A singing tutor?
Susie stepped back in shock. "Errr Ok Tommy, but if it's about sex forget it"
"What? No nothing like that. You know I can sing quiet well, but after my voice broke I lost all my confidence. I was hoping you could help"
"Ohh sorry Tommy. Sure I'll help. Right first come over to my house today at about 5, but you gotta be willing to sing to me ok?"
"Sure thanks Susie. See you later"
"See ya at 5"
Tommy returned to his friends who were having no luck with finding a singer. He sat next to Kimi. There was a 14 year old boy standing on stage not moving and pretty much pissing himself
"Any good ones yet?" he whispered
"No not yet. Where have you just gone?"
"I went to ask Susie for some help with singing in public"
"That's a great idea shall I come to?"
"No. I'll be embaresed"
"Ughh.. NEXT!" shouted a frustrated Chuckie
"You've sang infront of me before, what would be different now?"
"Nothing really it'll just be a bigger audiance. What about my next lesson?"
"Promise?"
"Promise" They both laughed quietly
"Well that's everyone for today anyone like anyone?" said Dil
"HELL NO!" shouted the 'panel'
"Come on we may as well go" said Tommy. Just as he was getting up Megan burst through the door and rushd over to Tommy
"SO THIS IS WHERE YOUR HIDING!" shouted a angry Megan
"Hey calm down Meg. I told you I was coming to the singing auditions"
"You didn't try out did you?"
"No he didn't" said Kimi "but he has a great voice you should be more suportive!" Tommy smiled at Kimi
"Have you heard him sing? It's terrible no offence baby" Tommy stoped smiling and hung his head
"He is a good singer" said Dil " I've heard him in his room he's brilliant"
"Come on Tommy were leaving I'm not gonna be spoken to like this!" shouted Megan
"Excuse me?" Tommy replied
"I said were leaving"
"You insult me and my friends and you expect me to follow you like some lap dog? Forget it Megan it's over between us!"
"You can't finish with me!"
"I JUST DID!" he began walking away
"YOUR STILL A LOSSER TOMMY! I ONLY EVER WENT OUT WITH YOU FOR A BET!!" Tommy stopped and turned around.
"What do you mean a bet?
"I had a bet with Courtney Armstrong that I would go out with you for $100." Kimi suddenly snapped and smacked Megan as hard as she could. Everyone was shocked. It was common knowledge Kimi hated Megan, but she had never been violent in her whole life "That's it Finster I'm gonna get you done for assault"
"I don't think so" said Tommy "There are 5 witnesses here who didn't see Kimi hit you"
"Yeah" said Phil "All I saw was you walking into the door"
"Me too" said Chuckie, Lil and Dil.
"You are all such losers I'll make sure you are always outcasts!" shouted Megan beginning to cry and running out of the room
"Kimi that was great well done" said Lil
"Yeah you knocked her spark out" said Dil
"Thanks guys I'm just gonna sit down a while you get home. I'll be fine"
Everyone agreed and began to leave when Kimi shouted after Tommy
"Yeah what is it Kimi?"
"I'm sorry about Megan"
"That's ok I'm just glad I saw what she was like before it got to serious"
"Thanks for sticking up for me." He put his arm around her shoulders
"Hey I'd do anything for my little sis" He smiled at her
"HEY! I'm the older one!"
He took his arm away from her shoulder "On our birth certificates it says I'm 4 hours older"
"Yeah, but I was born in a diffrent time zone so I'm really 2 hours older than you"
"Birth certificates don't lie little girl" she smacked him in the chest
"I hate you" she smiled
"Me to" they both laughed and left together
======= 4:56 PM ======
"Hey Susie am I early?"
"Just a bit come on in I'm a bit snowed under with work, but I can give you 5 minutes"
They both entered the living room. She sat on her sofa and Tommy stood in front of her
"Go on then"
"Go on what?"
"Let's hear you sing"
"Oh sorry.......On a cobwebbed afternoon
In a room full of emptiness
By a freeway,I confess I was lost in the pages
Of a book, Full of death
Reading how we'll die alone
And if a God will lay to rest
Anywhere we want to go
In your house, I long to be
Room by room, Patiently
I'll wait for you there
Like a stone,I'll wait for you there
Alone
And on my death bed,I will prey
To the gods and the angels
Like a pagan, To anyone who will take me to heaven
To a place, I would recall
I was there so long ago, The sky was bruised
The world was black, And there you led me on
In your house, I long to be
Room by room, Patiently
I'll wait for you there
Like a stone, I'll wait for you there
Alone
In all I read, Till the day was gone
And I sat in regret, In all the things I've done
For all that I've blessed, And all that I've wronged
In dreams till my death, I will wonder on
In your house, I long to be
Room by room, Patiently
I'll wait for you there
Like a stone, I'll wait for you there
Alone
Alone"
She did the classic thinking stance.
"Well I hate to admit it Tommy,but..." He thought to himself 'I knew it Megan was right' "... your an even better singer than me"
He was shocked "Really?"
"Yeah, your singing isn't the problem. You've lost all your confidence somewhere along the line."
"I guess your right"
"Hey I got some great news for you"
"What?"
"Well you have suddenly become the most popular guy in school"
"Really? How did that happen?"
"Everyone heard YOU split up with Megan. No-one has ever done that before. Your a living legend"
Tommy felt $1,000,000 "That is so cool!"
"Yeah. Now get out I gotta lot of work to do!"
"OK see ya"
"Bye Tommy"
He walked home briming with confidence, he wasn't the loser, Megan was.
====== The next day ======
"Ughhh NEXT!" shouted Chuckie more frustrated then ever
"That was the last guy for the day Chuck" said Phil
Just then Tommy burst through the doors
"Hey....guys..." he said out of breath "..have you chosen someone.... yet?"
"No they've been really crap" said a disapointed Dil noticing the last singer hadn't left yet "no offence"
"Great. I wanna try out"
"Really that's great!" the 3 said in unison
"Get up there T"
Tommy rushed up to the stage and stood behind the mic
"What shall I sing?"
"Something... rock" said Phil
"Some system?"
"Yeah man get the SOAD out!" shouted Chuckie
"Ok how does suggestions sound?"
"Perfect go for it T" shouted out Dil
"Watching,
From a post up high,
From where you see the ships afar,
From a well trained eye,
The waves all keep on crashing by,
If you are the light post,
Then you own the working class,
But if you want the answers,
You better give a piece of ass,
Give a piece of your ass,
Warning,
Post hypnotic suggestions,
Running the ships ashore,
The orange light that follows,
Will soon proclaim itself a god,
If you point your questions,
The fog will surely chew you up,
But if you want the answers,
You better get ready for the fire,
Get ready for the fire,
The ships are multiplying day after day sir,
And they're coming close to the shore sir, shore sir,
We need to evacuate the light post,
It's all over, it's all over It's all over"
"You said you couldn't sing!" said Chuckie
"Well I didn't think I could"
"Well you can! On behalf of The Tokyo Porn Stars I would like to ask you to be our singer" said Dil
"Here, here" said Chuckie and Phil
"I'd love to guys. When is our first rehershal?"
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Woo Tommy is a legend what a singer! He's full of confidence and he sain't going out with that bitch anymore. Go Tommy. I'm proud to be one of the only authors that makes Tommy the good guy for onc.
Susie stepped back in shock. "Errr Ok Tommy, but if it's about sex forget it"
"What? No nothing like that. You know I can sing quiet well, but after my voice broke I lost all my confidence. I was hoping you could help"
"Ohh sorry Tommy. Sure I'll help. Right first come over to my house today at about 5, but you gotta be willing to sing to me ok?"
"Sure thanks Susie. See you later"
"See ya at 5"
Tommy returned to his friends who were having no luck with finding a singer. He sat next to Kimi. There was a 14 year old boy standing on stage not moving and pretty much pissing himself
"Any good ones yet?" he whispered
"No not yet. Where have you just gone?"
"I went to ask Susie for some help with singing in public"
"That's a great idea shall I come to?"
"No. I'll be embaresed"
"Ughh.. NEXT!" shouted a frustrated Chuckie
"You've sang infront of me before, what would be different now?"
"Nothing really it'll just be a bigger audiance. What about my next lesson?"
"Promise?"
"Promise" They both laughed quietly
"Well that's everyone for today anyone like anyone?" said Dil
"HELL NO!" shouted the 'panel'
"Come on we may as well go" said Tommy. Just as he was getting up Megan burst through the door and rushd over to Tommy
"SO THIS IS WHERE YOUR HIDING!" shouted a angry Megan
"Hey calm down Meg. I told you I was coming to the singing auditions"
"You didn't try out did you?"
"No he didn't" said Kimi "but he has a great voice you should be more suportive!" Tommy smiled at Kimi
"Have you heard him sing? It's terrible no offence baby" Tommy stoped smiling and hung his head
"He is a good singer" said Dil " I've heard him in his room he's brilliant"
"Come on Tommy were leaving I'm not gonna be spoken to like this!" shouted Megan
"Excuse me?" Tommy replied
"I said were leaving"
"You insult me and my friends and you expect me to follow you like some lap dog? Forget it Megan it's over between us!"
"You can't finish with me!"
"I JUST DID!" he began walking away
"YOUR STILL A LOSSER TOMMY! I ONLY EVER WENT OUT WITH YOU FOR A BET!!" Tommy stopped and turned around.
"What do you mean a bet?
"I had a bet with Courtney Armstrong that I would go out with you for $100." Kimi suddenly snapped and smacked Megan as hard as she could. Everyone was shocked. It was common knowledge Kimi hated Megan, but she had never been violent in her whole life "That's it Finster I'm gonna get you done for assault"
"I don't think so" said Tommy "There are 5 witnesses here who didn't see Kimi hit you"
"Yeah" said Phil "All I saw was you walking into the door"
"Me too" said Chuckie, Lil and Dil.
"You are all such losers I'll make sure you are always outcasts!" shouted Megan beginning to cry and running out of the room
"Kimi that was great well done" said Lil
"Yeah you knocked her spark out" said Dil
"Thanks guys I'm just gonna sit down a while you get home. I'll be fine"
Everyone agreed and began to leave when Kimi shouted after Tommy
"Yeah what is it Kimi?"
"I'm sorry about Megan"
"That's ok I'm just glad I saw what she was like before it got to serious"
"Thanks for sticking up for me." He put his arm around her shoulders
"Hey I'd do anything for my little sis" He smiled at her
"HEY! I'm the older one!"
He took his arm away from her shoulder "On our birth certificates it says I'm 4 hours older"
"Yeah, but I was born in a diffrent time zone so I'm really 2 hours older than you"
"Birth certificates don't lie little girl" she smacked him in the chest
"I hate you" she smiled
"Me to" they both laughed and left together
======= 4:56 PM ======
"Hey Susie am I early?"
"Just a bit come on in I'm a bit snowed under with work, but I can give you 5 minutes"
They both entered the living room. She sat on her sofa and Tommy stood in front of her
"Go on then"
"Go on what?"
"Let's hear you sing"
"Oh sorry.......On a cobwebbed afternoon
In a room full of emptiness
By a freeway,I confess I was lost in the pages
Of a book, Full of death
Reading how we'll die alone
And if a God will lay to rest
Anywhere we want to go
In your house, I long to be
Room by room, Patiently
I'll wait for you there
Like a stone,I'll wait for you there
Alone
And on my death bed,I will prey
To the gods and the angels
Like a pagan, To anyone who will take me to heaven
To a place, I would recall
I was there so long ago, The sky was bruised
The world was black, And there you led me on
In your house, I long to be
Room by room, Patiently
I'll wait for you there
Like a stone, I'll wait for you there
Alone
In all I read, Till the day was gone
And I sat in regret, In all the things I've done
For all that I've blessed, And all that I've wronged
In dreams till my death, I will wonder on
In your house, I long to be
Room by room, Patiently
I'll wait for you there
Like a stone, I'll wait for you there
Alone
Alone"
She did the classic thinking stance.
"Well I hate to admit it Tommy,but..." He thought to himself 'I knew it Megan was right' "... your an even better singer than me"
He was shocked "Really?"
"Yeah, your singing isn't the problem. You've lost all your confidence somewhere along the line."
"I guess your right"
"Hey I got some great news for you"
"What?"
"Well you have suddenly become the most popular guy in school"
"Really? How did that happen?"
"Everyone heard YOU split up with Megan. No-one has ever done that before. Your a living legend"
Tommy felt $1,000,000 "That is so cool!"
"Yeah. Now get out I gotta lot of work to do!"
"OK see ya"
"Bye Tommy"
He walked home briming with confidence, he wasn't the loser, Megan was.
====== The next day ======
"Ughhh NEXT!" shouted Chuckie more frustrated then ever
"That was the last guy for the day Chuck" said Phil
Just then Tommy burst through the doors
"Hey....guys..." he said out of breath "..have you chosen someone.... yet?"
"No they've been really crap" said a disapointed Dil noticing the last singer hadn't left yet "no offence"
"Great. I wanna try out"
"Really that's great!" the 3 said in unison
"Get up there T"
Tommy rushed up to the stage and stood behind the mic
"What shall I sing?"
"Something... rock" said Phil
"Some system?"
"Yeah man get the SOAD out!" shouted Chuckie
"Ok how does suggestions sound?"
"Perfect go for it T" shouted out Dil
"Watching,
From a post up high,
From where you see the ships afar,
From a well trained eye,
The waves all keep on crashing by,
If you are the light post,
Then you own the working class,
But if you want the answers,
You better give a piece of ass,
Give a piece of your ass,
Warning,
Post hypnotic suggestions,
Running the ships ashore,
The orange light that follows,
Will soon proclaim itself a god,
If you point your questions,
The fog will surely chew you up,
But if you want the answers,
You better get ready for the fire,
Get ready for the fire,
The ships are multiplying day after day sir,
And they're coming close to the shore sir, shore sir,
We need to evacuate the light post,
It's all over, it's all over It's all over"
"You said you couldn't sing!" said Chuckie
"Well I didn't think I could"
"Well you can! On behalf of The Tokyo Porn Stars I would like to ask you to be our singer" said Dil
"Here, here" said Chuckie and Phil
"I'd love to guys. When is our first rehershal?"
=================================================================================================
Woo Tommy is a legend what a singer! He's full of confidence and he sain't going out with that bitch anymore. Go Tommy. I'm proud to be one of the only authors that makes Tommy the good guy for onc.
