Hello, I'm back! After creating and deleting a heap of un-successful fanfic, I'm up with the new one. Please read and review! Critiques and flamers are welcome!
Some of the characters here are make up characters by me!
Rising to the challenge
Konoha is just as normal as it could be, many years passed, and the day the shinobis awaited came. The people crowded in the streets of Konoha, to see the retrieved shinobi. Two kunoichis were pushing their way through the streets. See that brown-haired kunoichi? The one that has her hair at the shoulder level, that one, her name is Hinozuni Rina. And the other one, her name is Kagegami Yuzuka.
"What's going on?" Rina asked a woman who was standing in the crowd, seems like that lady is pushing her way too, "Nani? You don't know what's going on? Uzumaki Naruto is able to retrieve Uchiha Sasuke from going to Orochimaru!"
Rina tilted her head a little bit, "Uchiha Sasuke? I think I heard about him when I was in Ninja academy." When they turned to the lady, she was gone. Yuzuka recalls what she heard from other people, "Uchiha Sasuke leaves his village when he is 13, three years passed, he must be sixteen by now." She paused, "2 years older than us."
Women's screams were heard from far away, "They are coming! They are coming! Uzumaki Naruto and Uchiha Sasuke had made their way to the gates of Konoha village!!" Rina and Yuzuka quickly pushed their way in the crowd and try to take a look at Uchiha Sasuke.
What they saw is a blonde boy, and a raven-color-hair boy walking into the village. The blonde boy, they know well, Uzumaki Naruto, they often saw him with their friend, Konohamaru. But they never saw Sasuke before. The peered closer, and they see him, clearly. He is tall and has spiky black hair; he is very handsome to the girls. At that very moment, Sasuke's eye met with Rina's eye. Rina felt her heart beating fast.
After the Sasuke leaves the area, the crowd also leaves. Only Rina and Yuzuka is standing there. Yuzuka called her friend, "Rina, are you alright?" Rina was frozen as shades of pink starts to scatter on her face, "Sasuke-sempai, it's love at first sight, with you."
Yuzuka heard it, and she is shocked, "Hey Rina! If you want to love him you'll be in danger!" Rina is puzzled, "Why is it? He hates me?" Yuzuka sighed, "Almost all the kunoichis of our age 13-17 is in love with him. Some that I know will be Sakura-sempai and Ino-sempai. They both are so scary, maybe they will kill you if you even try to touch Sasuke-san."
"That's it! This will be a challenge to me! I will win it! I will have Sasuke-san someday! And he will belong to me!" Rina announced, not awared that Sakura is just nearby.
