Um...I'm very happy to see your reviews! I'm so excited that you understand what I'm writing!
THX A LOT! I take courage to write more in Eng now!
For everyone who've read my fic, I LOVE U ALL >/
Kiko cat: Yes, I'm a Chinese...so, even in eng, my writing style is somehow similar to the Chinese story…the feeling, and the expressing method. It maybe a little bit strange, but I hope you like it Chapter 1 is sad...how do you think the story will go on? And thx for your encouraging/
Shadow Lynx: Thx for your understanding! I definitely will continue the story and I need your support! I hope you'll enjoy chapter 2!
UlTiMaTe KaI LuVa: Oh! You're a Cantonese too! Nice to meet You! >o /(with a big hug) I've sent you the e-mail Um…do u wanna see the Chinese ver?
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The best is yet to come.
Is that always true?
I do not favor rainy day, as it seems to be a day for leaving.
However, without raining, we cannot see the beautiful rainbow after all.
Then…
After raining, could we do find the one we love under the rainbow bridge?
Over The Rainbow
Part I –Rhythm In The Rain-
The rain had grown stronger.
Raindrops were falling down one by one from the sky, like clusters of pearls. Everything was covered by rain. Everything was blurred.
Rei was walking along the street, let the cold raindrops hit on his skin. He didn't care. Water droplets slipped down his face as well as tear. Cold, wet long hair was heavily pulled behind. The rainfall had washed its gloss away. However, his heart was much heavier than his head.
"I do not love you ever from the beginning at all. I only play with you."
Memories ran through his head.
"You're nothing more than a lovely toy for me…"
"Shut up!"
He trampled into a puddle and wanted to stop recalling this awful word.
Was that all the time they spent with each other meaningless? Was the truth can be broken so easily?
A car passed through the highway beside him. The rolling wheel was like the cogwheel of the cine-projector, which displayed all of his memories with his love –
Taking a walk along a quite path, shopping on a crowded street, looking at the beautiful sunset on a breach, praying for hope and happiness in every dark nights…TOGETHER. They experienced those precious moments together. Rei could not stop thinking of his smile, his tears, his voice, his warmth…and the way he kissed.
It shouldn't end in this way…
He hurried to run back to the place he had previously just been. He ran too fast that caused him nearly to tumble, but he didn't care. The only thing got into his mind was that he wanted his love back…he would simply lose it if he didn't turn back.
KAI…
When you get caught in the rain with no where to run
When you're distraught and in pain without anyone
When you keep crying out to be saved
But nobody comes and you feel so far away
That you just can't find your way home
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He stopped in front of the door and breathed heavily. Excess rainfalls dripped from the clothes and fell onto the ground.
"Kai!" He knocked the door but there was no reaction at all.
Surroundings were quiet enough to hear the anxious rainfall.
For a somewhat motivation, he rushed the door and entered the room, within a second.
When the door was opened, he saw a horrible scene. Many pieces of glass fragments were soaking in a pond of bloody liquid, glittering like small red stars. What was happened?
Nobody was there in the house.
He went out the room immediately. He ran through the long wet street worriedly to look for the familiar body.
There's nothing you can't face
And should they tell you, you'll never pull through
Don't hesitate, stand tall and say
I can make it through the rain
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While the long-haired teen rushed on the street, another blue-haired guy was roaming in the rain also.
The teen quickly moved toward the corner of the street and later disappeared. Meanwhile, another guy wandered slowly from the opposite of the road. The falling raindrops brightened his soft, smooth blue hair. He crossed the road and stepped on the path where the teen had run a little while ago, but walked toward a conflicting direction.
He passed the road slowly and gradually stopped under a tree that grown aside the path. He leant against the trunk and sat. Both hands were suppressing his chest as it felt painful and suffered. He frowned badly.
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The boy with long hair was running on the street with a row of trees on the side. He ran too fast that he stumbled and fell over a puddle.
He got up and raised his eyes, then surprised by the streetlights that had switched on. Time was late. Those streetlights shined on both sides created a blurry yellow image in the rain. It seemed like a collapsed dream or crushing hope. Everything was faint.
He suffered a mixture of various feelings: worry, anxiety, sorrow, perplexed, fears, impatience, uneasiness…
I miss you. I want you. I wanna hold you.
Do you know that I'm missing you? That I'm considering about you?
I'm scared. I don't want to lose you.
I only hope that you will appear in front of me at once. I will en embrace you tightly. Then I can feel your warmth and your breath. No matter you will struggle in my arms, I won't let you go.
I'd whisper into your ear: I love you so much that I can't cope with this feeling…
The boy kneeled on the ground and screamed violently in the deepest side of his heart.
He didn't know that his love was lying under a tree not far away from him.
And I live once again
And I live one more day
And I can make it through the rain
You will make it through the rain
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Facing the cool wind and heavy rain on your own is an extremely difficult task.
Will you appear at that rainbow end after it stops raining?
What can I do if the rain would never stop?
Don't give up yourself…
Good whether must have to come.
If, you are willing to wait for it…
TBC
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Lyric—"Through The Rain" by Mariah Carey
Hi! It's me again.
I've already written the story up to chapter 5 (although it haven't finished yet). Now the biggest task for me is to translate it into Eng.
R & R please! I'm looking forward to your guys' comments!
9/4/05
