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Chapter 2, Hunters of the dark"Somebody has burgled to the school at night. Maybe you saw the robber." Answered Kiki. Sun-Li and Jin looked each other.
"Creepy." Said Sun-Li.
"It may be possible." Thought Jin.
"Do you think we have to tell to police?" Asked Kiki.
Jin smiled mysteriously. "No. We'll solve this ourselves."
In the class, teacher told about the burglary. Nothing had taken away, but all the windows had broken.
'This isn't normal. Why wouldn't robbers take anything valuable?' Thought Jin.
On the recess, all students talked about the robbery. Most of them were sure the robbers weren't normal.
"Maybe it was the ghosts." Suggested one of the boys.
"I don't believe that." Answered long hairdo girl.
"But only the windows were broken. Maybe we should ask the police..."
"Don't be silly, they're not going to investigate something like this. There's much more dangerous things going on here."
"Exactly." Said Jin, and everybody looked at him. "I'm going to come to the school tonight."
"You mean, a robber busting?" Asked small girl.
"Yeah, I want to solve this. Is anybody coming with me?"
So, at the night about fifteen students sneaked in the school. They met in the history class.
"Let's divide into groups. Three persons on the one group." Said Sun-Li.
The others agreed, and everybody divided into groups. Then they walked to different ways, searching the ghosts.
Jin was with Kiki and Sun-Li. They walked towards the hall, when suddenly they heard screaming from the direction of home economics class.
"What was that?" Yelped Kiki.
"Quickly!" Shouted Jin and started to run towards the classroom. When they arrived there, they saw three boys on the floor. There were kettles on the floor too.
"What happened?" Asked Jin.
"I don't know... we saw a shadow and then the kettles started to fly. I mean they dropped and..." One of the boys tried to tell.
"Where did it go?" Asked Sun-Li.
"Towards the biology class... where is two girl groups." Answered the boy.
"Oh no!" Shouted Kiki and they started to run towards the biology classes. They were in one of the classrooms, sneaking quietly with the torch, when suddenly a skeleton jumped from the shadows and landed onto Sun-Li.
She screamed and jumped aside, skeleton dropping to the floor.
"You okay, Li?" Asked Jin.
"It was a skeleton!" Shouted Sun-Li.
"Wait, there's something in the cupboard." Said Kiki and opened the door of cupboard. There were six very scared girls.
"We saw the robber!" One of them shouted.
"Yeah, it was going to the chemistry class!" Said another.
"Okay, you get out of here. We'll go after the ghost. And take the others with you if you see them. This is getting dangerous." Said Jin.
"Are you sure you'll bear up?" Asked one of the girls, who liked Jin too.
"We'll do our best. Besides, I'm a good fighter." Answered Jin with a big grin on his face.
The girls left, and three went to the gym.
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In the next chapter there will be some interesting things about the burglar...
