Disclaimer: I don't own anything! Not even KYO! turns away and cries

And yes I have read the Manga I live in Australia so I am waiting for volume number 8.

Author note: here are me reviews:

Honesty's Policy: For a first fic, I think that this is a good start. There are a lot of things you could work on, but with a little effort, this could be a really good story. Check your spelling and puncuation- you have a lot of run on sentences and missing periods and commas. You kind of go from in character (Yuki and Kyou fighting) to out of character (them hiding behind Tohru). Do a little studying of how they act when they're in a situation like you're writing about.

This is a great start and I'm sure you'll be getting better and better as you go. Best wishes with all your future writing here on this site.

Night goddess: hey good beggining! I like it so far! I have only read the manga as well i want to watch the Anime though but oh well! Update soon!

Sango Twin: ...blink...blink...strange...but I'm strange so COOL AWSOME WRITE MORE I'M HYPER BUT UR NOT SUPPOSED TO KNOW THAT tee hee BYE!

Pebbled Sky: Firstly, check your spelling. I highly doubt that you've read the manga if you cannot correctly write out "Sohma" or even "Shigure".

Secondly, Shigure, Kyo, and Yuki ARE Sohmas so you need to rethink your plot a little. Those points aside, keep trying and I'm sure you'll get better. Welcome to !


Chapter 2

Tohru was cooking in the kitchen when Kyo came flying in and crashed into her. "Kyo are you okay?" she said.

" DARMN RAT!" he yelled as he got up and ran at him swinging a punch. Yuki caught the punch and through him into the wall, everyone laughed at the cat.

"Tohru, can you hurry with the food because Ritsu is very uncomfortable and I don't want him to yell again because he hurts my ears and I have a headache" Yuki said just before Kyo went and tried to punch Yuki again this time went flying into Tohru. (gasp) Tohru went POOF! Instead of Kyo and from the smoke arose a Cat like person, it looked human but it had short orange hair with ears and a tail, she had a leather dress with boots (black of course!) and with the same colored eyes as Kyo. Kyo just stared until Tohru jumped back. She clenched her fist ready to yell.

"Kyo" she said ready to explode, everyone backed off "because this was an accident, I will forgive you. However, you Yuki on the other hand are so irresponsible that I want to kill you. Oh! Sorry I forgot to tell you who I have been possessed by guess-" she was cut off by Akito coming in.

"You know what you must do Tohru?" Akito said. Staring at her.

"Yes but may I keep the cat?" she said.

"You may" he said. She turned to them.

"Sorry guys' end of the line" she said.


Sorry guys I have an assignment to do so this chapter was short so this is Tohru Honda signing off.