Banksies-baby99- I don't like that Kruger fellow either! I just had to make
a funny, but absolutely ridiculous character to give the story some life!!
I was just too lazy to think up a team, so I decided to use Blake. One of
the reasons was that they were tie so that I could do something about it.
You'll see in this chapter. For the getting caught thing...I'm still not
going to tell you!! You'll just have to read and find out!! Glad you like
the chapter and I hope you enjoy the next one!! Thanks for the awesome
review!!
Ktbeanz- Even though I write this story I think they're dumb too, but that's the way the story goes...or else there'll be no fun without stupid and ridiculous characters. I'm glad you liked Gary!! The poor guy's gonna suffer majorly in the next chapter!! You'll see! Well I hope you enjoy the chapter and thanks a million for your review!!
C-chan96- Oh ow!! I know what it's like to bite your lip!! I've done it more than once to know!! Oh you really did cheer me up; I went around the rest of the day with a happy smile on my face!! Yeah that dude glared at us as if to say 'I don't like you anymore'. I have another smart dude who was irritating me and he landed up in the school pool. That's what you get for showing off. He looked stupid after that!! Well another word for pay T.V is DSTV. I'm not really sure if you call it that or something else, but yeah that's what I'm talking about. I noticed that you absolutely love Charlie and I absolutely love Adam. You must be glad that the rumor was all a lie :) My friends are getting so annoyed, because I keep on telling them about the latest ice-hockey game. I know a little bit about it from researching and watching games, I find it interesting!! I would've thought that figure skating skates are better to learn with, but I rollerblade almost everyday so I wasn't as bad on the ice!! We don't have ice here though, so I have to go to the ice rink. Well I don't know if Varsity is really being nice, you have to find out. Hahaha Kruger is like Timone!! Johnson is the real detective out of the two!! I had to make him grow a backbone sometime. Quick update? Psh! That was two days late!! Anyways I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!! Hope you enjoy the new chapter and thanks a bunch for the review!!
SqUiDsLiLpYrO- Heylo to you too!! I'm glad that you didn't mind the short review!! I just don't like disappointing people. That's just me. Oh amazingly I've never heard about that film. Trust me you don't wanna know about the Bushmen!! They're the so called 'early men' of Africa!! South African political history isn't too bad...well that's what I think!! You know Nelson Mandela...If you haven't already learnt about that. Um we learnt a little about the American Revolution...which we wrote our summative assessments on last term. That was interesting...if you're from America then you'll know what I mean. Oh well good luck with the rest of the work. Any help needed then I'm here for ya!! Thanks so much for the review and I hope you find this chapter interesting!!
Hey Guys!! I won't be updating till Wednesday or Thursday, cause it's my birthday on the 27th and I'm going to Durban for a holiday!! Thanks so much for your awesome reviews!! I hope you enjoy the chapter!!
Time for trust and a game
THE DAY BEFORE THE GAME
Gary's P.O.V
Wow! Now that went well. It seems to me that they're starting to trust me a bit. Look at me it's like I want to make hockey my new profession. I really need to get to my problem now! I had better think of something...and quickly! I went down to the secretary at the office and asked for a phone book. She directed me to a table which was stacked with papers. I picked it up and looked under Bennet. Sandra Bennet. I quickly jotted down the number and went to my house/apartment. I picked up the phone and dialed the number.
"Hello" was the reply on the other end.
"Hi...Sandra?" I asked not sure if it was her.
"Yes"
"Sandra it's me Gary"
"GARY!! What are you doing calling me I thought you were in prison"
"Yeah I know I broke out"
"WHAT? Are you mad?"
"No! Listen I couldn't stand it anymore and besides I missed you"
"Really? Well where are you now?"
"I'm pretending to be Mark Flemming an ice-hockey coach at Eden Hall Academy"
"Oh my word! You can't even..."
"Listen I need to go" I said hearing a knock at my door.
"Love you" she said.
"Love you too. Bye" I said quickly and put down the phone.
I answered the door and saw Buckley outside.
"You had better win this game" he warned me without even a greeting...how rude!
"Don't worry about the game. I've got it covered" I said.
"You had better" he said and walked away.
Geez that guy creeps me out at times. I hoped that the coaching helped. After all we practiced hard for the whole week.
THE NEXT DAY!!
KRUGER AND JOHNSON
"I've got a feeling that this is going to be the day that we find him" Kruger said enthusiastically.
"Kruger you've said that everyday for the last week" Johnson pointed out.
"Well we will catch him...with my good detective skills we will" Kruger said looking proud.
'Oh for the love of soil! With his detective skills we'll surely be in trouble.' Johnson thought a bit fed up with Kruger's 'smart' remarks.
They went down to breakfast first thing in the morning...no surprise there. They got into their car and started driving to the last place in the city. They were driving and suddenly saw another suspect.
"What did I tell you?" Kruger asked and Johnson sighed...again.
MEANWHILE AT EDEN HALL
The Ducks were very excited about the game. Things were definitely going their way! Varsity was being nice to them and the coach wasn't so bad and they also learnt a lot of new tricks.
"Hey guys I can't wait to beat Blake's butts!" Charlie said enthusiastically.
"Yeah I'm with you" Fulton and Portman said at the same time.
The Ducks walked down to the locker room to change and found that 'Mark' was already there. After they changed they stood by 'Mark' to go in. Their name got called out and a few 'yays' came out of the unusually small crowed, but Varsity was yelling and screaming for the Ducks, but they got a few coke tins thrown at them.
The Ducks started the game with Charlie taking the face off. The captain of Blake had a smile on his face as he looked the Charlie.
"Ready to lose?" the captain asked.
"We really suck" Charlie said and the Blake captain smiled.
They started the game and surprisingly the Ducks scored a goal easily.
"At losing" Charlie finished. The Blake captain glared at Charlie and realized that they were going to have to play rough.
They score a goal in the Ducks net, but the Ducks came back again and scored another. The game was very close for the first two periods. They were tie at the end of the second one. They went into the locker room for some pep talk.
MEANWHILE
Kruger and Johnson jumped out of the car and ran after the frightened suspect. They ran and ran, but the suspect just wouldn't give up. They finally rounded into a junk yard and the suspect stopped at a wall.
"Stop in the name of the law!" Johnson shouted.
"That's my line...now this is how you do it" Kruger said clearing his throat. "STOP IN THE NAME OF THE LAW YOU LITTLE SCUMBAG!!!" Kruger shouted rudely.
The man stopped and turned around.
"Are you always this rude?" the man asked.
"Well that's the way it is" Kruger said.
Johnson tried not to laugh.
"Kruger this is the wrong guy" Johnson finally said.
"I know that Johnson" Kruger said.
Johnson just shook his head; he couldn't wait for them to catch the guy. So he could get rid of the block head next to him.
"Don't tell me how to do my job, because I'm perfect at it" Kruger said as he released the man.
"Yeah, yeah" Johnson said softly to himself.
"What was that Johnson?" Kruger asked.
"You're the greatest man alive" Johnson lied.
"Yes I know" Kruger said smiling.
'Why did I say that? Johnson asked himself in his thoughts.
BACK AT EDEN HALL
"Listen guys I say we do the crossfire plan" Gary instructed them.
They all nodded and went out of the locker room and they skated out onto the ice. Portman, Fulton and Kenny gave him the thumbs up sign. Adam allowed the opposing team to get the puck. Portman and Fulton came from opposite sides and knocked the one guy over and passed it to Kenny who did a figure skating trick and scored a goal easily in the net behind the confused goalie.
The game ended and the Ducks won. The crowed cheered and screamed. The Ducks got together in a huge huddle. They lifted 'Mark' up in the air and carried him around the ice.
AFTER THE GAME
The Ducks and the Varsity snuck behind the boards when they saw that Buckley was going to talk to 'Mark' again.
"That game was wonderful" Buckley complimented him.
"Thanks" 'Mark' replied.
"Nice work. I guess you still have your job and a good record" Buckley said. "I can't wait for the next one." He said as he walked out of the rink.
Gary's P.O.V
This is going great!! Now I just need to get a plan to get out of trouble with the law.
Hey guys I hope you liked that!! I hope that it was a little funny at least. Please tell me what you think. I'll see you on Wednesday or Thursday!! Please REVIEW!!
P.S thanks so much again for your reviews!!
Ktbeanz- Even though I write this story I think they're dumb too, but that's the way the story goes...or else there'll be no fun without stupid and ridiculous characters. I'm glad you liked Gary!! The poor guy's gonna suffer majorly in the next chapter!! You'll see! Well I hope you enjoy the chapter and thanks a million for your review!!
C-chan96- Oh ow!! I know what it's like to bite your lip!! I've done it more than once to know!! Oh you really did cheer me up; I went around the rest of the day with a happy smile on my face!! Yeah that dude glared at us as if to say 'I don't like you anymore'. I have another smart dude who was irritating me and he landed up in the school pool. That's what you get for showing off. He looked stupid after that!! Well another word for pay T.V is DSTV. I'm not really sure if you call it that or something else, but yeah that's what I'm talking about. I noticed that you absolutely love Charlie and I absolutely love Adam. You must be glad that the rumor was all a lie :) My friends are getting so annoyed, because I keep on telling them about the latest ice-hockey game. I know a little bit about it from researching and watching games, I find it interesting!! I would've thought that figure skating skates are better to learn with, but I rollerblade almost everyday so I wasn't as bad on the ice!! We don't have ice here though, so I have to go to the ice rink. Well I don't know if Varsity is really being nice, you have to find out. Hahaha Kruger is like Timone!! Johnson is the real detective out of the two!! I had to make him grow a backbone sometime. Quick update? Psh! That was two days late!! Anyways I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!! Hope you enjoy the new chapter and thanks a bunch for the review!!
SqUiDsLiLpYrO- Heylo to you too!! I'm glad that you didn't mind the short review!! I just don't like disappointing people. That's just me. Oh amazingly I've never heard about that film. Trust me you don't wanna know about the Bushmen!! They're the so called 'early men' of Africa!! South African political history isn't too bad...well that's what I think!! You know Nelson Mandela...If you haven't already learnt about that. Um we learnt a little about the American Revolution...which we wrote our summative assessments on last term. That was interesting...if you're from America then you'll know what I mean. Oh well good luck with the rest of the work. Any help needed then I'm here for ya!! Thanks so much for the review and I hope you find this chapter interesting!!
Hey Guys!! I won't be updating till Wednesday or Thursday, cause it's my birthday on the 27th and I'm going to Durban for a holiday!! Thanks so much for your awesome reviews!! I hope you enjoy the chapter!!
Time for trust and a game
THE DAY BEFORE THE GAME
Gary's P.O.V
Wow! Now that went well. It seems to me that they're starting to trust me a bit. Look at me it's like I want to make hockey my new profession. I really need to get to my problem now! I had better think of something...and quickly! I went down to the secretary at the office and asked for a phone book. She directed me to a table which was stacked with papers. I picked it up and looked under Bennet. Sandra Bennet. I quickly jotted down the number and went to my house/apartment. I picked up the phone and dialed the number.
"Hello" was the reply on the other end.
"Hi...Sandra?" I asked not sure if it was her.
"Yes"
"Sandra it's me Gary"
"GARY!! What are you doing calling me I thought you were in prison"
"Yeah I know I broke out"
"WHAT? Are you mad?"
"No! Listen I couldn't stand it anymore and besides I missed you"
"Really? Well where are you now?"
"I'm pretending to be Mark Flemming an ice-hockey coach at Eden Hall Academy"
"Oh my word! You can't even..."
"Listen I need to go" I said hearing a knock at my door.
"Love you" she said.
"Love you too. Bye" I said quickly and put down the phone.
I answered the door and saw Buckley outside.
"You had better win this game" he warned me without even a greeting...how rude!
"Don't worry about the game. I've got it covered" I said.
"You had better" he said and walked away.
Geez that guy creeps me out at times. I hoped that the coaching helped. After all we practiced hard for the whole week.
THE NEXT DAY!!
KRUGER AND JOHNSON
"I've got a feeling that this is going to be the day that we find him" Kruger said enthusiastically.
"Kruger you've said that everyday for the last week" Johnson pointed out.
"Well we will catch him...with my good detective skills we will" Kruger said looking proud.
'Oh for the love of soil! With his detective skills we'll surely be in trouble.' Johnson thought a bit fed up with Kruger's 'smart' remarks.
They went down to breakfast first thing in the morning...no surprise there. They got into their car and started driving to the last place in the city. They were driving and suddenly saw another suspect.
"What did I tell you?" Kruger asked and Johnson sighed...again.
MEANWHILE AT EDEN HALL
The Ducks were very excited about the game. Things were definitely going their way! Varsity was being nice to them and the coach wasn't so bad and they also learnt a lot of new tricks.
"Hey guys I can't wait to beat Blake's butts!" Charlie said enthusiastically.
"Yeah I'm with you" Fulton and Portman said at the same time.
The Ducks walked down to the locker room to change and found that 'Mark' was already there. After they changed they stood by 'Mark' to go in. Their name got called out and a few 'yays' came out of the unusually small crowed, but Varsity was yelling and screaming for the Ducks, but they got a few coke tins thrown at them.
The Ducks started the game with Charlie taking the face off. The captain of Blake had a smile on his face as he looked the Charlie.
"Ready to lose?" the captain asked.
"We really suck" Charlie said and the Blake captain smiled.
They started the game and surprisingly the Ducks scored a goal easily.
"At losing" Charlie finished. The Blake captain glared at Charlie and realized that they were going to have to play rough.
They score a goal in the Ducks net, but the Ducks came back again and scored another. The game was very close for the first two periods. They were tie at the end of the second one. They went into the locker room for some pep talk.
MEANWHILE
Kruger and Johnson jumped out of the car and ran after the frightened suspect. They ran and ran, but the suspect just wouldn't give up. They finally rounded into a junk yard and the suspect stopped at a wall.
"Stop in the name of the law!" Johnson shouted.
"That's my line...now this is how you do it" Kruger said clearing his throat. "STOP IN THE NAME OF THE LAW YOU LITTLE SCUMBAG!!!" Kruger shouted rudely.
The man stopped and turned around.
"Are you always this rude?" the man asked.
"Well that's the way it is" Kruger said.
Johnson tried not to laugh.
"Kruger this is the wrong guy" Johnson finally said.
"I know that Johnson" Kruger said.
Johnson just shook his head; he couldn't wait for them to catch the guy. So he could get rid of the block head next to him.
"Don't tell me how to do my job, because I'm perfect at it" Kruger said as he released the man.
"Yeah, yeah" Johnson said softly to himself.
"What was that Johnson?" Kruger asked.
"You're the greatest man alive" Johnson lied.
"Yes I know" Kruger said smiling.
'Why did I say that? Johnson asked himself in his thoughts.
BACK AT EDEN HALL
"Listen guys I say we do the crossfire plan" Gary instructed them.
They all nodded and went out of the locker room and they skated out onto the ice. Portman, Fulton and Kenny gave him the thumbs up sign. Adam allowed the opposing team to get the puck. Portman and Fulton came from opposite sides and knocked the one guy over and passed it to Kenny who did a figure skating trick and scored a goal easily in the net behind the confused goalie.
The game ended and the Ducks won. The crowed cheered and screamed. The Ducks got together in a huge huddle. They lifted 'Mark' up in the air and carried him around the ice.
AFTER THE GAME
The Ducks and the Varsity snuck behind the boards when they saw that Buckley was going to talk to 'Mark' again.
"That game was wonderful" Buckley complimented him.
"Thanks" 'Mark' replied.
"Nice work. I guess you still have your job and a good record" Buckley said. "I can't wait for the next one." He said as he walked out of the rink.
Gary's P.O.V
This is going great!! Now I just need to get a plan to get out of trouble with the law.
Hey guys I hope you liked that!! I hope that it was a little funny at least. Please tell me what you think. I'll see you on Wednesday or Thursday!! Please REVIEW!!
P.S thanks so much again for your reviews!!
