Mitsuko: Hey minna! I know I have a story that I haven't updated in a while but I wrote this one when I was in a plane flying over the Atlantic Ocean. I just got back from Europe and I wanted to post this. What sucked about the trip the trip was that they didn't give honey roasted peanuts. No, they give salt and vingar preztals! That made me mad! takes deep breath Ok enough with my babbling. On with the fic! Oh and by the way, reviews are a writers only payment and I will take flames ONLY if they tell me what I need to fix in the story. Thanx. NOW on with the story!
Mi Corzon Perdido En Ti
Chapter 1
Thunder clashed around me. The black sky lit up a few times. Ice cold rain poured everywhere. I stood on the stoop of my house fumbling with my keys. My black rain coat was soaked, as was I. Thunder clashed again as I jumped at the sound. Finally finding the right key, I shoved it into the deadbolt and turned.
The house was silent and dark. No one was home. I reached out to the left and felt for the lightswitch. I found it and flicked it up and down. No lights. The power must have gone out when the storm started.
I started feeling my way around the house, stripping of my wet clothes as I neared my room. My teeth started to chatter as I reached my room. I opened the door and walked into the room. The plush carpet felt good under my toes. My room lit up as thunder was heard.
On the left was my huge canopy bed and cheasnut night stand. On the right was the desk that I wrote all my stories in and my laptop that I got from my father before he was killed. It was filled of pictures of my parents. My father's enormous black leather chair was pushed under it. There was a window next to the bed and desk and in the middle was two white french doors that mached the walls leading to the balcony.
I walked into my bathroom and turned on the hot water. I undressed and stepped into the shower. The steaming hot water poured over me and I loved every minute of it.
It was still dark when I got out of the shower. I reached for the fluffy towl to my right and wrapped it around me. Before I hopped into the shower, I had lit a few huge lavender candles. Now there was light and it smelled like lavender. I grabbed a wash cloth and wiped the mirror. Silver-grey eyes stared back at me. I dried my hair with my towl and began to comb it.
Bang! Boom! Crash! "Idiot! Watch where you're going!"
"Who lays clothes in the middle of the floor to trip on? She should be sleeping now anyway."
I quietly put down the comb and tip toed to the door. People were downstairs. I needed to get out soon. Slowly opening the door, I put on a robe and snuck into my room. There was an eerie silence. I felt my way to my bed and crawled under the bed.
In the middle of under the bed was a box covering an open spot in the carpet. I moved the box and slid the floor board to the left. There was a metal box there. I opened the box and took out the black disk that layed there. I quickly closed the box and slid the floor board back into its place. This disk was not to fall into the hands of OZ or the Alliance.
I rolled out from under the bed and ran to the French doors. They flew open and a figure stood there. I stopped in my tracks and turned around. I ran to my doors and opened them. Two figures stood there. I was surrounded. The disk was held tightly in my hand.
One of the two figures walked to the bathroom door, blocking it off from me. They now cut off any way for me to get away. I looked at the person standing at my door. He was standing with his legs open and his arms crossed. The other two started to walk to me. I ran and dove between the guys legs. He turned around and grabbed the collar of my robe as I began to run. He pulled me back just as I untied the sash of my robe.
I began sprinting to the stairs when I felt something push me back onto the ground. The person was sitting on my back. He grabbed my wrist and twisted it behind me. I cried put in pain, but still held fast to the disk. I could feel him pulling my arm more. I needed to fight back.
I began to wiggle myself out from under him. He didn't move. I started bucking. He didn't move. He used his other hand to rip the disk out of my hand. I could feel the presence of other people. He threw the disk to someone and they handed him something. I felt a needle pick my arm and my eyes begin to close. I started to get very tired. No. I had to stay awake. He loosened the hold on my wrist. My eyes lids got heavy and soon, I found the land of nod.
Mitsuko: Well, here is the first chapter. Please review. Thanks!
