Brnnttebabe12- You know I was thinking the same thing, cause he has to get
threatened sometime to get fired or something. So yeah and that will be as
you said really funny. So thanks for the idea!! Well he's gonna get some
help soon, so then he will be alright again. You're just gonna have to read
and find out in the next chapter on what's going to happen!! Oh I
absolutely loved them- the chocolates!! Thanks for your review and enjoy
the next chapter!!
Ktbeanz- hey thanks I'll have a good Easter :) Don't worry Gary will get some help later in the story!! He's not gonna stay like this for too long. Well here's the update so I hope you enjoy it. Oh yeah and thanks for the review!! P.S have you written any stories lately?
C-chan96- I always like to make people feel loved. Yeah it would be cool...I just hope he won't kick me out before I actually get to meet him. I understand being mean to your characters. It's just so sweet to sometimes watch the little duckies sort out there problems. Reviewing and watching T.V...really talented!! :) Yup Gary's really confused now!! Oh well I hope Saturday Night Live was really good. You can take your time reviewing "Time Travel Trauma" I don't really mind how long you take. Thanks I'll have a happy Easter, now you can enjoy my next chapter!! Thanks so much for your review!!
Banksies-baby99- I hope you don't mind, but I had a look at your reviews and I think the one reviewer was making too big of a deal. I looked at your chapter and to me it didn't look as bad as that person put it. You shouldn't worry about it, cause you're a great writer and I enjoy reviewing your stories! Besides that was only one or two reviews out of a whole lot of good one's! So you just keep on writing what you enjoy and don't let people like that get you down...it's not worth it. Just explain to everyone that you computer's giving you problems and they'll understand. I'm glad my chapter helped you a bit. I'm sorry if I sound nosy...just don't like to see people down. The one person sent me the same review-you can check and you'll know who I'm talking about. Anyways thanks so much for reviewing my chapter!! Now enjoy the next one!! By the way I absolutely love your new story!!
SqUiDsLiLpYrO- Oh thanks I'll have a good Easter! Oh yummy Cadbury eggs!! No probs I love to help people with stuff...that's just me. I hope you don't get too sick with all that chocolate, but hey what the heck. It's Easter and this is the one time of the year where you get to stuff yourself with chocolate! Hope you enjoyed the chocolate!! Hope you enjoy the next chapter and thanks so much for your review!!!
Once again thanks for your absolutely wonderful reviews!! Ok guys well here's the next chapter...I hope you enjoy it!!
The First Game
The Ducks met up in the locker rooms after school. They hardly practiced in the week that went by and 'Mark' was hardly ever there or around school. They all changed in silence for about five minutes.
"Hey Guys do you still think we should still stick to our plan?" Adam asked.
"What's the point we hardly practiced anyway" Guy pointed out.
"Yeah and besides we're going against team 56. They're one of the weakest teams in the league. We'll be able to beat them." Julie said.
"I hope so and I also hope that this guy also has some coaching techniques up his sleeve" Charlie said and the team agreed.
When they were fully changed they went out of the change room door and started towards the ice. They saw the crowed that was sitting in the stands...they really hoped that they wouldn't look too stupid.
GARY'S P.O.V
I looked at the huge crowed sitting in the stands. We were never gonna win this. I had some great soccer skills, but hockey. Please I would probably be better off coaching a bunch of dogs to catch a Frisbee. I saw that the team was standing by our door that we went through...waiting for me. I walked up to them and I didn't get the happiest looking faces.
The announcer announced the teams and my team skated up onto the ice. Wait....did I have to walk out onto the ice and then walk over to the bench? I didn't like that. I slowly and carefully made my way to the bench. I finally got there...yes I was still alive. The Ducks just rolled their eyes. They put their hands in and started quacking away. Alright what was this supposed to be some sort of pep up cry?
"So coach what do we do?" Adam asked me.
"Um just play and then we'll work out techniques once you guys get playing. Now...take your positions" I said great why do I always have to get myself into these fixes.
Adams P.O.V
Great the stupid coach doesn't even give us a pep talk or anything. He seems to be such a 'new comer' to hockey. Oh well I hope this works, cause I really can't afford to be embarrassed since I dissed Varsity and said that we could beat them when we couldn't even beat one of the easiest teams.
Charlie's P.O.V
I went up to take the face off. I was going up against this kid a bit shorter than me and he was shaking like heck. I easily pushed him over and took the puck. This is going to be a cinch, at least that's what I thought until one of their enforcer's knocked me over and took the puck. All I saw was that Adam was taking the puck away from the huge guy which just knocked him over. I skated up to Adam to ask if he was alright, since he hit the boards with full force.
"Hey Adam are you ok?" I asked.
"Yeah I'm fine" Adam said standing up.
We quickly skated after Averman who now had the puck and backed him up...just in case he lost the puck or something.
We were losing big time and we had to do something. I quickly skated up to Mark.
"Hey call time out" I said as I skated past him.
He held up the timeout sign and the ref blew the whistle. The team skated up to him.
Gary's P.O.V
"Um sorry guys I've got to go to the bathroom" I said.
I needed to get away from them. I couldn't answer any of their questions.
Adam's P.O.V
"Hey you can't do that...hey" I yelled, but he didn't listen.
"Don't even bother Banksie he won't listen. Who cares anyway" Russ said.
"This teams more difficult to beat than I thought." I said. The team just stared at me with open mouths.
"What?" I asked.
"Funny you have to say that" Julie laughed.
"Hey I'm not perfect, not without practice...none of us are. Truthfully speaking." I said.
Charlie's P.O.V
"Yeah I guess. Ok listen let's try doing what Orion taught us" I said taking the clipboard that Mark had.
The team crowded around me. I explained the plan. Just in time, cause just as I finished the ref blew the whistle. The next group of us skated out onto the ice. They carried out the plan and we got one goal in. The ref came up to me.
"Where did your coach go?" he asked me.
"The bathroom" I said.
The ref shook his head and skated off. To make it even worse Buckley was sitting behind us. This coach was gonna get it. We started losing again. Finally Mark came back.
The period ended and we had a bit of a break. We grouped up on the ice.
Nobody's P.O.V
"I' m sick of this! I say we play stupidly" Kenny said.
"Yeah. He's hardly coaching us properly and to think I nearly thought he had his own style of coaching. He isn't coaching us at all!" Charlie agreed obviously angry.
So did the rest. They were gonna make him look bad.
MEANWHILE
Kruger and Johnson drove down the long road.
"So where do you think this guy went?" Johnson asked his partner.
"What's that?" Kruger asked stopping to halt making Johnson nearly choke on his coffee.
They jumped out of the car to have a look. When they got there they found a ring of keys.
"So that's how he got out" Kruger said.
"Yeah with the keys" Johnson added.
"How did he get them though?" Kruger asked himself and Johnson.
"We have a problem though" Johnson said.
"What?" Kruger asked.
"There are two roads he could have gone down" Johnson said pointing to another road going to the left.
"Oh boy this guy's good" Kruger said confused now.
BACK AT EDEN HALL
For the next two periods the Ducks really played stupidly. Like when this small guy stood next to Adam and tried to push him over and Adam pretended that he really had been pushed over, which made the Ducks laugh a little. The Game ended. The score 15-1. Julie had let them score goals easily. Too easily.
The Ducks went into the change rooms. Buckley walked past them and gave them a disappointed look. The Ducks acted like they had just been so defeated and they looked so...down.
When they got into the changing rooms...they burst out laughing.
"That was the most fun game I've ever played" Goldberg said as he took off his skates.
"Yeah now we just have to stuff up the next game too and he'll be in huge trouble" Connie said.
"Now we have to start devising this plan" Charlie said.
"Yeah this is the last team that is really gonna be stupid...I laugh their name's the fairy's or something." Luis said.
The Ducks were gonna give this coach something to think about. They were not happy and they were going to show it. Whether Buckley liked it or not.
Hey guys I hoped you enjoyed that. I know Team 56 is a stupid name, but a team that's lame should have a lame name. I don't know much about ice- hockey. I know a little bit and I can understand when I watch a game, but not that much. So I'm sorry if some of the info was wrong. Anyways please review!!! Thanks again for your reviews!!
Ktbeanz- hey thanks I'll have a good Easter :) Don't worry Gary will get some help later in the story!! He's not gonna stay like this for too long. Well here's the update so I hope you enjoy it. Oh yeah and thanks for the review!! P.S have you written any stories lately?
C-chan96- I always like to make people feel loved. Yeah it would be cool...I just hope he won't kick me out before I actually get to meet him. I understand being mean to your characters. It's just so sweet to sometimes watch the little duckies sort out there problems. Reviewing and watching T.V...really talented!! :) Yup Gary's really confused now!! Oh well I hope Saturday Night Live was really good. You can take your time reviewing "Time Travel Trauma" I don't really mind how long you take. Thanks I'll have a happy Easter, now you can enjoy my next chapter!! Thanks so much for your review!!
Banksies-baby99- I hope you don't mind, but I had a look at your reviews and I think the one reviewer was making too big of a deal. I looked at your chapter and to me it didn't look as bad as that person put it. You shouldn't worry about it, cause you're a great writer and I enjoy reviewing your stories! Besides that was only one or two reviews out of a whole lot of good one's! So you just keep on writing what you enjoy and don't let people like that get you down...it's not worth it. Just explain to everyone that you computer's giving you problems and they'll understand. I'm glad my chapter helped you a bit. I'm sorry if I sound nosy...just don't like to see people down. The one person sent me the same review-you can check and you'll know who I'm talking about. Anyways thanks so much for reviewing my chapter!! Now enjoy the next one!! By the way I absolutely love your new story!!
SqUiDsLiLpYrO- Oh thanks I'll have a good Easter! Oh yummy Cadbury eggs!! No probs I love to help people with stuff...that's just me. I hope you don't get too sick with all that chocolate, but hey what the heck. It's Easter and this is the one time of the year where you get to stuff yourself with chocolate! Hope you enjoyed the chocolate!! Hope you enjoy the next chapter and thanks so much for your review!!!
Once again thanks for your absolutely wonderful reviews!! Ok guys well here's the next chapter...I hope you enjoy it!!
The First Game
The Ducks met up in the locker rooms after school. They hardly practiced in the week that went by and 'Mark' was hardly ever there or around school. They all changed in silence for about five minutes.
"Hey Guys do you still think we should still stick to our plan?" Adam asked.
"What's the point we hardly practiced anyway" Guy pointed out.
"Yeah and besides we're going against team 56. They're one of the weakest teams in the league. We'll be able to beat them." Julie said.
"I hope so and I also hope that this guy also has some coaching techniques up his sleeve" Charlie said and the team agreed.
When they were fully changed they went out of the change room door and started towards the ice. They saw the crowed that was sitting in the stands...they really hoped that they wouldn't look too stupid.
GARY'S P.O.V
I looked at the huge crowed sitting in the stands. We were never gonna win this. I had some great soccer skills, but hockey. Please I would probably be better off coaching a bunch of dogs to catch a Frisbee. I saw that the team was standing by our door that we went through...waiting for me. I walked up to them and I didn't get the happiest looking faces.
The announcer announced the teams and my team skated up onto the ice. Wait....did I have to walk out onto the ice and then walk over to the bench? I didn't like that. I slowly and carefully made my way to the bench. I finally got there...yes I was still alive. The Ducks just rolled their eyes. They put their hands in and started quacking away. Alright what was this supposed to be some sort of pep up cry?
"So coach what do we do?" Adam asked me.
"Um just play and then we'll work out techniques once you guys get playing. Now...take your positions" I said great why do I always have to get myself into these fixes.
Adams P.O.V
Great the stupid coach doesn't even give us a pep talk or anything. He seems to be such a 'new comer' to hockey. Oh well I hope this works, cause I really can't afford to be embarrassed since I dissed Varsity and said that we could beat them when we couldn't even beat one of the easiest teams.
Charlie's P.O.V
I went up to take the face off. I was going up against this kid a bit shorter than me and he was shaking like heck. I easily pushed him over and took the puck. This is going to be a cinch, at least that's what I thought until one of their enforcer's knocked me over and took the puck. All I saw was that Adam was taking the puck away from the huge guy which just knocked him over. I skated up to Adam to ask if he was alright, since he hit the boards with full force.
"Hey Adam are you ok?" I asked.
"Yeah I'm fine" Adam said standing up.
We quickly skated after Averman who now had the puck and backed him up...just in case he lost the puck or something.
We were losing big time and we had to do something. I quickly skated up to Mark.
"Hey call time out" I said as I skated past him.
He held up the timeout sign and the ref blew the whistle. The team skated up to him.
Gary's P.O.V
"Um sorry guys I've got to go to the bathroom" I said.
I needed to get away from them. I couldn't answer any of their questions.
Adam's P.O.V
"Hey you can't do that...hey" I yelled, but he didn't listen.
"Don't even bother Banksie he won't listen. Who cares anyway" Russ said.
"This teams more difficult to beat than I thought." I said. The team just stared at me with open mouths.
"What?" I asked.
"Funny you have to say that" Julie laughed.
"Hey I'm not perfect, not without practice...none of us are. Truthfully speaking." I said.
Charlie's P.O.V
"Yeah I guess. Ok listen let's try doing what Orion taught us" I said taking the clipboard that Mark had.
The team crowded around me. I explained the plan. Just in time, cause just as I finished the ref blew the whistle. The next group of us skated out onto the ice. They carried out the plan and we got one goal in. The ref came up to me.
"Where did your coach go?" he asked me.
"The bathroom" I said.
The ref shook his head and skated off. To make it even worse Buckley was sitting behind us. This coach was gonna get it. We started losing again. Finally Mark came back.
The period ended and we had a bit of a break. We grouped up on the ice.
Nobody's P.O.V
"I' m sick of this! I say we play stupidly" Kenny said.
"Yeah. He's hardly coaching us properly and to think I nearly thought he had his own style of coaching. He isn't coaching us at all!" Charlie agreed obviously angry.
So did the rest. They were gonna make him look bad.
MEANWHILE
Kruger and Johnson drove down the long road.
"So where do you think this guy went?" Johnson asked his partner.
"What's that?" Kruger asked stopping to halt making Johnson nearly choke on his coffee.
They jumped out of the car to have a look. When they got there they found a ring of keys.
"So that's how he got out" Kruger said.
"Yeah with the keys" Johnson added.
"How did he get them though?" Kruger asked himself and Johnson.
"We have a problem though" Johnson said.
"What?" Kruger asked.
"There are two roads he could have gone down" Johnson said pointing to another road going to the left.
"Oh boy this guy's good" Kruger said confused now.
BACK AT EDEN HALL
For the next two periods the Ducks really played stupidly. Like when this small guy stood next to Adam and tried to push him over and Adam pretended that he really had been pushed over, which made the Ducks laugh a little. The Game ended. The score 15-1. Julie had let them score goals easily. Too easily.
The Ducks went into the change rooms. Buckley walked past them and gave them a disappointed look. The Ducks acted like they had just been so defeated and they looked so...down.
When they got into the changing rooms...they burst out laughing.
"That was the most fun game I've ever played" Goldberg said as he took off his skates.
"Yeah now we just have to stuff up the next game too and he'll be in huge trouble" Connie said.
"Now we have to start devising this plan" Charlie said.
"Yeah this is the last team that is really gonna be stupid...I laugh their name's the fairy's or something." Luis said.
The Ducks were gonna give this coach something to think about. They were not happy and they were going to show it. Whether Buckley liked it or not.
Hey guys I hoped you enjoyed that. I know Team 56 is a stupid name, but a team that's lame should have a lame name. I don't know much about ice- hockey. I know a little bit and I can understand when I watch a game, but not that much. So I'm sorry if some of the info was wrong. Anyways please review!!! Thanks again for your reviews!!
