A/N: Before I thank you all I have a quiz of sorts, just curious what you all think. I feel bad about how I treat Yuki, so I think I'd like to give him a friend/girlfriend. Should it be: Hana, Uo, Kagura, a female classmate we've never met, ex-fanclub President Motoko (She's graduated) or still no one? I have an interesting way to work them all that would be entertaining and appropriate.
personal note. Your beautiful and talented authoress was in a car accident this past sunday, I'm a bit sore bot nothings broke (except my car) So I'd like to appologise for the slacking I did on this chapter, although I feel it is up to par I could be mistaken. I wanted to spell check this chapter for you after re-reading the last chapter it was appaling, thank you all for not yelling at me for that and please excuse any mistakes in this chapter I wrote it at 2 in the morning, only just realising it was thursday, oops!
Thank you's:
Before I do thank you's I would like to draw everyones attention to a review I recieved for chapter 13 it was left anonymously by someone calling themselves kitsune grl : "Hello I am a very angry person.KYO WOULD NEVER SAY THAT! ARGH" while I apprieciate the some people would not agree with certain things happening in my story, I find it agrevating that she didn't mention what she was mad about, and that she was so rude about it. I haven't erased the review even though it is my right to, but in the future any anonymous reviews of that nature will be completely ignored, because I find that kind of review ludacris and childish. And whatever it was that I had Kyou say, was perfectly acceptable within my story. I don't beginto insinuate that he would say any of it in the series, but I have developed a completely differant story, a new reality for the charactors, andinside that reality these things are very possible.
NOW for thank you's:
I just want to thank you all together first, I must say out of all my stories this group of reviewers has given me the best feed back yet. So Thank You all so much! All these are in response to reviews for chapters 13 & 14.
Ookami no Anubis : To be perfectly honest, I had origionally planned to not use them, and make up an excuse for them to be gone (Because if they were there from the start nothing could have happened with Kyou), but then I realised that didn't make sense, no matter what if Tohru was in an accident, they'd come back. I forgot to make an excuse for them to be gone so I desided that they could come back. Plus I love their charactor natures, they add a lot to the story just by being there.
digitaldawn : I missed you, where have you been, I was afraid you'd found a better fiction. Anyway, to be honest I had forgotten about Nurse Chuck, but I plan on bringing him in again, for other reasons though. I plan on giving him a more serious nature too. He wont be back for a while though.
helbawarshipper : I don't actually plan on putting Akito in this story, I hate writtinghim so much. So I think if the question of Akito arises in the story, I mightjust find him a reason not to show up. I really don't want him to find out, but it could add some excitement to it all. I think that Kyou and Yuki will get along, they aren't going to act like best friends, but tey're going to stop trying to kill each other at least.
miss yukishiro : I've always been a fan of the story of the chinese zodic, long before I even liked anime, so I was always of the oppinion that they were origionally friends, and all it would take for them to be friends again, would be Kyou accepting Yuki as a friend. Since my story happens as if after a time when Kyou beat Yuki I like to think, he realised that friendship after beating him, finally. I don't want Uo and Hana to find out, but they're very crafy those two. I won't let them kill Kyou though.
x-mengenius : To be honest, it takes me an hour to write a chapter, but I take the week to bring myself around to actually write it, and also come up with an idea for the next chapter, to make it worth reading. If nothing else I'm consistant, I post a chapter every week without fail. In fact I think I update rather quickly, most of the stories I read aren't very quick to update, at times I wait minths for an update from them, because they write other stories at the same time. Please be patient, I'm pretty good at this, usually by 5 p.m. on Thursday, I've updated.
Ruun-chan : I like making Kyou and Yuki do cute things, because its so out of charactor, you can't expect them to do it on their own. It makes me feel warm and fuzzy when they get along, that why I do it so often, plus it makes me sad when Kyou has to lose a fight to Yuki, so I'd rather they didn't fight. I forgot about Nurse Chucks baking exploits hmm. . . Okay he'll do that soon, but until then here have a slice of my pie I've only eaten a little and I promise I don't have any germs.
PureMida : Welcome to my story! Thank you so much for reviewing every chapter, I'm glad you like this story enough to review them all. I hope you get a chance to see more of the show. I love it so much I bought it all within the course of 5 days. And then the manga came out and I buy that too. Anyway I don't think you've met some of these charactors yet so I hope it isn't too confusing for you. They're all from the origional story except Nurse Chuck. If you have any questions I'd be glad to explain some things, just ask me in a review.
sweet-girl8270 : Yay Nurse Chuck! I'm glad everyone likes him so much, I was worried that he wouldn't be well liked, and I didn't plan on keeping him in the story, but since you guys do like him, I plan on developing him further, and putting him in a few more chapters. I feel bad for the way I treated Yuki, I think he'll be okay too, who do you think I should pair hm with though. I feel like I should make it up to him, he deserves love too.
itzjustme : I'm glad about them finally being a couple too, I don't know how much of a couple I should make them though. I think its working out well, in the end Kyou really deserves Tohru. Thank you so much for reading and especially for reviewing.
silversteel228 : Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I promise to keep writing andupdating, I won't abandon the story until its over. I love your reviews they're so smiley.
hathors-favorite : I like yaois too, mainly Yuki-Kyou or Kyou-Haru but those are hard to find. I highly reccomend Cat and Rat: was it ment to be? by kativa-chan or full moon curse by basketcases02cat and rat is Yuki-Kyou, full moon curse, is Kyou-shigure at first but it changes, its pretty cool.
I'd like to appologise ahead of time for Hana, she isn't herself in this story, but then agian she is, I've never been good with her charactor, but I make up for it with Uo, I think.
"Tohru!" Uo wrapped herself around her friend. "Are you okay? That blonde kid just told me and Hana about your accident. This never would have happened if we had just stayed home and protected you."
"Speaking of which, where were you two? You're supposed to be protecting our dear Tohru when we aren't around. Perhaps I should just make sure you'll never slip again." Hana siad, mysterioously surrounded by a black cloud.
"No!" Tohru jumpped in front of her two friends. "Really Hana, Uo, it's okay. I-in fact I was just saying how the whole thing was really a blessing in disguise."
"How so?" Uo asked arching her eyebrow and shooting a glance at Hana.
"Uh, um well, I've become a lot closer to all my friends in the Sohma family. Since the accident they've all been so worried about me, and they've been really sweet too, especially Yuki, and Kyou!" Tohru's face pleaded earnestly with her friends.
Hana's dark clouds dispersed as if they'd never existed and she wrapped her arms around Tohru "Oh Tohru. I was so worried when I found out. I don't like hearing about these important things from someone else, promise me next time something important happens, we'll be the first to hear about it. You're very important to us so you don't have to be afraid to tell us anything."
"No. Of course not. I promise you'll be the first to know from now on." Tohru pulled out of the hug. 00 I just can't tell you about it yet, though. Please forgive me Hana, Uo, I just can't tell you yet. 00
"Lets head inside now." Kyou said, nudging Tohru towards the entrance. Yuki followed them slowly.
"Something happened." Hana said staring after Tohru.
"What do you mean?" Uo asked concearned.
"Remember that strange feeling I told you about, the one I feel from that family?"
"Yes?"
"Tohru, is giving off the same waves now. They're the same but also a bit different. And also Kyou, feels different." Hana shook her head. "Tohru isn't that kind of girl, but there's no doubt that she's not telling us."
"Well, she wont tell us till she's ready, and since Orangy is probably in on it, we can't ask him. What do you say we pressure the prince?"
Hana's mouth twitched, it wasn't really a smile but it was an expression of pleasure. "Yes, I think a little investigation may be in order."
"But I wonder if the prince would know about it?" 00 There's no doubt he'd be upset if something were going on, but he has such a good poker face. 00
"Oh he knows, his waves felt much sadder than usual today." Hana said.
"Excellent"
Yuki was in the student Council room, working through some papers. He was alone at last, he'd spent the previous class watching Kyou and Tohru make private goo-goo eyes at each other, when Uo and Hana weren't watching. It was lunch time now, and rather than sit through that durring lunch too, he excused himself to work on a few things for graduation. It wasn't coming for a few months but there were a lot of preperations to be made.
He stared out the window, at where Tohru and Kyou were sitting under a shady tree. 00 She looks so happy with him, I'm glad I stepped aside and let her be happy, but I can't help fell jealous. 00 He sighed feeling suddenly very alone, although he wasn't.
"Mind telling us what's going on?" Uo said, catching Yuki by surprise.
"I couldn't say I know what you mean." He said suddenly very interested in straghtening a stack of already straight papers on the desk.
"Oh, I think you do know." Hana said.
"Well perhaps you're right, but I won't tell you." He said sitting at the desk.
"What'll it take to make you talk Prince Charming?" Uo asked.
"Talk about what, you still haven't said."
Uo pointed out the window. "Them! We know somethings going on, what is it?"
Yuki sighed, 00 They're not going to leave, I can tell already. 00 "Promise not to tell anyone about this?" He paused as the girls nodded in agreement and they pulled in to hear the explaination. "You've got to promise you won't say a word about this till Miss Honda tells you hersel."
"We promise." the girls said eagerly.
"Kyou and I. . . After the accident, we both confessed our love to Miss Honda. Kyou is the one she belongs with not me. The scars I carry in my heart are too deep for her to heal. I realized that when she told me she loved Kyou. He truely loves Miss Honda with all of his heart."
"Well duh! We already knew that, Hana could sense all that by the differance in your waves!" Uo said.
"We want to know if he's done anything to our sweet Tohru." Hana said queitly, in a tone rather frightening to Yuki.
"Well as far as I know, they've only kissed a few times. I told him I'd kill him if he did anything she didn't want him doing, and you know what he did? He thanked me, said he would never do anything to make Miss Honda uncomfortable, but with me keeping tabs on him, could be sure of it."
"Tohru seems o have found herself a fine young man, Uo." Hana sighed.
"Damn. I was hoping we could always be the most important people in her life." Uo was truely upset.
"We always knew this day would come, Tohru's too kind a person, not to affected some poor boys heart. How many people know about this anyway?" She turned back to Yuki.
"Just me and Shigure. Tohru was afraid you'd kill Kyou so they're not telling anyone else, until Tohru's thinks shes ready to tell you. She's more capable than you two give her credit for."
"Hm. . . I suppose she is." Hana said, glancing at Uo she began to leave.
"Just promise you'll wait for her to tell you, this is important to her."
"Don't worry, we'll wait, but not forever. You might want to encourage her to tell us soon." Uo said over her shoulder as she followed after Hana.
A/N: Don't forget to vote for Yuki's pairing, and if you come up with a better Idea I'd like to hear it as well, you never know, I still don't know how I feel about it. If any origional idea's come up or in the event of a tie, I'll have another vote next chapter, I don't plan on doing it immediately but in the future. So go Vote! Review! Sweat to the oldies! Count your freckles(no that's a mole)! Whatever!
