This is a peice of writingI Did for my writing class, I changed a few of the words so it wouldn't be a lily Remus in class in classI used an HG Wells technique of not staing a name, it was nice butI like this- the original better. But it deserves a PreLude...
PRELUDE to 'Empty'...
The 'empty girl' is obviously lily, she and Remus were deep in love. And this is after her parents, and maybe a sibling, died, so she went into a shock, maybe a living coma. She never spoke, because as was she was a highly optimistic person and tragedy was not comprehended in her mind... tragically in fact this does happen to some. So he would talk to her every day and walk with her and lay by her as she slept, but he knew she would never be the same and... well you'll see...
DISCLAIMER: ((I do not own anything but the plot, JK Rowling gets ALL the good stuff))
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