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Telling Her
Friday: Chapter 1: Something
It was tohru, kyo, and yuki's senior year and they were still at their house eating breakfast before heading to school. As they all sat around the table kyo and yuki all wondered that once everyone graduated in the spring, that maybe tohru might leave. Both yuki and kyo showed a worried expression as they ate. Tohru saw their faces and thought maybe something was wrong with the food.
"Is there anything wrong with the food?" tohru asked. "Oh...no there's nothing wrong with the food, I've just got... other things on my mind." yuki answered. "Same here." kyo managed to mumble. "Oh! I'm glad to hear that, I thought there might be something wrong with the food from the look on your faces." she said smiling. They both smiled at her and went back into thought of how if she left they would never see her sweet smile again or smell her wonderful cooking. The same look glazed over their faces almost instantly.
"Well, if we don't leave soon, well be late for school." tohru said cheerfully. "Hai." both the boys answered glumly, still entranced in the thought.
Later on their walk...
"Um Honda-san,...um were you planning on staying in the house after graduation, because I was wondering if you'd like, you could." yuki stated nervous for what answer she would give him. "I hadn't really thought about it, but..." tohru said thinking to herself. kyo and yuki both were nervous now. "I would like to stay...if it's ok with you and kyo and shigure-san, oh course." tohru finished, head down almost blushing.
"Oh course its ok. I'm glad you'll be staying, and I'm sure it will be fine with shigure." yuki answered her. Tohru smiled at them almost beaming. Kyo smiled to himself, and turned away from them. "That is if it is ok with you kyo-kun." thoru said worried, as if she expected him to say no. "Yeah, its ok." kyo answered, not turning around. tohru smiled at him," arigatou." kyo looked away and blushed. Yuki looked at them and saw what everyone already had...kyo loved tohru.
Yuki didn't want to think about it...because he realized that... he loved tohru. He was shocked that he had even thought it. But there it was, like a virus that wouldn't let go. He couldn't believe it. He loved tohru. But yet the feeling was undeniable. He loved her. "yuki-kun!" tohru called, walking away with kyo, pausing to call to yuki. Yuki paused and smiled, and then walked next to tohru smiling all the way.
(Now at their 4-D classroom)
Yuki sat there adoring tohru from his seat. His eyes were fixated on her. He could only think about tohru, not...wait what class was he in? Oh that's right he was in physics class, then remembering that he had already passed through economics and trig. class. He started to wonder,...when it was when he fell in love with her. Maybe it was when he watched her with kisa. Or maybe it was love at first sight when she came to their house to admire shigure's little figurines of the zodiac. He could defiantly tell he was head over heels in love with her kyo sat there trying to think about what formula was needed to find...oh who was he kidding?
No matter how hard he tried to stay on task, he just couldn't do it. His mind kept flashing back to tohru, her standing in the kitchen cooking, smiling to herself when she thought no one was watching. He smiled to himself thinking about her, but he quickly hid it when he saw her eyes flash towards him, and then back. He thought to himself that she was just glancing over him to get a glance of that damned rat yuki.
'Who am I kidding; I could never be good enough for tohru. She could never love a monster like me.' kyo thought to himself while staring mindlessly out of the window. tohru thought about kyo all class period, and she couldn't think that there was a logical reason besides the fact that she liked him a little bit. Well more than a little bit but she would never admit that to herself in a million years.
She tried to focus on something else like what she would make for dinner. At first she thought, 'well yuki's leeks from the base should be perfect to have for dinner, I could make a soup and we could ...wait a minute! kyo-kun doesn't like leeks, how could I forget? ahhhh, baka baka baka baka baka!!!! Ok I know what will be perfect is that I can make kyo a plate of fish instead of leeks!' 'Yes that would be perfect,...I always love making food for him special.' she thought smiling to herself looking like she had spaced out.
She noticed that kyo had glanced a few times up to catch a glance of her. 'Again, again I feel it. But, why? Could it be that I really like kyo-kun? It couldn't be, I am great friends with him and yuki-kun, how could I ever have had feelings develop for him?' she questioned herself in her mind. 'I bet he just thinks of me as a friend, he could even not like me as a friend at all.'
She was saddened at the thought of this and turned around to check the clock in the back of the room and saw yuki gazing over at her but he quickly straightened up as he saw her, and he actually looked at what his professor was writing on the board.
When she turned back around thankful to see that they were almost done with school she thought that yuki-kun must have been looking at her because he wanted to tell her something when class was done. But she had caught him glancing at her a few times since the beginning of class and decided to brush it off as if it were nothing, when in fact it really was something. oh was it something. the bell rang and each person gathered their things and walked out to the front of the building to walk home. Wow, was it going to be something. Glad you finished the first chapter!! I have no idea how long this story is going to be, but I can tell you that it's not going to be short, so tell me what you thought. I'll try to update as soon as I can, but please review, it encourages me to write faster!
Telling Her
Friday: Chapter 1: Something
It was tohru, kyo, and yuki's senior year and they were still at their house eating breakfast before heading to school. As they all sat around the table kyo and yuki all wondered that once everyone graduated in the spring, that maybe tohru might leave. Both yuki and kyo showed a worried expression as they ate. Tohru saw their faces and thought maybe something was wrong with the food.
"Is there anything wrong with the food?" tohru asked. "Oh...no there's nothing wrong with the food, I've just got... other things on my mind." yuki answered. "Same here." kyo managed to mumble. "Oh! I'm glad to hear that, I thought there might be something wrong with the food from the look on your faces." she said smiling. They both smiled at her and went back into thought of how if she left they would never see her sweet smile again or smell her wonderful cooking. The same look glazed over their faces almost instantly.
"Well, if we don't leave soon, well be late for school." tohru said cheerfully. "Hai." both the boys answered glumly, still entranced in the thought.
Later on their walk...
"Um Honda-san,...um were you planning on staying in the house after graduation, because I was wondering if you'd like, you could." yuki stated nervous for what answer she would give him. "I hadn't really thought about it, but..." tohru said thinking to herself. kyo and yuki both were nervous now. "I would like to stay...if it's ok with you and kyo and shigure-san, oh course." tohru finished, head down almost blushing.
"Oh course its ok. I'm glad you'll be staying, and I'm sure it will be fine with shigure." yuki answered her. Tohru smiled at them almost beaming. Kyo smiled to himself, and turned away from them. "That is if it is ok with you kyo-kun." thoru said worried, as if she expected him to say no. "Yeah, its ok." kyo answered, not turning around. tohru smiled at him," arigatou." kyo looked away and blushed. Yuki looked at them and saw what everyone already had...kyo loved tohru.
Yuki didn't want to think about it...because he realized that... he loved tohru. He was shocked that he had even thought it. But there it was, like a virus that wouldn't let go. He couldn't believe it. He loved tohru. But yet the feeling was undeniable. He loved her. "yuki-kun!" tohru called, walking away with kyo, pausing to call to yuki. Yuki paused and smiled, and then walked next to tohru smiling all the way.
(Now at their 4-D classroom)
Yuki sat there adoring tohru from his seat. His eyes were fixated on her. He could only think about tohru, not...wait what class was he in? Oh that's right he was in physics class, then remembering that he had already passed through economics and trig. class. He started to wonder,...when it was when he fell in love with her. Maybe it was when he watched her with kisa. Or maybe it was love at first sight when she came to their house to admire shigure's little figurines of the zodiac. He could defiantly tell he was head over heels in love with her kyo sat there trying to think about what formula was needed to find...oh who was he kidding?
No matter how hard he tried to stay on task, he just couldn't do it. His mind kept flashing back to tohru, her standing in the kitchen cooking, smiling to herself when she thought no one was watching. He smiled to himself thinking about her, but he quickly hid it when he saw her eyes flash towards him, and then back. He thought to himself that she was just glancing over him to get a glance of that damned rat yuki.
'Who am I kidding; I could never be good enough for tohru. She could never love a monster like me.' kyo thought to himself while staring mindlessly out of the window. tohru thought about kyo all class period, and she couldn't think that there was a logical reason besides the fact that she liked him a little bit. Well more than a little bit but she would never admit that to herself in a million years.
She tried to focus on something else like what she would make for dinner. At first she thought, 'well yuki's leeks from the base should be perfect to have for dinner, I could make a soup and we could ...wait a minute! kyo-kun doesn't like leeks, how could I forget? ahhhh, baka baka baka baka baka!!!! Ok I know what will be perfect is that I can make kyo a plate of fish instead of leeks!' 'Yes that would be perfect,...I always love making food for him special.' she thought smiling to herself looking like she had spaced out.
She noticed that kyo had glanced a few times up to catch a glance of her. 'Again, again I feel it. But, why? Could it be that I really like kyo-kun? It couldn't be, I am great friends with him and yuki-kun, how could I ever have had feelings develop for him?' she questioned herself in her mind. 'I bet he just thinks of me as a friend, he could even not like me as a friend at all.'
She was saddened at the thought of this and turned around to check the clock in the back of the room and saw yuki gazing over at her but he quickly straightened up as he saw her, and he actually looked at what his professor was writing on the board.
When she turned back around thankful to see that they were almost done with school she thought that yuki-kun must have been looking at her because he wanted to tell her something when class was done. But she had caught him glancing at her a few times since the beginning of class and decided to brush it off as if it were nothing, when in fact it really was something. oh was it something. the bell rang and each person gathered their things and walked out to the front of the building to walk home. Wow, was it going to be something. Glad you finished the first chapter!! I have no idea how long this story is going to be, but I can tell you that it's not going to be short, so tell me what you thought. I'll try to update as soon as I can, but please review, it encourages me to write faster!
