HEEEEEEEEYA! Here is the second chapiiiii!

Ahum, this fic's grammar is gone be better, I swear.

/from peach's point of view/


So, peach just got out of her room and ran over to castle gate.

(Not a very good idea)

There where 2 purple toads guarding the place.

/Daim how am I supposed to get out of here…/

Then she watched at the wall and then to the toads, and with an evil grin on her face she ran as fast as she could towards the bushes that stand against the wall.

/Ok coast clear…. /

She grabbed the climbing plants and you can already guess, she climbed over the wall.

"FREEDOM!" she yelled and before she knew it she was lying in the bushes on the other side of the wall.

"What was that?" one of the toads asked.

"Let's go check out!" the other one said.

/Auw! I'm in pain, I hate walls… and I'm free/

She jumped out of the bushes and tripped over a rock and fell, again…

" Ayu ok ma'm?" a little girl toad asked at the fallen, hurt and bruised princes.

"Yeah, I'm ok alright, I just tripped, stupid rocks." She mumbled, but she notist her hair was loose and her cap was gone.

"Hey! Have you've seeing a pink cap?" she asked, forgetting that she was a toad, ya know one who lives in tha castle…

blink blink "YOU PEACH!" the little girl yelled.

/Game over, princes1 peach 0, BUSTED/

At the next moment she saw her cap and putted her hair underneath it.

"TIDIIIIIIIIIIIII!" she yelled, meaning one of the guarding toads.

So peach putted her hand on the girls mouth making her stop yelling.

"Shut up! No one may find me here…!"

"What's wrong here!" one of the purple toads asked.

"Peach, peach!" the girl said while pointing at the princes.

/Ok, now I'm dead/

"Eh, I think that she was meaning that I've had to give her a peach, " smile

The toads looked confused, but believed her.

"Toothy, how many times do I have to say, that if you want something you don't have to ask strangers?" Peach sighted in relief and got of the ground.

"But, daddy…" "No excuses, just don't talk to strangers!"

The adult toad looked angry, but the other one just stood there, watching it.

"Sorry for troubling you, this little toad has much to learn."

"No problem, I was the same at here age, so don't punish her to bad."

"You heard her, toothy, so now say sorry."

/phew that was hard, good for her she haves a merciful father/

"I'm sorry lady."

"excuses excepted." Peach said, and with that she was gone, towards her way to freedom.


so, wacha think?

Better grammar than the last chapter eh?

Lollypop: it sucks…

Me: shut up.

Lollypop: it sucks…

Me: beats with a pan the hell out of lollypop

Auch that's gonna hurt in the morning!

Plz: review!