hole of hell? What the fuck is your prob-" Naruto stopped as something roughly scrapped against his upper arm. He twisted around vioently, rising to his feet quickly. He tried to shake the feeling of what ever that that had been on his arm but it didn't go away. "Where the fuck are you?"

"Right here." came the soft reply of breath on his neck. Naruto scowled. and emidently turned around to face his oppent. But all he could see was the darkness. It didnt seem to end. 'Hell, i dont even know what the fuck this place looks like...' Naruto thought, blindly gropping the empty space before him.

"Oh, come now. I'm sure you know where I am." Once again the voice came from behind him, causing the hairs on the back of his neck to raise.

The sick sound of skin being broken and bitten through echoed through out the seemingly never ending dark, followed shortly by a scream of pain. Naruto fell to the ground, holding his shoulder as blood poured through his fingers and down his bright orange breaker. He huffed and made his way back up to his feet. "What the fu-" the words were forced back down his throat as he was knocked down by a blow to his delicate neck. Naruto hit the ground with a gasp, despretly trying to regain his breath. He gagged once, took in a shallow breath, and pushed himself back up to his knees.

"What's wronge, fox?" the other said, kicking the boy in the ribs sharpley, sending him into a damp wall. A sicking plop as the boy smacked against the wall. "Missing your friends?"

Naruto breathed in deep as he heard footsteps nearing his head. He opend his eyes to stare at a black boot. "Y-your not Sasuke." he gasped. His head throbbing and his breath coming in pants, he pulled himself to his arms, only to be pushed back down by the boot he'd glimpsed before forcefullylying on his head.

"Oh, look. He can be taught." the man said, laughing, "Yes, I'm not your Sasuke. I'm the one who fooled you, the one who even fooled the great Kakashi, if it was only for a moment..."

Naruto, foolishly rebeling against the force of the boot, painfully twisted his head to look up at his captor. The man towering over him looked down to meet his eyes. Naruto stared, trying to take in the face. A pair of green eyes, darkly tanned skin, a smile dripping with sadistic glee. A simple but well-worn brown shirt and a pair of matching dirty pants, cuffed at the heel. Naruto grunted as the boot became haevier with more force behind it. "Don't you dare look me in the eyes. An apprentince never should look it's master in the eyes." the man said almost as if he was speaking to an animal. Naruto sighed as the boot was raised. Then found a growl rising up in his throat.

"No. No Kyuubi." the man's voice was thick with anger. He kicked the boy in the face and smiled. "I will have none of that." he cracked his knucles and pulled out a kunai...With one foot he pushed up the back of Naruto's blazer and shirt and began slashing the skin deeply.Naruto only whimper, to weak to even moan. A few moments later he stood. "There. That should keep the demon at bay." he purred as he stared at the bloody sybol. "Well at least for mabye 3 years... which is all the time I need." he nugged Naruto with his foot. "Your going to refer to me as Master Kiyoshi. Nothing eles untill your able to beat me. Or your able to beat those Uchiha bastards. Which ever is first. Anyways," he said casually, " You go to sleep. I'll begin your training tommorow, Na-chan." Kiyoshi turned and left the boy to his privte hell of pain.

Naruto found it amazingly hard to get himself to turn to his back. He stared up at the darkness above him, all around him. 'How?' he began to wonder. 'All i did this morning was get up and do what I did everyday, go to the bridge, listen to Kakashi tell how we were off again, then...Sasuke...he left for awhile and came back...No! it was this bastard. Not Sasuke...Not my Sasuke. Why does this shit always happen to me? All I want to do is to live happy..." he felt his mind finally give up trying to attain conciousness and blacked out.

Thank you much much for the reviews. . i am sorry al my chap. ar e short but i am a wee bit of a starter. so plaese tryt not to be mad at me, neh? i will post as often as my scheduale allows. . i love you all. really i do...coz i am an attention whore. oh and if you want you can yell at me for hurting Naruto but i dont care

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