As I type this, this story has gotton 92 reviews!!! Thanks to everyone who has reviewed! I would also like the thank Marina Blue for her ever so constructive criticism, and she seems to be forgetting one thing: THIS IS FICTION. I know its extremly unlikely Vince would sign two fourteen year olds. And for the whole dating rule: if you looked closely, I never did specify Ryan's age, which on my behalf, is a mistake. Ryan is also ment to be the same age as Lex, which most people would assume anyways. As for my spelling and grammar, as I've mentioned in pretty much most of my stories, I do not have a spell check or a grammar check on my computer, because it crashes frequently, taking away Microsoft Word, and leaving me with the manditory WordPad. I also know quite a few people who have tattoos and are not the legal age of 18, so having Lex being 14 and having tattoos around here where I am from, would be quite normal.
Again, this story is completely FICTION, and is only ment for entertainment. I have loyal readers (JohnCenasgirl, Ayda66, Milou, and Latisha C to name a few), and when I write stories, I have them in mind. I know they will give me critisim if I need it, and I only continue writting this story for them. I think it takes a lot of courage to put a story out on the internet for people to read, and to receive such positive feedback up until your email, has not affected me at all as I have recieved a total of 171 reviews for nine stories, 92 of those are for one story, and that story would be Disarm.
I write because I have ideas that I think would interest people. Nobody forced you to read Disarm, it was your own choice.
Disarm is the second story I put up on this website, and I know it can use improvement. The writting in Disarm compared to my first story, Last Train Home, has improved greatly, and has continued to improve as I write more, which I think has been proven in my stories such as First Date, On The Rebound, and The Marine.
After anyone reads this, please keep everything that I just said in mind as you continue to read the next chapters. Disarm has only been going as long as it has due to reviews, but will end soon; probably within the next three of four chapters.
Again, I thank everyone who has reviewed Disarm, and I hope you enjoy the last few chapters.
XOXO
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