Okay 3rd chapter! This one might be bad… but R&R telling me what you think. And I NEED 1 OC FROM 2 PEOPLE! IF NOT I WILL USE MY OWN. IF YOU SEND THEM IN (with info) THEN YOU WILL BE ABLE TO HELP ME WRITE THIS STORY!
Hope you enjoy!
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We pulled up to the hover train and got out of the sand buggy. I could feel the hot air blowing from under this air built craft. I walked over behind it and watched as the back slowly opened revealing 2 blocks attached to the wall; I was guessing those where seats. I walked on and sat down, but I jumped up after.

"Hot, hot, hot," I said looking at his seat.

"Yeah, they can get a little hot at times," said Jak sitting down.

"heh," I coughed a little while blushing.

I hid in the shadows making sure Jak and Daxter couldn't see. I could feel the craft heading towards the city of death, Haven City. The air train smelt of sweat that got molded over and the smell of blood lingered through my nose.

I sat down carefully on the floor and hugged my knees close while laying my head down onto them. I thought to myself "Maybe I should sing to take my mind off of everything?" I asked myself.

I started humming the tune and then my mouth opened as words poured out in a harmony.

Touch
I'll stand for nothing less
Or never stand again
These are the limits when one's buried
This body's left the soul
Could we have known
Never would I, helped to nail down
Careful of drifting off
Now losing taste and touch
Turning a pale blue leaning in to say
This body's left the soul
The brain needs oxygen
Can't sneak around this bait
His catacomb has got me by the chin
This body's left the soul

Could we have known
Never would I, helped to nail down
With nothing to gain
Here's the clincher, this should be you
Now saturate x4 and touch
Now saturate x3, the earth
Now saturate x3, the earth

Could we have known
Never would I, helped to nail down
With nothing to gain
Here's the clincher, this should be you

This happened to be never changing
Holding inside, the phobia of you
Made cold and crippled, ending it all

Now saturate
Now saturate
Now saturate
Now saturate, the earth

Now saturate
Now saturate
Now saturate…

And with those last words I lifted my hands to my face and let forgotten tears fall. I felt arms wrap around me as I cried for myself. I looked up and saw Jak right there with me and with a sympathetic look on his face. I wiped my tears and slightly pushed him away, so it didn't look offending.

"Thanks…" I said while looking towards to door.

"No problem," Said Jak getting up and walking back over to his seat. "You're very good at singing," he said quietly.

"You think?" I said blushing a bit.

"Well ya!" Said Daxter in his usual annoying tone.

I laughed at Daxter's sudden outburst; I was guessing he couldn't hold it in. I felt the air train stop at a halt and slowly sank to the ground. I got up and watched the door slowly open to reveal a darkened city with people and blue Krimzon guards everywhere.

"Welcome, to Haven city," Said Jak as he walked out while grabbing a zoomer and changing to the lower hover zone. I made my way over to the vehicle and jumped up, noting that I could jump higher and farther, and landed in the seat. The zoomer took off with great speed, and we were off to a place that would be my home…


It's short I know, but I had a total brain melt down. I will try to get a chapter up sooner or later, and also my other stories are on a halt because I can't think of anything to write, SO DON'T BE MAD! R&R please!