Disclaimer: I do not own love Hina.
Thanks to...Innotral, my writing sensei. -laughs-
Chapter One...
"Please don't Make me Cry."
He sat there, hopelessly lost in his own world. He cried there, forgetting shreds of pride he had left. He sang there, with a melancholy voice. Keitaro Urashima, age 20, a 2nd year ronin trying to get into Tokyo University. Shattered Dreams with a never-ending pain coming straight towards him. Hopeless ideas and imaginations to make things all better in the world he now lived in.
Nothing was better.
"Please don't make me cry."
It never occurred to him that days passed by so easily and it also never occurred to him that the girls were worrying their butts off. Kitsune stopped drinking sake and stayed quiet, unable to figure out the mysterious manager. Shinobu barely talked but still continued with her cooking skills and studies. Kaolla didn't attack him out of nowhere. Haruka didn't even visit the Hinata Dorm even if it is close enough. Motoko didn't insult Keitaro in anyways... such as physical abuse and verbal abuse and Narusegawa...
"True love can be so hard to find yet broken easily," Keitaro whispered, "that's what she said... I never knew..."
The Hinata House was always abnormal with crazy samurai tricks, inventions made courtesy of Su, and weird turtles attacking from the west. Although, this was stranger, it was quieter and silent; the silence of misery. The wind even sang with the sakura trees, its melenchaly melody made it even more depressing for the gang.
"Please don't make me cry... I know you know... just please don't make me cry... I'm just like you so just leave me alone... please don't make me cry."
It wasn't long until company came in his presence...
"Sempai, you've been in this room for two days everyone is worried," whispered Shinobu looking through the door.
Keitaro seemed unaffected, not hearing her words but just slipping into another of his fantasies. He was hurt, floundered, and stabbed directly in the heart. What more could it take to not answer to the sweetest girl?
"Sempai... please you've been in this room for so long."
His eyes traveled to the young girl's blue orbs, "Shinobu... you've grown so much... including your heart."
"Sempai... please..."
"Please don't make me cry," He muttered, "not now Shinobu... just not today."
Her eyes widened, feeling pity for the one she loved even today, "Sempai..."
"Leave me alone... Shinobu-Chan," Keitaro was growing a little impatient by the tone of his voice.
Shinobu gave up with a deep sigh and reluctantly left the room. Her eyes only focusing on her shadow which continue to walk forth downstairs. It was so strange to see Keitaro Urashima so depressed, well, much depressed than usual. And she knew why. Only she and Motoko knew the cause of this tragedy and it was because of the betrayal. Yes, that dark word causes even the great Samurai to jump because of memories. She remembered it all, but she didn't want to...
"Motoko-sempai," Shinobu said boldly, "I need you to talk to Keitaro, now."
The samurai stopped her katas and looked at Shinobu in awe. There had been few times Shinobu would address Keitaro as Keitaro instead of Sempai, it just seemed unnatural.
"What for?" Motoko raised an eye-brow of suspicion, "I need not to interfere in Urashima's business."
"You do in this chapter," Shinobu muttered.
"What?"
"Look, Keitaro is hurt Motoko-chan can't you see that!"
"It has nothing to do with any of us."
"What are you talking about? He sits in his room as if there was no world outside, how can that not be our business?"
"... I do not want to be part of this, were just medaling Shinobu. We should let time heal Urashima, less we make the situation worse."
"Are you serious? That man won't get up unless we move his butt with a bull-dozer! I won't allow that betrayal to suck the soul of our manager because I love him Motoko!"
Silence coated her words. She exactly sounded like...
"NaruNarusegawa..."
Shinobu looked down at her feet, "yes... it wasn't her fault... none of them is their fault."
Motoko looked deeply in Shinobu's eyes, "Shinobu-chan... why me?"
A weak smile tugged her cute features. "Because Keitaro only sees me as his little-sister... he needs someone who gives him a good kick in the shin, understand Motoko-chan."
Motoko reluctantly settled her blade down on the wooden floor and laid her hand on Shinobu's shoulder. "You do realize if Urashima doesn't wake up from this misery, I shall let him taste my blade."
"Do whatever you can... Motoko-sempai."
She smiled; unable to stay emotionless in Shinobu's presence she gave a quick hug for Shinobu's courage. It was seconds later she decided to let go and turn her back towards Shinobu and go downstairs through the hell she would have to face.
"Shinobu..."
"Yes, Motoko-sempai?"
"That was pretty brave of you to confess your love."
"I didn't confess it for you... I did it for Keitaro's pain so you can wake him up."
"Humph..."
While she watched Motoko disappeared through the steps of the Hinata, she chuckled happily enough to sound like a cute little girl, "good-luck Motoko-Chan... you can do it."
Little did Keitaro Urashima know he had a future that either can be bright one of a dark ending? Little did the other Hinata Residents know most of them had yet to figure out the truth of the betrayal. What really happened between Keitaro and Naru? What future brings between them? What new love is there to seek? Most important of all... what happened to Naru Narusegawa?
The one whom started it all.
Tenshi: As you can see, notconfident is my first sucessful account that I'd had been keeping for months now. Your probably wondering why I am re-writing this on a different account; its mostly because of memories. I wanted to start something new on this account so here I am.
Now your asking, for those who had read my "Betrayal," the reason I am re-writing this, improvement. I was merely an amuturea couple of months ago.Now, I know whatemotions are required in this story. Thematter of balance. If you read my previous "Betrayal," than you will see howout of balance it is.
Thank you to Innotral-Sensei for helping me... I was thinking of acutally making GlazeandConfused in making mySensei... but... he seems a little too advanced for meor is it a she? Hnn...
Any helpfulcomments and suggestions are fine.
