Hello again people, I just finished chapter 2 and from the suprising reviews (I only got 2, but I figured wouldn't ever get any, self-critisism, everyone does it...well, most people do.)
Now to do that thing where I respond to the reviewers, no matter how many there were.
Sun Kissed Rose: Yep, first one, thanks. And I only did that for fist timers to Kim Possible,I thought about it but this way seemed better. D
Chapter 2: Inside is more dangerous than it looks.
A Kim Possible Fanfic
By Jeremy Blasingame
The death ray glowed and twitched, it started making all sorts of noise when a swirling portal started to suck everyone in. Kim used her grappling hook on the far wall to keep herself from going is and grabbed Ron by the pants to keep him from being digested as well. Shego clamped a glowing claw straight into the ground but Dr. Drakken lifted off the ground from the increasingly massive gravitational forces coming out of the portal.
"Shego! Catch me!" Drakken pleaded as he went faster and faster towards the portal.
Shego lashed out in attempt to save him but missed by an inch and Drakken got sucked into the rotating hole.
"Ron! I won't let go!" she tried to say as she was steadily losing her grip, not even the great Kim Possible is perfect.
Shego turned to Kim and Ron knowing she herself was about to be pulled in. In one smooth motion she jumped and slashed at the rope, the only thing keeping Kim, Ron, and Rufus from being sucked in.
The rope snapped and everyone, as if in slow motion, hurtled toward the pulsating mass. "Hold on to me Ron!" she yelled, not wanting to be separated at any cost, knowing that when you go through a portal this usually happens.
"Rufus! KP! I don't
wanna be sucked into a portal!" he finished as they got swallowed
whole by the portal where it immediately closed as if it sensed there
were no more people in the room.
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'Huh? Where am I?'
Ron thought having no idea where he was. "Kim!" he yelled hoping
for some sort of answer, there was none, just a faint echo and some
beeps from certain objects randomly around the area. "Rufus?" he
looked down into his pocket wondering where the small rodent had
gone. 'Where AM I? I can't find anyone. What happened? Oh
yeah, we got sucked into… A DEATH RAY!' Yes, Ron and
presumably everyone else were now inside an instrument of doom.
'Better not touch anything, I don't want to accidentally fire
off the thing' he thought as he sat down on a nearby metal
object.
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Kim Possible awoke in another end of the machine and hopped up to scout to see where she was. 'Crap, I hope Ron is okay…I wonder if the communicator still works.' She thought as she pulled it out to call Wade. "Wade! Wade, can you hear me?" she sounded desperate since all she could see was a fuzzy image of the young boy.
"Kim?...can't…you…well…need…adjust…frequency…" Wade was coming in badly, 'There must be a lot of interference.' she thought.
The screen then cleared up and she was relieved to hear him loud and clear. "Kim. I lost you for a few moments there, what happened? You're frequency is so high, it's as if your and inch tall." Kim's eyes got wide because she knew exactly what Wade was talking about.
"Wade, I AM an inch tall," she started.
"What!" Wade splurted the soda he was drinking everywhere with a shocked expression on his face.
Kim continued, "Shego hit the Portal Generator with her power and it sucked us into a nearby death ray that was sitting in Drakken's lab."
"Oh boy Kim, I think you're in big trouble. The device was never tested, it was only theoretical. The exact specifications are 'It inserts you into any electronic device.' I had no idea it literally shrunk you." Wade explained.
"Wade…Ron, Shego, and Drakken got sucked in here with me as well and we've been separated," a look of worry on her face, "and I need to find them so we can stop Drakken and Shego from doing any kind of damage with this machine."
"Yeah, you should hurry too," Wade said with a look of worry on his face now.
"Why?" she furrowed her brow waiting for more bad news.
"You only have 12 hours before you aren't shrunken any more. Regaining your original size inside the ray might destroy all of you, since it's…you know, metal and you're not." Wade said typing on his computer already trying to find Ron.
"We really better hurry then, is there anything, besides waiting, I can do right now?" she asked.
"I think you should look around for shelter." He said.
"Why shelter." Her eyes widened.
Just then a surge of electricity zoomed through a power circuit overhead sending sparks down to Kim, she moved out of the way quick enough to not get burned.
"That's why," Wade answered, "Drakken or Shego must have turned the ray on somehow."
"Please hurry Wade…I
hope Ron is doing okay."
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Shego wandered around the strange areas looking for Drakken and swiping at random object in anger. 'Dammit Drakken,' she thought, 'where are you?' She swiped at a wall, unknowingly charging it with her powers sending more energy throughout the machine.
"Drakken!" she yelled, "Where the hell are you? I don't want to do this all day!...this is all your fault, why didn't you just leave the stupid thing alone…"
'Why doesn't Drakken listen to me? I have lots of great ideas, much better than his stupid crap…if I had the power I bet I could rule the world, it would take a while though.' She thought to herself before stopping suddenly.
There in front of her was a small green and black creature just standing there mumbling something under its breath.
'What the?' she thought, a bit surprised.
The creature turned instantly as if it heard her thoughts and leapt at her with a vicious grin on its face.
Shego leapt out of the way quite puzzled, this thing moved like her and seemed to know what she was going to do before she did it.
The creature shrieked some strange language and ten or so more of them came out of hiding.
Shego looked around expecting a fight, but they all just stood there gaping at Shego as if they were in love. The initial creature walked up slowly in a monkey-like way. And it did the last thing Shego was expecting.
The hideous creature
spoke, "Hail the Queen!"
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Drakken, being sucked in first was already up and trying to find a 'control center', a place where he could turn on the machine and use it's power to get him and Shego out just as Shego had gotten them inside in the first place.
"I built the thing, I should know where everything is, right?" he said to himself trying to keep from feeling too lonely. "How hard is it to find a," as he rounded a corner he saw the exact place he needed to be, "…perfect." he smiled evilly getting ready to perform his task.
All of the sudden some of the 'Shego creatures', or Shegots for short, were moving towards Drakken while he was fiddling with power conductors and small electronic ribbons.
Drakken turned around
when he heard some clatter behind him. "Who's there?" he
questioned into the empty space. 'Must have been nothing'
he thought turning back around to do more work, but instead was face
to face with a large Shegot. It picked him up, "What are you
doing?" he struggled, "Let go of me!" But it was no use; they
ran fast in the opposite direction of where Drakken wanted to be…or
was it?
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'Beep! Beep! Beepbeep!' Kim's face glowed as she picked up the communicator and turned it on. "Wade? Did you find Ron?" she said in a somewhat desperate voice.
"Kim, there's good news and bad news," he said with a look.
"Oh no," Kim almost gasped, "what happened to Ron?"
"No no Kim, Ron's fine." Kim sighed in relief, "The good news is I've found him, he's in a secluded area a few fe – well for you it's probably miles, but he's west of your position, be careful."
"Great, wait…what's the bad news?" Kim asked curiously, thinking it could only get worse.
"Well, while I was looking for Ron I found energy signals similar to Shego all around the entire machine. It must be some residue from the Shego powered portal generator hitting the ray," He said, quite sure of himself, "and the weird thing is, Shego and Drakken seem to be in the same place at a center point of the energy source."
"Thanks Wade, you really are a great help," she said as he eyed a 'No Prob' at her before closing the connection.
'Now all I have to
do is go get Ron and we can fix this mess…I'm so glad Ron is
safe.' she thought almost tearing up in happiness as she raced
off to Ron's location.
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Meanwhile, on the outside of the death ray, a confused and even smaller than usual naked mole rat was just waking up to a dozen or so of the hideous Shegots.
Wow, this is really fun, I never thought I could be this creative. XD More coming soon, I hate it when people don't update for like years (exaggeration...sometimes. ) So I'm going to try to update a much as possible. D (Also, I'm really sorry, but I use a crapload of little expressions all the time. XD D 3)
