It's not like anyone will remember this story (I'm surprised it's still on FF.N) But threw lack of storyline (Sort off) this fiction will be temporally discontinued.

If anyone out there DID remember this story I'm sorry. But the story will eventually be re-written enough to make it like how my later fictions are – Basically I wrote this story I was new to this type of fiction so eventually when I feel confident enough a new version of this story will be made.

In the meantime why not have a look at my other stories? Or look at the stories on my favourites list? We might have the same tastes.

Of course you can just surf this site like you would anyway – Or make your own stories.