I am so sorry i haven't posted this up..sorry..I just started school..In australia..school just started..sorry..here it is though :D..please forgive me.
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Kohaku stood there trembling. His tears falling lightly onto Chihiro.
"Kohaku..Hurts," Chihiro whispered.
Kohaku leaned down and slipped his hand onto her cheek.
"Chihiro," he whispered.
Sadness in his voice. His partner, soul mate, lover, the mother of his child, laid there dying before him.
He bent down and kissed her forehead.
"I love you," He said between the tears.
His voice trembled as he said it.
He looked over at her wound. Studying it closer. It was the wound of the shadow's sword. A wound in which he is unable to heal, this particular wound cannot be healed by any healing magic, only defeating the one that gave the magic will cut off the poison.
Kohaku's face filled with hatred, he looked up at the dark spirit.
The dark spirit was laughing, at the sight of the once perfect family.
"The poison of dark magic is eating her away Kohaku, in a matter of 2 days it will slowly eat away her body from the inside, the pain that she is experiencing is intense, there is no cure Kohaku, face it, she will.."
"She will not," I say, standing up.
"You dare stand up to me, if you haven't noticed Kohaku I am holding your son in my hands, only I give the commands to stand and talk to me so rudely,"
"please, do not harm Kohiro, please just take me instead," Kohaku pleaded as he watched the very moment of his son being tortured. His sudden change of emotion shocked Chihiro.
She could hear slightly, the faint words of "not harm Kohiro….take me instead,"
She couldn't move, she can't do anything to help Kohaku.
Chihiro laid on the ground in front of him, slightly breathing, her eyes closed.
She lightly whispered. "Ko…haku…n..no"
Kohaku turned back to Chihiro.
"Why should I take you instead, with you I can do nothing, your magic is just a spec compared to Kohiro, with his life, magic, his soul, I can do anything I want," The Evil Shadow cried.
Kohiro laid in his boney fingers shaking with fear.
Kohaku looked down at Chihiro and took her hand. With is free hand he removed his crown and gently placed it on Chihiro's head. The two crowns linked on together like one.
He whispered one final time. "I love you Chihiro, I promise I will make it back to see your beautiful smile again" before transforming into his dragon form.
With one final glance at Chihiro He took off. Even in dragon form, his tears still fell.
A silent whisper could be heard in his head. "Kohaku I love you too, please get our baby back" It was Chihiro.
Kohaku didn't look back instead flew forward to his destination.
Tears were spilling from Kohaku's eyes the fur on his face was already soaking wet.
He knew that using all his energy and magic, he can destroy the evil Shadow, but with the cost of his life.
From Kohaku's dragon form, he transformed into human.
He floated in the sky, glowing.
"Give me my son back," Kohaku said, glaring at the Dark Shadow.
"Kohaku, you have no chance of…….."
Kohaku sent glow balls towards him.
The dark shadow laughed "You think your puny little glow balls are going to harm me, they are nothing Kohaku,"
The dark Shadow raised his hand
A blast of darkness rushed over the land.
All the trees turned black.
Kohaku was hit by the great force.
He was thrown back.
Wiping the blood away from his mouth.
Kohaku's final decision was made.
He flew towards the Shadow.
HE flew through white clouds. The Shadow had vanished.
It spoke in Kohaku's head. "Too slow dragon boy, your son is now mine,"
Kohaku's tears fell. His only son, taken away.
"Where are you," Kohaku screamed.
"I'll make you a deal dragon boy, fight me tomorrow 5pm Sharp, later and the match is over, if you win, you get your son back along with the life of your wife, you loose and I get the joy of eating you, your wife and taking your son's soul," The shadow said in Kohaku's head.
IT took awhile to get this all in.
'What if I loose, get a grip of yourself Kohaku, you have to do this, not for yourself, not for your life, do it for you family,' Kohaku thought.
"I'll fight you, 5pm sharp," Kohaku said.
"Because I'm just so nice, Kohaku, I'll ware off the poison on your wife, but not fully, just a slower process besides if I win, I want to eat her fresh, 5pm sharp," The shadow said one final time.
Kohaku flew to Chihiro.
He knealed down next to Chihiro's form.
Her eyes were closed.
Her chest slightly rising and falling.
The blood coming out from the wound, seemed to stop. A small scab grew over it.
He took Chihiro in his arms and flew.
Flew to one place that he knew was safe.
One place where people would be there to help him.
To comfort him and his wife.
His family was ruined. His wife slowly dying before him. Being eaten away in front of his eyes, and there was nothing he could do about it.
His tears fell as he flew.
He landed softly on the bridge.
Slowly as he walked over the bridge, the on lookers had their mouths open.
They saw the crown that I and Chihiro wore.
After they had put a name to us. They rushed over helping as much as they could.
Kohaku shook them off.
He didn't want anybody touching Chihiro, he didn't want anything else to be worse.
You could hear the faint whispers of. 'what happened, where's their new baby,"
Kohaku just ignored them. He walked into the bath house.
A big crowd just behind him.
He stopped at the women's rooms, where Rin would be.
He knocked on the door.
His eyes never leaving Chihiro.
"Master may we help in anyway," The frog asked.
Kohaku answered his eyes never leaving Chihiro "Get the crowd away,"
The frog bowed and ushered the crowd out of the hall.
The door opened.
The only one that knew Kohaku and Chihiro so well stood there.
Her mouth opened.
A slight tear fell from her face.
She reached forward to touch Chihiro.
Hope this wasn't left at a really evil cliffy..lol..
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To be Continued.
