Hey! Man, is this story getting reviews or what!?
As some of you may know, I have decided to take out the religion due to certain reviewers views. If you want the original version of chapters two and three, you must e-mail or review me for me to send it to you.
Note- My cousin is going to write his first story for FF.Net and it is going to be under the Nightmare Before Christmas category. Also, we're planning to do a collab for Kingdom Hearts. Though there won't be any Yaoi, my cousin's character is a homosexual, which is a plus. My character is his... family in some way, we haven't quite figured it out. My character's name is Lucifa and his is Azarel. Sound good?
I have started an account with FictionPress.com. You can find me as 'ZephyrSage' and my first story is 'Elegy'. Go check it out if you want.
Another thing I need to ask of you reviewers as I asked in the revised versions of the past chapters: Do you want me to take this story up to the rating R? I haven't gotten anything bad about the story, but I'm thinking of broadening this story by adding something new. If any of you have read my other stories, Riku and Sora do nothing but hug and kiss. Well, Riku being seventeen ought to make a difference... Right? I mean, he's a growing boy and all and... are you getting the picture? This chapter will have a bit of what I'm talking about. Not much, but some. I want your next reviews to contain your idea about the rating if you wouldn't mind. But there will not be any lemon... and IF there is lime, it'll be soft and fluffy... I don't plan on risking my story anymore...
Thank you Soul-Spirit for reviewing Treasured Memories, Waiting to be With You, and Portrayal of Us!
A fan, cassidy dell, Rinoki Rio, Princess of Mirrors (Thank You so MUCH!), rikku, Kiera-Uchiha, Kingdom Hearts*309, hanachan, Kairi099 and many other reviewed this story. Thanks bunches!
Warnings- Yaoi, Abuse, Slavery, and others.
Anything having to do with Kingdom Hearts is under the copyright of Disney and Squaresoft. I do not own any of it.
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"Servants, Obey Thy Master"
Chapter Four- Acting Upon a Forbidden Love
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Riku was tidying up the area he was assigned to by the guard earlier that day. Other than being the prince's 'friend' and personal assistant, he also had to clean, wash, cook, and other assorted things that concerned the prince. Though, at first, Riku spited reluctance and hatred at it, he began to enjoy it more and more as time went on. One reason was that it was for Sora and the second reason was that Sora would usually come over and help him. Riku found that he especially enjoyed it when Sora came to help wash the floor... Sora bent over in a cute position was sometimes too much for the elder to handle. And just now, Sora was on the ground, reaching under the bed to retrieve something that had fallen.
"I can't get it..."Sora whispered in a huff, aggravated that his arms were too short to grab the object. He hated being so child-like in every way imaginable. He felt so helpless and the fact that he needed almost everybody's help only made things worse... But Riku seemed to like it when he acted so childishly and he wasn't about to pass that opportunity up. He thoroughly enjoyed being pampered by Riku's embrace and lips cascading upon him each time something horrible happened. It was rare, but each time it was worth the pain... Considering Riku's deep, sinful voice filling his ears with talks of sweetness and love. But Riku hadn't even said the obvious fact that he loved him and it nearly drove Sora mad for attention. For example, most nights when they would go out for their discussions, Sora would place himself lightly in Riku's lap and read a good bit out of a book he had been reading from before falling asleep while breathing the tropical scent of sweat and ocean that embedded itself in Riku's skin. He would then feel Riku pick him up and take him to his bedroom. And then it would all be over...
"Riku? Can you see if you can reach under here and get my comb?"
Sora saw Riku seize up like he had done each and every time Sora called his name in the previous month. It was cute, Sora thought as he scooted out of the way for Riku to kneel down and take a shot at retrieving the comb. Coming back up, he handed the silver-handled comb to the younger male before returning back to setting up the flower arrangements on the dresser correctly. "What do you think? Think I might get off another hour of beating?" Riku chuckled at his own joke as he saw the childish face of the angelic prince glare at him. He knew Sora didn't like to enter the subject of abuse and mistreatment but it was something Riku had to face in his new life. He had to clean for an hour of sanctity, he had to scrounge for food, and he had to comfort Sora just to get a few sweet words he understood the prince wouldn't say unless he was spoiled by his skillful hands. He knew what the chestnut-haired boy wanted and when he needed something. Riku had obviously picked something up from his mother along his seventeen year life span.
Sora walked up before huffing and throwing himself into Riku's masculine arms. He pouted slightly before glancing at the silver-haired islander. "Why do you joke so much? It makes me wonder if you're insane..." Riku laughed hysterically at the youth's comment. Sora had a canny way of being able to take all of the worry out of such a dangerous and hellish subject such as Riku's beatings. Sora was like one of those people who made a funny little mess out of everything... and that was one of those adorable little traits that Riku wanted to see more of.
Gently, Riku slipped one arm behind the lithe back of the prince and slouched down slightly to curl his other arm under Sora's knees. He raised the light body into his arms and chuckled mischievously at the deep blush that seeped from the heir's cheeks. Riku, being the freakishly strange and 'demented' person he was, kept torturing Sora more by twirling them around twice before walking around a bit around the elegant and spacious room that belonged to the seraph he was carrying. "Do you know how my parents went about their wedding?" Riku inquired, seeing Sora's curious gaze on his façade. "You were old enough to remember your parents' wedding?"
"I was about four. My parents couldn't have a formal, public wedding until I was about that age..." Grinning as if he were psycho, he leaned his head forward towards his desire, who blushed even more in return. "Well... do you wanna know or not?" Riku asked as he saw how uncomfortable Sora was becoming with each action he was placing upon the younger of the two. Sora gulped even harder and his azure irises hazed over slightly. Riku seemed very intent on telling him about the day of his parents' wedding... why? The innocent child didn't know... but it intrigued him immensely. "Um... s-sure..."
Riku softened his features before setting the prince down on his bed and sitting beside him. Laying back on his elbows, Riku blew his silver hair out of his aquamarine eyes before beginning his short explanation. "My dad carried my mom a lot," Riku said before straightening back up into a formal sitting position. "That's all I remember..." Sora raised an eyebrow skeptically, unable to believe that was all his friend was going to tell him. "That's it?" Sora asked sweetly, smiling mildly. "Yep..." Riku chuckled before pulling the prince in his lap and nuzzling the satin skin of Sora's neck with his face. So soft and silky... Riku dreamt of this each night when he was laying on the floor of the servant dorms one level lower. Each dream would be fluffy-like and filled with sweetness. Sora was just that; absolutely cute beyond anyone's wildest dreams.
Sora tilted his head over in response and closed his dark sapphire eyes quietly as he let Riku do as he wished. The elder's hot breath huffed against the sensitive epidermis of the heir and he began to squirm. Riku was always able to get him in this state when things seemed to become tight between them. However, this bond they had was more like a game of cat and mouse rather than 'I love you' straight out. It confused Sora and intrigued Riku. Riku was the malicious silver cat that trapped the young prince mouse whenever the cat felt like licking the mouse... and it worked every time...
"Ri-..." Sora began lean further in, his squirming becoming more eager. He found a loose hand of the elder and intertwined his long fingers with it as he began to move more and more in Riku's black-clothed lap. Riku's skillful tongue kept darting out and pinpointing his weak points each time it would come out to play. It was too much for the youth and aggressively, Sora turned fully and pushed Riku roughly down under him. Sora panted heavily, staring at the elder under him.
"Um... I...I..."
Chuckling, the silver-haired male caressed the soft, round cheek of the prince he treasured more than anything else in the kingdom with his gloved hand. A soft blush came across the flustered face and dark cerulean orbs darted out for light aquamarine. Riku gently grabbed Sora to bring the younger to lay on top of him and silence reigned supremely over them both. Sora's eyes drooped slowly before taking in the unbridled scent of his knight in shining armor. More so, the thought of the heir wandered beyond the embrace the older male had in comfortably in and into a region he had pondered over and over again, only to ask the same question he had come up with each time;
How long has it been since I first felt these feeling for you?
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Sorry it's short and sorry that it took so long. I just got a PS2 and Kingdom Hearts. So, I might be a little slow on updating. But worse yet, I find myself facing the mistakes I made in Treasured Memories. Any of you remember that story? Well, many of the scenes I wrote were completely based on a script I found. Now that I've actually seen the scenes, I found how screwed up they are... But I'll keep it the same nonetheless!
Also I would have typed more had it been that I kind of have a writer's block, meaning it might be a while till I come up with something good. BUT- I do have a good idea!
I want the reviewers to decide on this and the rating! Reply as fast as ya'll can! Now... ::picks up controller and starts playing K.H.::
