Banksies-baby99- See I told ya I'll make him speak more in that chapter!! I
know 'Mark' cut him off, but that unfortunately is how the story goes. Well
I updated...yeah I know it's been a long time, but you'll see the explanation
after all the shout out's. I know what it's like to be speechless and trust
me you'll get the talking tongue back...so don't be scared!! Anyways thanks
so much for the review and enjoy the chapter!
Ktbeanz- Thanks again for the advice. Well I'm glad I sorta stretched it out in that chapter. I'll definitely take you're advice in future. I hope this chapter wasn't too...fast. I'm glad you liked the idea though!! Thanks so much for the advice...and the review!! Enjoy the next chapter!!
Brnnttebabe12- Glad that part wasn't lame...that's a relief!! Yup Varsity won't be bothering them for the next few chapters. Aw thanks for the chocolates...I feel so much better already!! No probs I love that story...looks like Charlie won. Please update your story soon!! Oh yeah and I'll check out your poll!! Thanks for the review and enjoy the chapter!!
Hearts- Glad you thought it was good. Well here we go, here's the new chapter!! I know it's not soon, but the explanation is after the shout out's!! Well...thanks so much for reviewing and enjoy the next chapter!!
SqUiDsLiLpYrO- Cool, there's actually a person who's into the Rock category!! *blushes* really you thought about me? You really made my day!! If you need any help with some research or something...I'll be more than happy to help. Glad you liked the chapter and thanks for the uplifting review!! Enjoy the next chapter!!
C-chan96- I LOVE reading your reviews!! You know what I'll personally go to Hollywood and talk to Stephen Herek myself...that is his name right? Anyway...I'll go and ask him to give me Charlie...just for you and I'll give him to you for your birthday or for Christmas or whatever. I'm not going to make any promises because I'll probably be kicked out before I even enter. I can't wait for your stories on C/J...I love them too!! Oh yeah really good uh....rhyming skills. Really...good. Well in this story the Ducks really want to get Gary. So I'm gonna make them do anything to get him. Cole always acts like such a macho man in D3 so I decided to make him look like an idiot in this story. I won't let the Ducks get too demonic though, cause I'm a Christian so yeah...I think that explains why. Well read on and find out what's gonna happen...Oh yeah and thanks for reviewing my previous story!! I'm gonna go and review your latest one now!!
Darkdestiny2000- I know this is the third chapter, but I just wanna say thank you for review on my chapters!! I hoe you enjoy the chapter...and thanks again!!
Hey Guys I know that I didn't review in a while, but since it's the Easter weekend and family's over...it's sorta difficult writing and thinking, when your aunts are telling you how big you've gotten and how nice you look and treating you like you're five...It's so irritating!! Anyway I hope you like this chapter...thanks so much for your reviews!! I hope you enjoy the next chapter!!
Planning, Investigations and Practice
"Hey Charlie" Luis said as he walked up to his Captain to go to Math's.
"Oh, hey Luis. What's up?" Charlie asked teammate.
"Nothing much except that Russ said that we must all meet him in the rink after school" Luis replied.
"Why?" Charlie asked a bit confused.
"I don't know, but I think we're about to find out after this period" Luis answered.
"If we make it through Mrs. Mason's lesson" Charlie said.
"Yeah I've already got a bad record there" Luis said as they laughed and walked into the classroom.
After classes they went to the rink and found that half the Ducks were already there. They sat down and waited for the other Ducks to arrive. Once they were all there and all seated, Russ called for their attention.
"So what's going on Russ?" Adam asked.
"Well the plan won't exactly work" Russ said. "Well at least half of it"
"Why?" Adam asked curiously.
"Well, if he gets into trouble...then we get into trouble" Russ tried to explain.
"I don't get it...why do we get into trouble if it's seemingly his fault?" Kenny asked.
"Because little bash.bro he will know we did it on purpose and we'll get busted" Russ said and now they understood.
"So what do we do then...we need to make this guy look terrible somehow" Julie said with a sigh.
"Maybe we could just stick to the plan to show him we're not happy and besides he looks like the kind of guy who's not too serious about things" Charlie pointed out.
The team agreed on this and sat there in silence.
"Hello, we're supposed to have hockey practice in fifteen minutes" Connie said breaking the silence.
They all rushed to the changing rooms and quickly got dressed.
BACK AT THE STATE PRISON
"What do you mean escaped" the warden exclaimed not believing what he was hearing.
"Sorry sir, but I didn't see him" the policeman apologized.
"Listen Mackenzie...he is a serial killer and you let him escape. What do you think you were doing? You should have been there watching him!!!!!!!" the warden said angrily.
"Johnson call an investigator. We need to find this guy. As for you Mackenzie this is no 1 so watch it" the warden said and stormed off into his office.
"That's one Mackenzie and you know what's gonna come after that? Two and then three" Mackenzie mocked to himself.
"Yes, then you're fired. Try using that smart Alec brain of yours to keep your job" the warden called after him.
"The investigator said he's on his way" Johnson informed the warden.
BACK AT EDEN HALL
GARY'S P.O.V
I walked into the rink and sat down on the bench. What was I going to do? I couldn't even coach a bunch of first graders to learn their ABC's! The sound of someone opening a door brought me back to reality. It was just the team, which brought relief to my mind. I needed to be careful...the police had probably found out about me being missing. They all skated up to me.
"Um you're supposed to be on the ice, recording all our times and what we need to work on" Charlie the captain said to me.
"Well it's just as good over here" I said thinking quickly. "That's my way of coaching...so anyway what were you guys doing before I got here? I asked quickly.
"Just normal hockey practice...besides doesn't every coach have their own style of coaching?" Adam asked.
Oh boy this was more difficult that than I thought. Ok I just needed to calm down and think of something.
"Well maybe I could work with you from your weak points" I said quickly.
"It's on that sheet" Julie said paging through to where all the records were kept.
"Oh yeah um well let's see. Luis you have a problem with stopping?" I asked to make sure.
"Uh yeah" Luis replied.
Okay now I really didn't know what to do.
"Well just do whatever okay I'm just gonna sit here and try to figure out how to solve your problems." I said and the team gave me weird looks.
"Yeah" the captain said and skated off onto the ice and started to give the team commands.
Truth is I didn't know what to do with the problems and I couldn't show them either. Great I'm back to square one and I had no idea what to do. Then it hit me. The last letter I got from my girlfriend. She said she was living in these parts of town and now if I could just find out where she lived.
BACK AT THE STATE PRISON
"Privet investigator Kruger at your service" Kruger said as he walked into the wardens office.
"Listen we don't have time for your pointless fancy introductions. Now are you gonna help me catch this guy or what?" the warden said in his normal friendly mood.
"Yes sir" Kruger answered. "Do you have any info that might help?"
"If you'll shut up you'll hear it. Now this guys name is Gary Morrison and he escaped from the Prison two days ago. He has short brown hair and is quite tall. He has dark brown eyes. He is 24 years old and my guess is that he took the highway." The warden explained.
"Well does he have any family around those parts?" Kruger asked.
"I don't know, but I don't think so. I have notified the city that he was around and I've sent out wanted signs. So that should help" the warden said as he sat his big butt in his chair.
"Well I'll see what I can do" Kruger said as he got up and started for the door.
"You won't see... you'll do" the warden said as he Kruger walked out of the room.
"Is he always this pleasant?" Kruger asked Johnson- his assigned partner.
"Yep" Johnson replied.
BACK AT EDEN HALL
The Ducks finished practicing and went to change.
"Boy this coach is weird" Dwayne said.
"Yeah, he doesn't even know the basics" Guy added.
"Well we'll just have to watch and see what he does. As Adam said every coach has their own style of coaching." Charlie said.
I hope you guys enjoyed that chapter!!! I hope the idea was good. Anyways I don't have a lot to say, but please REVIEW my story!!! Oh yeah and have a great Easter weekend!!
Ktbeanz- Thanks again for the advice. Well I'm glad I sorta stretched it out in that chapter. I'll definitely take you're advice in future. I hope this chapter wasn't too...fast. I'm glad you liked the idea though!! Thanks so much for the advice...and the review!! Enjoy the next chapter!!
Brnnttebabe12- Glad that part wasn't lame...that's a relief!! Yup Varsity won't be bothering them for the next few chapters. Aw thanks for the chocolates...I feel so much better already!! No probs I love that story...looks like Charlie won. Please update your story soon!! Oh yeah and I'll check out your poll!! Thanks for the review and enjoy the chapter!!
Hearts- Glad you thought it was good. Well here we go, here's the new chapter!! I know it's not soon, but the explanation is after the shout out's!! Well...thanks so much for reviewing and enjoy the next chapter!!
SqUiDsLiLpYrO- Cool, there's actually a person who's into the Rock category!! *blushes* really you thought about me? You really made my day!! If you need any help with some research or something...I'll be more than happy to help. Glad you liked the chapter and thanks for the uplifting review!! Enjoy the next chapter!!
C-chan96- I LOVE reading your reviews!! You know what I'll personally go to Hollywood and talk to Stephen Herek myself...that is his name right? Anyway...I'll go and ask him to give me Charlie...just for you and I'll give him to you for your birthday or for Christmas or whatever. I'm not going to make any promises because I'll probably be kicked out before I even enter. I can't wait for your stories on C/J...I love them too!! Oh yeah really good uh....rhyming skills. Really...good. Well in this story the Ducks really want to get Gary. So I'm gonna make them do anything to get him. Cole always acts like such a macho man in D3 so I decided to make him look like an idiot in this story. I won't let the Ducks get too demonic though, cause I'm a Christian so yeah...I think that explains why. Well read on and find out what's gonna happen...Oh yeah and thanks for reviewing my previous story!! I'm gonna go and review your latest one now!!
Darkdestiny2000- I know this is the third chapter, but I just wanna say thank you for review on my chapters!! I hoe you enjoy the chapter...and thanks again!!
Hey Guys I know that I didn't review in a while, but since it's the Easter weekend and family's over...it's sorta difficult writing and thinking, when your aunts are telling you how big you've gotten and how nice you look and treating you like you're five...It's so irritating!! Anyway I hope you like this chapter...thanks so much for your reviews!! I hope you enjoy the next chapter!!
Planning, Investigations and Practice
"Hey Charlie" Luis said as he walked up to his Captain to go to Math's.
"Oh, hey Luis. What's up?" Charlie asked teammate.
"Nothing much except that Russ said that we must all meet him in the rink after school" Luis replied.
"Why?" Charlie asked a bit confused.
"I don't know, but I think we're about to find out after this period" Luis answered.
"If we make it through Mrs. Mason's lesson" Charlie said.
"Yeah I've already got a bad record there" Luis said as they laughed and walked into the classroom.
After classes they went to the rink and found that half the Ducks were already there. They sat down and waited for the other Ducks to arrive. Once they were all there and all seated, Russ called for their attention.
"So what's going on Russ?" Adam asked.
"Well the plan won't exactly work" Russ said. "Well at least half of it"
"Why?" Adam asked curiously.
"Well, if he gets into trouble...then we get into trouble" Russ tried to explain.
"I don't get it...why do we get into trouble if it's seemingly his fault?" Kenny asked.
"Because little bash.bro he will know we did it on purpose and we'll get busted" Russ said and now they understood.
"So what do we do then...we need to make this guy look terrible somehow" Julie said with a sigh.
"Maybe we could just stick to the plan to show him we're not happy and besides he looks like the kind of guy who's not too serious about things" Charlie pointed out.
The team agreed on this and sat there in silence.
"Hello, we're supposed to have hockey practice in fifteen minutes" Connie said breaking the silence.
They all rushed to the changing rooms and quickly got dressed.
BACK AT THE STATE PRISON
"What do you mean escaped" the warden exclaimed not believing what he was hearing.
"Sorry sir, but I didn't see him" the policeman apologized.
"Listen Mackenzie...he is a serial killer and you let him escape. What do you think you were doing? You should have been there watching him!!!!!!!" the warden said angrily.
"Johnson call an investigator. We need to find this guy. As for you Mackenzie this is no 1 so watch it" the warden said and stormed off into his office.
"That's one Mackenzie and you know what's gonna come after that? Two and then three" Mackenzie mocked to himself.
"Yes, then you're fired. Try using that smart Alec brain of yours to keep your job" the warden called after him.
"The investigator said he's on his way" Johnson informed the warden.
BACK AT EDEN HALL
GARY'S P.O.V
I walked into the rink and sat down on the bench. What was I going to do? I couldn't even coach a bunch of first graders to learn their ABC's! The sound of someone opening a door brought me back to reality. It was just the team, which brought relief to my mind. I needed to be careful...the police had probably found out about me being missing. They all skated up to me.
"Um you're supposed to be on the ice, recording all our times and what we need to work on" Charlie the captain said to me.
"Well it's just as good over here" I said thinking quickly. "That's my way of coaching...so anyway what were you guys doing before I got here? I asked quickly.
"Just normal hockey practice...besides doesn't every coach have their own style of coaching?" Adam asked.
Oh boy this was more difficult that than I thought. Ok I just needed to calm down and think of something.
"Well maybe I could work with you from your weak points" I said quickly.
"It's on that sheet" Julie said paging through to where all the records were kept.
"Oh yeah um well let's see. Luis you have a problem with stopping?" I asked to make sure.
"Uh yeah" Luis replied.
Okay now I really didn't know what to do.
"Well just do whatever okay I'm just gonna sit here and try to figure out how to solve your problems." I said and the team gave me weird looks.
"Yeah" the captain said and skated off onto the ice and started to give the team commands.
Truth is I didn't know what to do with the problems and I couldn't show them either. Great I'm back to square one and I had no idea what to do. Then it hit me. The last letter I got from my girlfriend. She said she was living in these parts of town and now if I could just find out where she lived.
BACK AT THE STATE PRISON
"Privet investigator Kruger at your service" Kruger said as he walked into the wardens office.
"Listen we don't have time for your pointless fancy introductions. Now are you gonna help me catch this guy or what?" the warden said in his normal friendly mood.
"Yes sir" Kruger answered. "Do you have any info that might help?"
"If you'll shut up you'll hear it. Now this guys name is Gary Morrison and he escaped from the Prison two days ago. He has short brown hair and is quite tall. He has dark brown eyes. He is 24 years old and my guess is that he took the highway." The warden explained.
"Well does he have any family around those parts?" Kruger asked.
"I don't know, but I don't think so. I have notified the city that he was around and I've sent out wanted signs. So that should help" the warden said as he sat his big butt in his chair.
"Well I'll see what I can do" Kruger said as he got up and started for the door.
"You won't see... you'll do" the warden said as he Kruger walked out of the room.
"Is he always this pleasant?" Kruger asked Johnson- his assigned partner.
"Yep" Johnson replied.
BACK AT EDEN HALL
The Ducks finished practicing and went to change.
"Boy this coach is weird" Dwayne said.
"Yeah, he doesn't even know the basics" Guy added.
"Well we'll just have to watch and see what he does. As Adam said every coach has their own style of coaching." Charlie said.
I hope you guys enjoyed that chapter!!! I hope the idea was good. Anyways I don't have a lot to say, but please REVIEW my story!!! Oh yeah and have a great Easter weekend!!
