Hi! this is hatori obsesser! sorry for not updating, but I sorta neglected to write anything for the past month.. I am sooo sorry! does anyone forgive me? (sad face.. teary eyed) lol anywayz no one was right! if anyone was wondering what I'm talking about.. well it's about the person who was behind Jin, Sniper and Touya! and here are the responses to the reviews:

Koluno1986- I know! as painful as it was for me to write Sniper getting hurt, it was my sworn duty as a writer! wow.. so deep! lol and no, it's not yusuke.. But.. the bright side is for trying you get a complementary Sniper plushie! yah Sniper! p.s. are you going to update Random Insanity?

quistis13- thank you! enjoy this next chappie!

MeiHikari- thank you! plz give anymore critism if need!

Sanosukes true one- shame on you for not reading my story! you're gonna make me cry! (starts to weep) and just as I said for MeiHikari, give me any critism for the story! and that goes same for Koluno1986 and quistis13.

now on with the story!

Jin: "wait what 'bout the disclaimer?"
Hatori obsesser: "damn... I always forget.. Touya you say it!"
Touya: "why do I have to say it? why not Sniper?"
Sniper: "no."
Hatori obsesser: "why not?"
Sniper: "because I don't' want to. that's why!"
Hatori obsesser and Jin starts complaining loudly...
Sniper: "so you'd shut up fine! she doesn't own Yu Yu Hakusho."
Hatori obsesser: "thank you! now as I was saying before, on with the story!"

And the stuff in the parentheses are what I'm sayin'!


(-------Flashback------)

"Bravo, bravo, nice fight." a voice from behind said.

Sniper, Jin and Touya, startled to hear a voice turned around and were shocked to see who it was.

(-------End Flashback-----)

"Sera? wha–, how? you-- are okay?" Jin stuttered as he saw the black haired girl.

"Well yeah. what the hell are you doing here?" Sera asked.

"Sera! we're here to save ya from Urameshi and that other lass! come on! let's go!" Jin said, shocked.

"No. I like it here. it's dark, dank, and uh... dirty... sorry I know that sounded lame but I had an alliteration going on. and I don't give a damn it that sounded retarded. What the hell are you doing here?" Sera shouted. ( for those of you who don't know what an alliteration is, it's like a describing sentence thing, that has three words that begin with the same letter.. for example.. the big, bossy, bratty kid is annoying.. something like that.. why am I giving a language arts lesson...? oh well..)

"You mean to tell me that we did all that work to find you, and you end up like being kidnaped?" Sniper asked.

"Why should that matter to you?" Sera asked rudely.

"Well let's see, Jin was worried out of his mind for you, we were also there to help him cope with this, and you cannot imagine what stress Jin has been under." Touya answered.

"Well whatever."

"Sera-- come on!" Jin said as he reached for Sera's arm. She quickly yanked her hand away from Jin and then her hand started to go in the form of Yusuke's Spirit Gun. She quickly shot Sniper and Touya down, but Jin dodged as soon as he saw the movements. He knew she was going to do that because with this battles with Yusuke, he had already figured it out. The Spirit Gun had knocked out Sniper and Touya into a state of unconsciousness.

"Sera! What'd you do dat for?" Jin shouted while looking at Sniper and Touya.

"Because I want to, and you're next." Sera quickly grabbed a branch that was nearby and stabbed Jin in the arm, knowing that he would be unable to attack her with his tornado fists. (NOOO! x-x) Blood was seeping through the cut that was on Jin's right arm, however it had stopped after a while. Ripping part of his shirt off to bandage his wound Sera had the chance to shoot Jin with the Spirit Gun. Though instead of doing that she quickly prepared to do the Spirit Wave. Catching Jin off guard, she quickly shot him in the back. Though he had bandaged himself, he had fell unconscious due to the Spirit Wave.

"Sera... don't do thi–" Jin pleaded but then fell unconscious. But before that he had saw Yusuke put his arm around Sera. (oh no.)

(------meanwhile back at Yusuke's and Kayko's lair thingy...-----)

Jin stirred, opening his eyes, and can see that he was tied up at the moment and ignoring the pun. He was tied to a pole, and the ropes that was binding his hands were burning his hands due the roughness of the rope and the tightness. Then next to him he could see that Sniper and Touya were waking up also.

"Where the hell am I?" Sniper asked, weary.

"I think we are in Urameshi's lair thingy." Jin replied.

"Obviously, now, where's that bitch Sera?" Sniper asked.

"I don't think that was Sera, Sniper. I think that was--" Touya started.

"Yo! you morons are already awake? huh, the drug said that it was gonna knock ya out for a couple of hours, and they weren't kidding."

"You BITCH! why the hell are we tied up?" Sniper yelled.

"What? you aren't smart enough?"

"Why don't you come over here and say it to my face!"

"You shouldn't talk to a lady like that!" a voice interrupted.

"Urameshi?" Jin said.

"yup. that's me."

"What did ya do to her?" Jin yelled.

"nothing... she's right behind you... what are you blind?"

Jin, Sniper and Touya turned around and saw Sera, just like they were, in the same position, except she was unconscious.

"Sera!" Jin shouted. Trying to break free from the ropes, but to no avail. He tried using his wind attacks but his hand was still weak from his cut when the imposter Sera attacked them.

"Now what are we going to do with them? can we burn them Yusuke? But first I want to get rid of the little bitch..." Then she removed her mask, and there standing is Kayko, with a evil smirk on her face. "surprised to see me, eh, boys?"

"Kayko!" Jin yelled.

"Can you please untie us?" Touya asked annoyed.

"Why should we? It's fun to see you struggle."

"eh... w-w-where am I?" Sera moaned.

"Sera! You're okay! right?" Jin shouted, then looked worriedly at the confused girl.

"Jin? Sniper? and Touya? why are we here? where are we?" Sera asked very weakly.

"We are in Demon World, I presume.. and I think we are in Yusuke's and Kayko's lair.." Touya answered.

"oh.." Sera replied.

BOOM, BOOM, BOOM. A thudding sound filled the room.

"So? Did you get the girl yet?" A man asked.

"Toguro? What the hell are you doing here? Oh, yeah, the offering." Yusuke said.

"Offering? What offering?" Jin asked.

"Well since your little girlfriend is going to be part of it, I guess we'll explain." Kayko retorted.

"You see, living here, you have to put up offering people and we chose to offer your girlfriend!" Yusuke answered.

"But why me?" Sera asked, worriedly.

"Because, we wanted to." Kayko replied. Tch. It's because you were such a bitch to me on my 15th birthday.

Flashback--------

Kayko's POV

It was my 15th birthday, and what seemed like a harmless prank turned out to be the most humiliating day of my life. Not to mention, that I was the laughingstock of the school year... Everyone knew that we weren't best friends, though I still invited you to my party. Even though you didn't invite me to yours.

My mom had read off the internet of how when Spanish girl's reach 15, they get this big huge party and stuff like that. And my mom was really trying to "embrace a different culture" every month... starting my birthday month... So my mom decided me to wear this white dress with laces and all that junk. (no offense to any Spanish girls!) My party was on a Saturday and it was outside, in my backyard. ( I know that in the anime/manga that Kayko or anyone else has a backyard.. but actually I haven't ever seen it... so yeah..) My dad put the sprinkler on because the grass would "have a wonderful natural feeling". Yeah, right. The backyard was decorated with all party favors, balloons, all the stuff you would have at a birthday party. I had hoped this would be the talk of the school, but my wish came true. It's like they say, 'be careful of what you wish for.' You had come along with all of your friends, laughing and whatnot. It seemed suspicious but I decided to not play detective on what should be one of the happiest days of my life. Then when everyone went to the front of the house, because there was an accident, and my mom and dad told me to stay behind. So I did. And then you know who comes? My most recent crush, Justin... sighs... I had gotten over Yusuke, but I have a feeling that I'll start liking him again... but for now I like Justin.. Yusuke has to go to one of his detective things, never telling me, what's totally happening. And he wasn't even here for my birthday... I hope he feels happy. Justin just keeps on walking up to me, slowly.

He arrives as hot as usual, and I am standing there like an idiot. I start to say 'hi' but he immediately stopped me by kissing me on the lips... "Happy birthday" he had said. while I was just standing there, afterwards I was blushing like mad... my cheeks were crimson red, my hands were all sweaty, my eyes kept on darting back and forth, from looking at Justin to looking at the grass to looking to my hands to back to Justin... and it was a vicious cycle...I must of looked like an idiot, but he just laughed. "you look ridiculous." Justin said, laughing. "oh um really?" But then I heard snickering. Behind me? And then I turn around and I see you there, video taping the whole scene. and then Justin asked, "Can I have my 500 yen please? This is soo retarded, though worth every yen."

I was shocked and dumbfounded. "Sera? what the hell is he talking about?"

Sera replied, "Well, as a part of our initiation, we have to see if you can handle the embarrassment of your birthday when we prank you."

"You bitch!" I yelled, and then I ran to my house, crying. But unfortunately, the stupid tree branch that was on the ground, tripped me, causing me to crash into the sprinkler, which made me soaking wet. And now everyone could see through my dress, which was really embarrassing and then as I stumbled I ran head faced into my birthday cake that my parents worked so hard on for the past week. As I fell to the ground, covered in cake, you were laughing your ass off. And then as I stood up, part of my dress ripped, because you stepped on it. I ran to my room, crying my eyes out, and locking the door shut. I opened my window to see what else was happening. My parents were clearing everyone out, and then I saw you and Justin standing there, whispering to one another. I don't know what you said to him, but I don't care anymore. Then after you guys left, my parents came to comfort me. Though the door had to be opened but I didn't open the door for anyone. I stayed that way for the entire weekend, planning what to do to you, and merely sulking and mourning. By the time that I finally figured it out, I figured that my birthday will be the talk of the school. I wanted my birthday to be the talk of the school, but not of something bad that happened. Something good, not bad...

When I got to school, everyone had knew about it. My former friends, the juniors, freshmen, sophomores and even the seniors that didn't know me, but now heard of the "freshman that was totally humiliated on her birthday, doomed to have the worst school life. Even the teachers knew... Then when I saw you, you were smiling as if nothing had happened. You said, "so what's up?" I just merely slapped you in the face. Thinking you deserved that, but no, I decided to stop and think of revenge.. Revenge... sweet, sweet revenge...

End Flashback----------(still Kayko's POV)

And now, 4 years later, I have finally found a way to get that said revenge. By making you go to hell. To burn for all eternity, suffering forever. How did I get to be this way? Well you should know.. you were the one who released all this anger, this hatred, hatred... against you.

( normal POV)

"hey, Kayko? you okay?" Yusuke asked.

"Yes, I'm fine." Kayko said coldly.


Hi! didja like that chapter? I had a feeling that the flashback was really emotional...and I probably made Sera sound like a bitch.. ... but that'll be explained in the next chapter! and uh... plz review! it'll make me soooooo happy! and encourage me to write some more! and I have one thing to say... to Sanosuke's true one..if she reads this ... without me forcing her to... I had a hard time writing that 'Justin' stuff... lol because IRL he's soooooooo not cute! he's ugly as hell! lol and –gasps– this was 6 pages long! That's a big feat for me! Yah! Lol byes! hatori obsesser