Just a Person

Chapter 4

By: ~uNn@mEd~

Thank you for all of those who reviewed… as for Anthony B… Thank you!!!

You made me see in a new light!!! Usually I don't write this bad!!! Look at my other fanfic 'Somebody Else'…

Anyways got suddenly a show of inspiration to write another chapter… tell me what you think of my improvement…

But be warned thanks to this improvement I might go slower on my updates… all of you have been warned…

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It was another typical day of school for this young man. Teachers, students, and bad food at the cafeteria… he was used to it all now.

The gym was packed the young man couldn't find a seat, trying his luck he tried the outside for a change…

Soujiro's P.O.V:

It was a bright spring day, I take a look around to find a good seat.

Near the cherry blossom trees I immediately took notice of her…

She was laying her back against the tree, asleep, with some of the petals falling around her, her skin glows underneath the rays of sunlight accenting her face, making her look like black-haired goddess in amidst of nature staying here in my midst…

Normal P.O.V.:

"Kirei…"

Her body then starts stutter. Soujiro then covers his mouth, an attempt not to wake up the goddess. For this was no ordinary girl, her name was Motoko Aoyama. A girl with a strong spirit, she never gives up, always putting up a tough front for everyone, making some of the girls adore her… for she thinks all men are perverts. No one even bothers standing in front of her for she was known also as a warrior, one of the best for a fact.

But he knows about her front, even though she never did show her sensitive side to him he knows about it thanks to her landlord…

Her body then starts to move again… this time her eyes also…

"Hmmm? Wha…"

"Sorry did I wake you?"

Her mind then started to go alert…

'What is he doing here?'

She then took a glance at him, he still has that smile on his face.

"What are you doing here?"

"Here? Ohhhh… Sorry is this your spot? Since there were no more seats inside I thought I should try… don't worry I'll just move…"

"No… don't… its okay you can stay."

"Are you sure?"

"Yes, it is fine by me…"

"Very well then thank you…"

Soujiro then took the seat next to her. He then took notice she wasn't eating anything.

"Where's your lunch?"

"My lunch?  I left it at home…"

Without a moment of hesitation he handed her half of his sandwich…

"Here have some…"

"Thank you…"

A moment of silence transcended with them. Motoko then started to speak up…

"Why is it that you're staying here? People will think of you weird if you start hanging around me…"

"Why should I be bothered by those remarks? I mean we are friends, are we? I think that alone explains why I'm here, as for those people, they don't know who you really are, ne?"

"Yes, thank you…"

There was another moment of silence between them. The wind started to pick up also making Motoko's hair sway in the wind…

'He's so different from other males I've encountered I wonder.'

"I was wondering what was it that you thi…"

Before she can finish her sentence the bell rang…

"They give us the shortest lunch don't they? Sorry please continue your question…"

"No it's nothing I'll just go to class now…"

'What was it she was going to ask? Hmmmm… I'll just ask her some other time…'

He then started to head for class also.

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Pretty short ei?

Anyways tell me what you think of the improvements… Your constructive criticisms really help, I really help… these things help me serve you better (even though I get nothing out of it except your reviews…)…

I really encourage you to review please…

A warning though due to those improvements I might go slower on updating so be warned…

Any ways till the next time and I think I might have a serious writer's block after this…

Ja ne!!!!